oh this story just keeps getting better and better! Your AMAZING!!!

I think rachel is a fink.... She probably had something to do with the story or she knows who does. We know she knows JS

OOOH! I am SO MAD at Jack the workout guy! He totally is a SNAKE! There has to be legal action they can take! She obviously didn't know she was being taped! But that doesn't take care of her spilling the beans on the Diamond Award. HASN'T Emmett learned ANYTHING?! I'd RING HIS NECK! I know he feels like his hands are tied, but what about RIGHTS?
I love your story! I know I used lots of caps in my review, but I'm totally sucked in! I had a few chapters to catch up on, and reading the last 4 in a row really made the story come alive again. Great twist with Bella's POV thinking Edward was angry at her. He def. needs to rectify that although I understand where he is coming from. POOR ALICE!

Update soon please!

I stuck with this story since I found it a couple nights ago and now I'm all caught up! And now there is a little mystery...that has been foreshadowed all along.

So my guess for the "source" - this J.S. Abbott - is it the dude in the workout room always listening to his ipod? :)

 

Looking forward to the next chapters.!

I love your writiing but I cant stand Edward in this story. Me and several friends are routing for Jacob!!!!

Ohhh, love this chapter.  I'm so glad Edward is trying to protect Bella, even if he's kinda freaked her out in the process.  Charlie going through his stuff was hilarious.  I really like the two of them going sleuthing together - great bonding, and it is cool to see Charlie do his thing.  Poor Alice...I had wondered if she was preggers again, so sorry that this is the outcome.  Such is life, though.

Not sure how much of a help racheal will be, I never trusted her in the first place. But it's great to see more Edward and Charlie bonding, very entertaining. I like Edward again, no longer feeling the need to slap him, but really wish he had left a less cryptic message for Bella. Especially with their history of problems caused by miscomunication, you would think he had learnt that lesson by now.

Poor Alice and Jasper, are they never going to catch a break, I really hope things start looking up for them soon. '

I can't wait to see what happens next, I really want to find out more about alice, and I really want Edward and Bella in the same room together, so they can sort everything out again.

Please don't make us wait too long for the next update,

awwww
but Bella still thinks he's mad at her!!
he should've left her a message telling her he wasnt angry at her, and that he believed her or something!
haha
love it
cant wait for more
Oxo

Great chapter. I really liked EPOV. Glad he isn't mad at Bella and is trying to fix things, though he does suck at it. He's getting Bella ever more worried.

I loved the Edward/Charlie bonding time. Hope Alice recovers okay. I feel so bad for her. Another miscarriage! Hope she gets her happy ending.

Can't wait to see what Edward and Charlie can find out from Rachel. Please update soon.

Dude! I LOVE Charlie. He's a laugh riot. I so love him!

Thank goodness! i was hoping the anger from Edward wasn't really directed towards B. I love the dynamic duo working together!!!!

I'm so happy that Edward is trying to fix things, but I wish he wasn't so vague.  But he's a typical man, so I understand.

Your Charlie completely rocks!  I always felt that his character wasn't utilized well in the books.  You are doing a great job with that.

Feel for Alice.  Never miscarried, but I had a friend that did.  I had other challenges during pregnancy, but didn't end up in ICU or anything.  What is Asherman's?  Could you clarify in your next authors notes?  Thanks.

Author's Response:

Sure, I can clarify. Thanks for the suggestion.