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Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 2 (K)
This is wonderful...........i can't wait for more. Personally, I think you should post all the chapters; but I'm greedy.
Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 (K)
Can you do me a favor and change your mind about posting the chapters you've already written? LOL I'd love to find out what happens in the story. Update soon please!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting... ok... reel me in, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great writing. Enjoy third person perspective;that way we get to see what else is going on around Bella.
Nice job!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like this story... I am excited to see how Bella changes in Chicago. Keep going!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see where you take this. It's not common to have the unrequited love theme with Bella instead of Jake. Nice twist.
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story so far! I love the idea that Bella is pining after Jacob instead of the other way around. I don't like the feeling that Jacob will eventually get between Bella and her new life. That's just me though - I get hives when Jacob interferes with Bella/Edward. I really love the premise of this story and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing your talent, I look forward to more of the story!!
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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