YAY! That was great! They talked, they were honest, they were considerate of each other's feelings! Whew ... what a ride! Some things that I just loved about this chapter: the way Edward proposed was so good and I could feel what he was feeling through your words; Bella's response brought tears to my eyes; the fact that he got down on one knee with the ring in front of Alice was so right - she was such a huge part of their lives and without her, I doubt that things would have worked out for them; Bella hiring the band to dance for Edward - that was so sweet and turned so funny by the fact that they were so obviously Irish, but playing Middle Eastern music. I totally loved the chapter, just like I have completely loved this entire story! I'm sorry to see it come to an end, but I'm looking forward to the epilogue and your new story! Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story!

Val

I'm really bad about leaving reviews, but just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading all of this.  So sad to see it end, but am looking forward to the epilogue. 

Thanks for sharing your story with us. =)

omg wow! wowie wowie wow! im so proud of you. this is the most epic story ever and it is my favourite. it was the one that really got me into twilight fanfiction in the first place. im sad to see it come to an end but seriously happy that it all ended well. =D i will definitely read your new story! and i hope you win some Bellies!

 

<3 lilsabeth

I loved this story and I like the ending and I look forward to reading more of your stories

I've enjoyed this story so much, and I'm sorry to see it end.  It's good that both B&E understand they have things they need to work on, and that they need to Talk To Each Other.

Your epilogue better be nice and long because you've got a lot of threads to follow up on :)

Wow!!! "THE END" it's kind of sad when a good story comes to an end.  I really enjoyed this story, you did a good job.  I will definitely check out your new story.  Good luck.

This story has been my favorite for a long time.  It's sad to see it end, but I will read it again and again.  Thank you.

SO SO SO SWEET!!!!I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES!!!!!!

i definitely liked the way you ended it, but i can't wait for the prologue....

Wonderful! Epic! Amazing! great job!!

The end?  But there's no dénouement!

OK, I HAVE TO SAY THAT THIS STORY IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. IT HAS TAKEN ME A FEW DAYS OF READING TO GET THRU IT. BUT IT WAS WELL WORTH THE TIME SPENT READING IT. I HAVE BEEN ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT MANY TIMES. THERE WERE MANY THINGS THAT I WONDERED ABOUT THAT GOT ANSWERED, BY ME READING MORE. THIS IS YOUR STORY AND I RESPECT THAT, BUT I WAS THINKING THAT MAYBE THAT SOMEWHERE IN THE STORY THAT BELLA OFFER TO ALICE AND JASPER THAT SHE CAN CARRY A BABY FOR THEM. WITH ALICE'S EGGS AND JASPERS SPERM. BUT THATS JUST A THOUGHT. I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT YOU ARE DOING A VERY GOOD JOB WITH THIS STORY. I REALLY ENJOY THE LONG LENGHTS OF THE CHAPTERS. WITH THIS LENGHT, THERE IS MORE DETAIL AND MORE HAPPENINGS IN EACH CHAPTER. I AM AT THE MOMENT READING MANY STORIES AT ONCE ON THIS SITE, AND IT IS FRUSTRATING IN A WAY TO WAIT FOR A WEEK OR LONGER SOMETIMES TO HAVE TO WAIT FOR JUST A SMALL CHAPTER THAT TELLS YOU LITTLE ABOUT WHATS GOING ON. I CANT WAIT TO READ THE UPDATES TO THIS STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!