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Reviewer: americnxidiot (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

"He couldn't think of one thing that would ever ruin this relationship. They were going to be together, forever." 

 

As much as I hope that's true it sounds awful ominous to me. And Edward's already thinking about marriage hehe. They're in love and I love that :)

Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a twist. Bella pining after Jacob. She's breaking my heart though with the unrequited love. Someone will just have to break her out of this..wonder who it could be???? Loving this. Added to favorties.

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 19

**sighs** I adore these characters.  And I'm glad for a little peace and happiness for them right now.

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 19

so...what was bella all guilty looking about in the picture room?  ...you've sparked my curiosity, haha.

also, as someone who's family is completely insane--this thanksgiving seemed fairly tame. i was assuming there'd be more crazy relatives and madnes. also, where's alice again?

that said--i looooove this story, and i can't even begin to tell you how happy it makes me when i see you've updated :)

Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 19

I love it!  Crazy relatives and all.  I love how into Bella Edward is and how he can't get enough of her.  I wouldn't be able to get enough of Edward either.  YUMMY!  I love this fic and I can't wait to see where you go from here!

Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

Awww, I loved that chapter. [it was well worth the wait]
Edward's family is hilarious! And somehow believable. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as possible, b/c I love this story and I can't get enough.
: )

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

An epic Thanksgiving -- a family get together with an SO (a first for both). Ah, the memories. Love how they almost got caught (and how evil his family is). I can imagine the ring is going to be a big sore spot when he does give it to Bella (that will make the next family get together even that much more fun!). Love to watch how they're progressing... Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 19

Gotta love the crazy relatives!  I would love to hear what Bella was up to while Edward was in the kitchen :-)

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh my gosh I just loved this chapter!!  I love all of Edwards family and it reminds me of my family when I was dating my husband....oh the amount of blushing that I did....Anyway, I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 19

LOVE this story, their relationship is just so interesting to read about and I actually like the third person point of view rather than the usual first person. ;o)

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 19

oh noooo!  it's RushWard!  great update! 

put a leash on that boy's planning urge, for me, will ya? 

xox

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 19

Fabulous as usual! Did remind me of my family though!

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 19

Alone time please more alone time!!!

Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 19

I love this story, one of my favs! Whatever happened to Jacob? Is he going to visit Bella soon??? Love the drama!

Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

*Sings at the top of my lungs*

OOOOHHHHHH

I Love this story!

I Love this story!

I LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

AND I can not wait for more!!!!!

 

I have been extrememly busy, so I APOLOGIZE for not talking in the forum lately! I promise to come by soon!

I did have one comment to make about what you wrote about too much smut. I think that you should write the story the way you think it should be written. You still advance the character and the story with each chapter, and it is like an added bonus when you put that in there. There is a fine line between just enough and too much, and I don't think that you have crossed it.

As Always I LOVED IT (Incase my song didn't tell you that!) I am still trying to figure out who the leak is...and I just can't seem to figure it out. I am also surprised that Edward didn't mention Christmas or make plans for it yet and vice versa with Bella! I mean she did already promise her dad, but she didn't say anything to Edward. How would that make Edward look if she told her dad that he could go and then he can't! First impressions are everything and if Charlie is expecting him, that might not look good. And if he DOES go! He will meet Jacob, and Bella will have alot of explaining to do to both of them....Oh the Possibilites!

Can't wait to see where you take it! And As Always! Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 19

It's great to see Edward so in love and sure about things. Having his mom's support and Emmett to tell him things in his own special way.

Also great to see Rosalie and Bella getting along so well. Rosalie helping them out preventing the family from teasing them.

It really is a big and interesting family. Of which it seems we will be seeing some more.

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great job on the chapter. I can't wait to read this from Bella's POV!

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 19

awwwww, they are soo sweet:)

Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 19

I just love this story and really look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 19

It's hard to believe they've only been together for such a short time! Beautiful chapter :)

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 19

I hope Bella is just as serious.  So sweet how Esme's little marriage comment got him to thinking.

Reviewer: AndieLand (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter - Thanksgiving with the Cullens seems like a very boisterous affair! Can't wait to see what happens next :) 

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 19

Wow...  Thinking marriage already huh?  I can see Em's point.  But, I like reading how serious Edward is about the relationship.  It is very sweet.

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter!!  His family sounds hysterical except the nasty Aunt's!  I hate when families fight over possessions like that!!  UGH!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 19

Perfect chapter!  Just the right amount of everything.  Very romantic.

The aunts are evil and hilarious.  Everyone has at least one inappropriate aunt or uncle.  Don't deny it!!  The nuts are excellent fodder for jokes.

Love that they are talking about marriage - even if it isn't to each other.  Even though he's thinking years out, I don't think he can last that long.

I sense some conflict coming up though.  Issues with the leak?  Not good.

Wonderful chapter.  Update for us soon please!  Very soon.  I love this story so much!

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