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Reviews For Out of Her Head
Reviewer: daniellew (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 36

Oh yeah....i guessed right!!! WOOP WOOP!!

Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 36

I knew it was Jack all along! I can't believe his late wife used to teach at the school. Is there going to be an Edward/Bella reunion next chapter?



Author's Response:

The E/B reunion is coming soon. There's a lot to be resolved first.

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 36

I knew it!  I don't know if I said it at all, but I was suspecting him all along.  Loved the chapter, loved that things seem to be falling into place.  Can't wait to find more out about Jack.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 36

Holy Crow I actually started to believe all the red herrings LMAO!  I can't belive it I mean I had a feelingthe guy at the gym had a recorder and not an ipod.  I still would like to know what he has against the school taht he would do that.

Post again soon!

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 36

Ooh, there's a twist I honestly didn't see coming. I look forward to the revelations that come next.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 36

i just want alice to be ok and for everything to work out

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 36

Ver ygood, as usual!  I love the twists and turns!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 36

Good chapter.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 36

TOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 34

Thanks so much for the update. I just love this story!!!!!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 35

I haven't reviewed before because honestly I lost my internet for almost a month-le gasp!- I know! However, I adore your story. I read all the way through when I found it, and then like the faithful fanfiction addict I am I eat up each and every update asap! This story is amazing. My guess of Jess was totally wrong. I still don't think it's Josh, in fact I'm almost sure it's that weird man in the exercise room. Who else has the access to the conversation between Jess and Bella? I should have seen that earlier. Eh, well. I love how you write this story, don't worry about it. It's amazing! Hurry and get the net chappy out, I need my fix!



Author's Response:

Le gasp indeed! I don't know what I'd do without my internet for a month! Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 35

love this story =) can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 35

Oh my gosh.. poor Alice, I can't take it I hope she's ok.. I bet Bella volunteers to be a surrogate mother for them, using Alice and Jasper's "item"... that'd be the best.

Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 35

Oh my gosh.. poor Alice, I can't take it I hope she's ok.. I bet Bella volunteers to be a surrogate mother for them, using Alice and Jasper's "item"... that'd be the best.

Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 35

HURRY.. I can't take this cliffhanger...

GREAT STORY!!!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 35

Ok so I know you don't recognize me as a faithful reader and must apologize. I have wanted to comment on so many things, but knowing that the next chapter was already up I just spared us both the back tracking. Normally I do it anyway as most authors revel in the praise, but my life is such a terrible topsy turvy pit of hell at the moment, I refrained from getting too involved until I was caught up (I'm already involved in far too much) with the story. I am sad that I am catching up at the end though. I would have enjoyed being a part of the guessing and speculation. Now to my review.

I absolutely love this story. I am not really going to comment on events before this, but I know how characters can just really run away with the story, so I understand how this has happened with Alice and her current predicament. I love the way it has played out although I am intensely sad for her.

I never thought that Edward was truly mad at Bella, I knew he was about to rip those guys in the office apart, but he could have handled it more gracefully towards her (well no he as the character he is couldn't) but he should have for her sake as a woman discussing the way a man could have done something better. She needed his comfort (still does), and although he wanted to fix fix, he should have put her feelings first and at least taken a quick call to her as soon as he could, not just waited until he could stand in front of her proclaiming how he had fixed it all. Silly men. Oh well they just never learn lol. And then relying on Alice to explain....silly silly man.

I am worried how Bella will take it, she is getting her feelings hurt and letting her thoughts of how mad he is run wild. So even when she finds out the truth I think it may be hard for her to accept since what she truly needed was his love and support. Maybe Charlie will help smooth that over since he is with Edward and seeing that Edward's priority is truly for Bella's well being.

Well I think that is all. I am again sad we are nearing the end or so I think I remember from a previous Author's Note. I look forward to the next update.

Oh and PS I think it's Mr. Chatty Cathy old guy from the gym. I have always thought it would be him...maybe Jessica, but I didn't really lean towards her or the scrabble club guy....and then with the J name too...it just seems likely, and suspect, especially now that Jessica is ruled out.

Thanks

Jess 

Reviewer: Black_Bella119 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 35

Gah! You and your cryptic notes why oh why! Don't get me wrong I enjoy reading them and this story but the suspense is slowly killing me and my nails.

Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 35

I LOVE the Edward/Charlie bonding time! I like that they are working together to "avenge" Bella. And poor poor Alice.... she breaks my heart. I know you said you like to hear these things, so I have been reading your story for 3 days (about twelve hours today I think!) The only thing that sucks about reading straight through is when you get to the end and you are like...oh crap, now I have to wait for the update! Keep up the good work! Can't wait until the bad guy gets it!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 32

I loved how you threw a little nod at himym (that show rocks). Is JS Jessica? I always assumed it was a guy until Bella blabbed...

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 35

OH MY GOD I love this Story I knew Edward would'nt let BELLA down And I"M positve the writer of the article is that guy from the gym  he is a sneaky low down no good.  I started reading this story two days ago discovered it in top ten longeststories and   i just coul'nt stop reading. I really hope after you put Alice and JAsper through  so much that they too will have their happy ending I hope soon to read a next chapter on this story don't leave us hanging for to long looking forward to  Charlie and Edward investigation an Alices recovery and Bella And Edwards reconciliation  thanks for writing a great story  keep up the good work.

Reviewer: mestisa77 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

I couldn't out my laptop down for two days.  I love this story.  I can't wait to the next chapter

Reviewer: ScarlettRain (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 35

Another epic update!

I'm really glad you did the majority of this chapter in Edwards POV.

Loving your Charlie! Its great to see what kind of guy he really is.

Poor Alice and Jasper :(

Still loving this story long time, can't wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 (k)

i love the way you write your characters...jacob, there are no excuses for him being a prick. bella, independent but shy, but not totally annoying. alice-helpful but not over controlling. jessica-crazy as always. i love that your emmett is smart. most seem to portray him as the clown, but it seems they make him kind of dim. i am loving your story!

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 35

Oh my... TAPES about Bella talking. That eads me to think it's their workout buddy even more! he DID always have the "music player" with him... And he could have easily left a recording device in the area whenever he didn't show up to workout... Le sigh. :(

I love the CharliexEdward bonding as well. There's no way he'll disapprove of their marriage after this experience XD

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 34

:OOOOOOO

:OOO

:O

:O

It's not jessica, and i don't think it's Josh either, because he was an obivous candidate from the start. Who else has a J name... Jack who she and JEssica work out with? I can't think!!!!

:O

And alice! Oh no!

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