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Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 14
I loved the chapter except I didnt like the fact that she cut her hair. Her and Edward both obviously like it long. I hope she is planning to grow it back out. I cant picture Bella with short hair. It seems wrong. Shes so feminine and timid, and classic. Short hair is more of a dominant personality like Alice. I think she should have gotten a piercing or a tattoo instead. But I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what Edwards secret is. I thought we would find out this chapter, but I guess we have to wait till next time.
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 14
When I was younger my hair was down to my butt, the first time I cut it I was in 7th grade and had decided I was ready for a change. The lady had refused to cut it until my mom went away because she was convinced I was being forced into it...I became addicted to haircuts a few years later (my sister became a hair dresser)...Sorry, felt the need to share for some reason, lol.
This was too sweet. I'm happy we're getting some action with these two. I was beyond ready for it. So Edward's planning on telling Bella bout his past? They both should if they want some sort of relationship. I have a feeling something's going to stop it and she'll find out in a bad way. Was he charged with beating Tanya? (obviously because she would have made it up, but yea). I don't know why that's the main thing that popped in my head but yea...That she accused him of beating her and after they paid her off to go away they got a restraining order against her...That's probably my overactive imagination though.
I think Bella should get her first Big O soon, lol. Keep Going!!
Reviewer: erinmiyu (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
I am a hairdresser, and a lot of people cry when they get theirs chopped! I always try to talk long-hair clients out of it before proceeding!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh that was such a great chapter.
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 14
That was wonderful as always, and such a humungous chapter like that was a real treat - thank you so much!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 14
THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!! I cannot believe bella cut her hair. At least it isn't too short. Loved the girl bonding time and my heart broke for Bella that she has never had an orgasm. Well, I think Edward will remedy that soon enough! That was an awesome date and loved how flustered Edward was when the dancer came up to him!! Loved how he couldn't help but kiss Bella at the beginning of the date! Holy Hell! talk about HOT!!!!!! The books with Alice had me laughing so hard.Especialy how Bella reacted to them. Cannot wait to find out what happened with Edward and Tanya. Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: emmabird (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hello!
First off - I've never posted a review on here before or felt particularly compelled to, but I just wanted to say how much this story ROCKS. You don't rush ahead with the plot and let everything build up which is something a lot of authors tend not to do. Works well with Edward and Bella as (for me anyway) the sexual tension is steeeeamy.
Your characters are spot on and well-rounded.
I can't wait for more so update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 14
ok, can i just talk for a second about how much i love this edward? even when he acts crazy, i think it makes me love him more. he's one of the most interesting edwards i have read by far -- and i'm sensing that this is simply the tip of the iceberg for him, haha.
also, i can't wait to finally get my rating's worth of your story. i have been waiting patiently and can't wait to be gratified :)
Author's Response: LOL. We're getting there...
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 14
I loved this chapter. There was so much going on and great story lines. Thank you for this sweet story.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
I loved this chapter. Every bit of it was awesome. I loved the girl bonding time. I can't believe Bella cut her hair. I almost cried when she cut it.
The date was really sweet, even if Bella was cold. I thought Edward was going to tell her about his past so many times in this chapter. Guess I'll just have to be patient.
Thank you for the teaser of the next chapter. Can't wait to read it. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Twiheart630 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 14
Finally!! I'd been looking forward to chapter 14 for days, and it did not disappoint! I am constantly checking for updates to this story. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work :-)
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 14
loving it.i want to know edward's story please.i also want to know what is up with jacob.update soon!
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 14
Just imagining this made me laugh,
"Bella looked through the open door of the driver's side and found her former best friend running across the parking lot with Bella's purse carefully secured underneath her arm like a football."
And I have the sad feeling that not telling Bella about his past is going to come back and bite Edward on the ass. And the same for the whole Jacob thing w/ Bella. Alice was pushing those guys at her so they could be rebounds, she wouldn't want Edward to accidently be a rebound.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more. =)
Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
i love it so far please update soon
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
That was fantastic! Loved how Emmett and Edward were rapping in his office!! Totally hilarious! glad that he took the initiative to ask Bella out! I love how he couldn't wait and asked her at the beginning of the night! The almost kiss!! AMAZING!! Cannot wait for the real one! Loved that she burned the Jake mementos!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Outtakes from Ch 12
LOVED the dates!!!!!
Reviewer: rosesoliloquy (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
Yay! Updates = happiness. I would not have let Alice burn all that stuff though xD I guess she's difficult to control though
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
I'm thoroughly enjoying the story and laughed out loud at the thought of them rapping!!! IS there a forum where I can check for updates etc??
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
Emmett and Edward rapping was the best thing I've ever read...EVER! I was cracking up. Now, I'm happy we're going to get some sort of Bella and Edward...something. Even happier Alice didn't burn Bella's poor little stuffed bunny. That would have been horrible! Don't blame Fluffernutter because Jacob sucks! Speaking of Jacob, I keep waiting for him to drive cross country to get to her and confess his love...Obviously be too late. But it would be kind of funny. Sadness for Alice...but they say that the first 3 pregnancies for a person usually don't work out. Or something like that. She shouldn't give up hope. Keep Going!!
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
Loved it. I have you know that I have a Will Smith Greatest hits that has that song on it!! :)
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
this is fantastic! hurry and post more!
Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
i really liked it. i think you did a great job with alice and bella burning her chilhood memorys of jacob and i like how you related the staory to something that has happened to people in life.
i'm hanging out on a lim. what happenes with the GROJP? how does bellas date with edward go? do they hit off? does jacob come to Cullen Academy to see why bella has been avoiding his calls? do edward and jacob meet? how will there meeting turn out?
you have left alot of my questions unanswered. i really hope that you finish up soon and post the rest of the story soon.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
Edward asked Bella out!!! finally, and more important he is being nice with her. Of course that is causing lots and lots of gossip, lets hope it doesn't get out of hand.
Poor Alice, she has a lot going on with her, and she should have told Bella before, even if Bella was sad she should have shared, that's what friends are supposed to do, no matter what is going on at that moment. I hope she tells her soon and that Bella will be there with her.
Burning all of Jacob's memories was good, but he was so much a part of her life, before she loved him, she couldn't just erase all her past, good thing Alice compromised on that.
We'll have to see what happens now, with the school gossip, and of course the big date. And lets hope no other guy calls Bella ;)
Reviewer: Laira4 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 (k)
Hi,
Just wanted to tell you that I'm loving this story. I'm only on Ch. 10 so far, but it's truly excellent. You've written the pain in the last chapter extremely well, and you're making the story progression gradual and believable. Plus, bonus points for the use of vocab words beyond a fifth grade level. "Noxious"? I had to read it twice just to make sure! Can't wait to finish.
Thanks,
Laira
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