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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great fun sexy time...x2, actually! They finally weren't interrrupted, haha. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Rainbow Twilight (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was a great 1st chapter!!!! It made me hate Jacob though, which I don't really like doing but your descriptions were written so well that I CAN picture a Jake like that. =/ I think you established a great hook--I'm going to keep reading. :)
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yayyyyyy! E/B nookie - finally! Not that we don't love it when you make us wait for it. That was great.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
All I have to say is WOW!!!! That was hot. Great chapter. WOW LOL i think i'll have to go find my own Edward or i'll just go get my man to have some fun in the bedroom. Keep them cumming I mean coming the chapters I mean LOL
Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love this story. It's amazing. You rock!
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17
that was so good. :> :>
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 17
Oh my goodness. That was one of the best lemons I have ever read! I felt like I was experiencing an orgasm for the first time, just like Bella. Everything was very realistic. I loved their little bit of dirty talk, too. I can't wait until Edward realizes why he feels like something is missing- because he's left his heart with Bella. He even overlooked the crumbs in his car for her!
Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 17
Another great chapter...
Very nicely hot. & Realistic! I liked it a lot.
Worried about the foreshadowing/foreboding though...
They are only just getting happy...
Thanks for the great update.
Cheers
Emmy.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love this Bella and Edward! Your writing just is WOW!
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 17
Hmm, this chapter was awesome. I loved their sexy time. And honestly, who doesnt like a dirty talking Edward? But that last paragraph threw me for a loop. What is he missing? I hope Tanya isnt popping up again or something crazy like that.
Reviewer: JuicyT (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
Fantastic Chapter! Thanks
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
WOW!!That was some yummy sexin'!! LOVED it and feel like I need a cigarette!I don't even smoke!! HAHA!! WOW!! Loved how open they are with each other. I am kind of freaking out over Edward saying that he had a sense of something not being where it was supposed to be. Is it just because Bella isn't with him and he doesn't feel whole without her? Or is it like someone came into his place and took something? Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: RLC51598 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
Absolutely great!! Love the writing, the plot, everything. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love a dirty talking Edward!! More please, I love your lemon!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
Another great chapter. Glad they finally got it on!! But, what is Edward wigging out about?
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 17
Phew! Bloody hell woman that was one hell of a chapter! Excellently written - thanks so much for sharing!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 17
That was a fantastically well done sex scene. Bravo!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
Mm. Lovely. And yes, Edward will figure it out eventually what's missing - Bella.
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
Edward is a little slow on the uptake, but he will realize that it is Bella missing and he can't live without her. Loved the end of this chapter. Great job!
As always, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 17
That was great. Very very sexy, especially when he told her what he wanted to do...OMG lol
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 17
still lovin the story!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
WOOOOHOOOOOO!!!! That was a FABULOUS chapter!! I'm sooo glad they finally got to that point!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 17
oh course gotta add the cliffie at the end there...i wonder if this odd feeling will involve something to do with jacob? guess we'll see!
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 17
i wonder what is missing.update soon and keep up the good work
Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 17
i have one word for you: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxo,
Alice
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