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Reviews For New Dawn
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Mabel

  A pity you did quit this one.  Sound like a story I would follow.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Mabel

Yo got me interessted.

Reviewer: Elessae (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Mabel

I'm sorry you haven't gotten many reviews - I wonder if it is the Original Character adversion? Hmm, fandom has got some strange quirks.

Anyway, this is a very interesting premise, and your Mabel is both likable and believable so far - and definitely not shaping up to be one of those terrible Mary Sues.

Do keep writing! I am interested to see how she knows Carlisle, and how she'll play into the dynamics of our favourite vampire family.

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Mabel

Good First chapter...  I will look forward to the rest.

~Sapphire

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