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Reviewer: allieannez (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm completely captivated and can't wait for more. Thanks for a wonderful story!
Reviewer: FraA (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
GREAT CHAPTER... GREAT STORY... GREAT AUTHOR!
What was that?....oh!! yeah... I think Jacob is aking when he gets his next POV, since after talking to Charlie he might have heard that Bella is in love...
Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh I am soo excited!!! You are my first review i have ever made and I can't get enough of this story!! So i have a few ideas of the direction this is going.... and you had to put the nail in the coffin line at the end didn't you.
I can't wait until the next instalment, that you so much for being such an easy author to read and get caught up in.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 19
I am truely frightened that Mr Jenks is going to try and pin Bella as the leak....NOOOOOOO
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
Will the alone time be coming after the gig? I can't wait to see what Edward's relatives do to poor Bella during his concert! My family was like this. My mom was the worst. She was a nurse, and so made sure we, and all our friends and significant others, knew all about STDs and pregnancy during dinners. My father was mortified! Of course, I now have that talk with my children and their friends.
Reviewer: EBennet (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
I've never reviewed before, so this is slightly momentous for me. Your story is absolutely amazing! I love it, I'm positively addicted! I loved Edward's family, because I think that anyone who comes from a large family knows that that is completely spot on. Loved this chapter and can't wait until chapter 20. Please hurry!
Reviewer: Volexisayang (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
*squeeling*
I love it. Keep it up. I love Em & Rosalie :) I love that Edward & Em actually communicate - i think that's really great. In other words i just really love your story :D
Keep up the good writing & update soon.
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
love love love love love love love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am seriously falling in love with your writing! Good job and keep it coming!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
Another great chapter. I will be glad for some alone time, but I really think that Bella needs to tell him about Jake!
Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Love the story! Update soon please!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 19
So Edward still doesn't know about Jacob... and then there is his body talking that Bella needs to learn...yeah, recipe for mess ups. Looking forward to it though. :) More please
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ahhhhhhhh!!! I can sense what is going to happen next! *eeekkkkk*
Reviewer: alicewhite3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
that's so like how it is when my bf is around my family. i feel their pain.
Reviewer: IlCantante527 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love the family. They are a bit like sharks, but whose fam isn't? Can't wait for the next installment! Please keep it coming. This story makes me happy! Thanks =)
Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is so gorgeous. I have the insight coming from Edward's view and how we are understanding his character more. Lovely job :)
Reviewer: starryeyed68 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is great! This chapter was too funny- reminding us of the crazy relatives we all have!
Can't wait to see what happens next! Bella+Edward+Alone Time= so delicious!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 19
OME!! That was fantastic! Loved getting EPOV on their relationship and the relatives were hilarious!! Cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!! Don't make me beg...grown women begging can be very nice...but come on pregnant women like me begging....it's just pathetic
Reviewer: McDoogle (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 19
mmmm turkeeeeeeey and taaaaters
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh this is sooo beautifully done!!!! you writing has me laughing and tearing up - totally immersed here!!! More PLEEEEASE!! {bowing to you}
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 19
Squeal this whole chapter was like a race to the lemon. LOL
I thought he was gonna get some inhis old childhood bedroom lmao! This was a nice meet and great easy and comfortable well for the reader anyway sorry Edward! LOL Post again soon!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 19
I. Love. Emmett. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 19
Edward is so cute. A little odd...But it's Edward and Bella. Moving fast is as IC as you can get with those two. Granted, in most situations Bella wasn't just in love with her best friend for many many years. Edward does need to use words more. He's a bit of a...guy. But a guy in a sweet way. With how he tells her so much with just his actions.
I loved Edward's family. Loved in a bad way. I just need to ask, what ring did Emmett use that the ring was reserved for Edward? That seems a little unfair...
...Have I mentioned I can't wait until Christmas?
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 19
I assume she's going home for Christmas, will Edward be willing to go with her? Will she invite him? Loved the Pumpkin pie scene. Esme is such a push over. Great chapter.
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 19
Well that wasn't to bad. I hope Edward's realtives do not start sending Bella stuff in the mail... Anyways great story... Please update soon.
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