Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 09:31 PM · On: With Your Permission
i love edward and alice stories,,,i always thought it would be cute if they had a little fun now and then...though they are usually interpreted as siblings maybe that is why there are no stories of them
Reviewer: NyteRock (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 09:02 AM · On: With Your Permission
You should do one from a Jasper/Bella angle. Then when they all find out about their wayward spouses, they can just laugh and joke about it instead of having blame thrown around. And it might open up interesting storylines for you later. ;) Just a thought.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:36 PM · On: With Your Permission
Oh, let it go on and sweetly!
Maybe I'm twisted, but I want all of them together, and in every combination. You picked my favorite four characters to toy with... More please!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:11 PM · On: With Your Permission
you know? the first thought I had was that jasper was off with bella. so maybe they're all swapping? in my mind, anyway, because the 4 of them together is (sometimes) hot! good writing, interesting concept. great job babes!!
Author's Response: Thanks kindly, lovey. How's the Chapter coming along?
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