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Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
Wow what a cliff hanger is right. Actually I am glad Bella has the balls no pun intended to ask Edward about Tanya. I hope he will not get angry with her and go off and be an asshat. Perhaps if he gets whatever is off his chest and is honest with Bella he will feel better and relax a little. Anyways I love your story and can not wait till you update. PLV
Author's Response: My use of "asshat" in chapter 16 notes was all thanks to you, btdubs.
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
I knew you were going to do that, you cocktease! I just knew it. I can't wait until next time.
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
I was SO SO excited to see that you updated today! Happy Valentine's to us! Wahoo!!
I loved Bella meeting Edward's family. Even though they had already met, it was just nice in this setting.
And cute Edward that couldn't ask her to be his girlfriend... ha ha... I love how bold Bella is getting! She's really transforming into this strong woman. Every chapter she gets a little stronger, it's perfect!
Is Edward going to freak out about Bella asking him about Tanya? I know he wants to tell her, I'm just worried about how it all will go down!
Can't wait for the next chapter, great job!
Reviewer: erinmiyu (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
ohnoez is right! i'm dying to hear about tanya myself!
Reviewer: AJRimmer (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
Wow. I'm betting that Bella's inadvertantly the leak and Jessica is evil reporter lady?
I'm excited to see what you write next!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
*jaw drops*
Looks like we're in for the big reveal from both sides. Can't wait to find out the story about the bitch.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
Guh....wet Edward....and stroking.....wow I'm a perv :-). Can't wait to find out a little more about the evil Tanya. Great chapter!
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
i can't wait for the explanation!
Reviewer: kimmasen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
WOW!!!! Nothing like getting right to the point. Love how the story is flowing so far and I love the second date. My hubby took me to a haunted house on our first date and we haven't been to one since and that was 18 years ago. LOL Keep the chapters coming PLEASE!!!!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
oooooooo..I hope its soon. I so want to find out about Tanya myself. I have been trying to figure it out for awhile now.. soon please...dont leave us hanging here
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
Ahh, evil author!!! A nice long, lemonade chapter and you leave it like that?!? GAH!
Give us more (SOON)!!!
I love how Edward was scared at the haunted house and Bella wasn't -- that was classic!
Reviewer: Deavlynn (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
You're evil! Evil I tell you!
No, not really, you're actually pretty wonderful, but I'm going to pretend to be mad at you anyway becasue I want to know what happens. :) Sigh. I want a sexy-music-teacher-Edward.
Author's Response: I want a sexy music teacher Edward too!
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 14
This chapter was amazing! I loved the date, and all the tension. Great job!
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
LOVE this chapter!
Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 14
So I've spent the whole day reading your story because it was just that wonderful. Now that I'm caught up, I know I have to wait for updates. Talk about bittersweet. I'm so glad Edward and Bella are having such great chemistry. I can't believe how mundane Bella's sex life is. I feel so bad for her not experiencing the big "O." lmao. I can't believe she is that naive. I hope Edward can show her what she's been missing. poor girl.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! And I'm glad you've been enjoying the story.
Reviewer: GreenEyedGoth (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am completely addicted to your story!! It's wellthought out, progresses naturally and the characters have drawn me right into their world. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a great story so far. Thank you for sharing your talents. I can't wait to read more. :)
Christine
Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 (k)
Hmm, are they going to see Edward play with his band? You said obvious, Edward is a pretty obvious guy, lol
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
Squeal That was hot and heavy! When I say heavy I mean heavy I could feel the tension and the pull of lust between the two! Hes using some pretty heavy thinking in this cahpter hes making her seem like a siren and he can't resist her call when i am pretty sure she thinks the same way! I am worried about Alice she really needs to open up to Bella best friends can't have secrets! I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
Post again soon!
Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 3 (K)
I thought this line was very creative,"Their lives would have meshed seamlessly, like a zipper."
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 2 (K)
I love this story even though I'm just at the beginning. It seems Jacob really misses Bella but he's covering it up by being nonchalant. Well, that's too bad. I'm rooting for Edward even though he doesn't seem particularly friendly right now. I'm so glad I have the day off. You may be hearing from me a lot.
Reviewer: americnxidiot (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 14
This was so good. I LOVE that he couldn't wait to kiss her because that's so realistic, especially given the tension that's been building. Awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Just wanted to say, I heard "Closer" on the radio today and I thought "I really miss that story You Get Me Closer To God." (Cause I think about fan fic way too much). I was so sad to see it end! But I'm happy that you're here reading my story. Ok - fangirl moment over.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Here's my prediction: one of her students is going to tell Bella the secret about Edward...I'm guessing he was accused of rape or beating his old girlfriend or something. She's going to think he didn't tell her because it's true and the miscommunication will be the issue they have to overcome. I'm hoping there are a few more twists and turn to keep it interesting. I really love the characterizations in this story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! All I'm going to say is that I hate miscommunications! That doesn't really tell you anything though. Mwhahahaha!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 14
That's it?! I'm not opposed to begging if it gets you to post soon...lol...I'm only half kidding. It's really good and I was so sad when there were no more chapters to get caught up on. Does Jacob randomly show up at the school? And if he does, does Emmett throw him out? I need more...the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: That would be pretty funny! I can just picture Emmett picking him up by the scruff of his neck and tossing him down the steps.
Reviewer: ali_vera (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love it!!!! I feel like a school girl all giggly. Yeah bella gets to be happy!
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