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Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 16
This Bella is starting to bother me with all her pathological running. Now, it's time for her to MAN UP!! Bring on the next chapter!
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
I think I love this Jake. He's got no delusions or alterior motives; he's just hanging with a girl. Love it
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh hell no!! Edward's is being douche-like, but I guess denial will do that to a man
Reviewer: ella72 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: apl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Epilogue
fun story i enjoyed it:) thx
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Epilogue
i loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Branin (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Epilogue
Great story, it was very well written!
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Loved it, loved it. How Bella can keep her feelings for Edward a secret so long is lost on me. I would have to risk this friendship. He's too yummy not to try. Thanks for a great story.
Reviewer: bellaedward12345 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm so glad you let them get their happy ending.
I cried so much while reading your story, but i couldn't stop reading. Really great written :)
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 02:11 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story! Ionly wonder why the chapters do not have names. I likethe fun names of chapters, and did not realize it till they were not there. How fitting for this story, huh...
Reviewer: twimom817 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a cute story! I really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: sila1075 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
good
Reviewer: ladyvamp74 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved this one so much!
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Epilogue
I absolutely adore Erin, and I'm so glad she was for Jake. They are great together. IT was such a heartbreaking road for Bella, but the emotion you conveyed was wonderful. I actually couldn't stop reading, and ended up reading the whole thing straight through. Thanks so much - I really enjoyed it!
Reviewer: stupidlamb1976 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Epilogue
Cool.I really liked the story.
Hope you write more.
Reviewer: skimmerscm (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Epilogue
nice
poor Jake always second...
Reviewer: lizann (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
Thank goodness Denseward finally figured it out! I do feel a lil bad for Jake though
Reviewer: lizann (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
I'm so sad right now. I know you do the whole angst thing but gosh this is tough
Reviewer: forever-green (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Epilogue
I've just finished reading the whole story as one... wow.
Your story had me in TEARS along with smiling like a loon! :P Your progress as a writer through the story was amazing to see and the emotions that were carried through some of the key scenes literally jumped off the page! I had a lump in my throat and tears staining my cheeks for all the heartbreaking bits!
I loved the character Erin, she brought a freshness to the whole story. Although, being Irish, some of the characterisations of her were a bit too stereotypical for my tastes. I don't know where 'fack' came from... I was trying to go through all the different Irish accents in my mind but not one matched! Where was she supposed to be from? 'Feck probably would have been better, but thats just me! Sorry, I HATE putting negative things in a review as I only review if I really like the story, but that was one thing I was really confused about!
I adore your story and am looking forward to seeing what else you've written!
x
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
awww jacob =)
tiny
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
awww bella, just tell him..=(
tiny
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Epilogue
I totally loved this story..You did an amazing job!!!
Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Epilogue
HEHEHE I LOVE THE ENDING AND THE STORY....
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Epilogue
awwwww this story was super good. You are awesome!
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 18
*sniffle sniffle* gah..I hate to see this come to an end!
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