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Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 22
Crazy Edward is quite funny. I can just picture him running around wild. If I were actually in his life, I would be quite annoyed. But reading about it just gives me this mental image of Rob running around like a lunatic yelling at everyone. Quite hilarious.
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
uh-oh... i'm just wondering what Eddie's change at dinner was.... and how they, he and bella, will deal with it all..... can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 22
I hope with all the excitement about Edward and his new opportunities, that he and Bella remember to focus on their relationship too...I'd like to see them planning JOINTLY...not as an afterthought.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22
Looks like Bella and Edward have some decisions to make. And Edward had better start sucking it up and talking to her instead of cutting her off. Communication is not his strong point.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 22
OH MY GOSH! I hate story lines that have the potential of separating Bella and Edward! They make me so jumpy! I feel so bad for Alice and Jasper. I hope their situation improves!
BTW: Love the new banner!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oh no! I'm really hoping that Bella and Edward can work out what's happening between them. They do need to talk about it, and soon. Thanks for the Muse suggestion, as well. I just got this album, and I hadn't listened to that song yet. You're right; it does fit! Not sure what's going on with Shakes and Carrie...maybe just angry because Edward's head isn't quite in the game?
Poor Alice. I can't speak to the endometriosis, but I did have a miscarriage several years ago. This said it perfectly:
****It was like a death in the family, but without a body to bury or mourn. ****
You did a great job with this part, and thanks for showing that it's not easy, and it's not fixed overnight (if at all).
Thanks for posting!
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 22
That's too funny about your friend :P
I'm glad that Edward was able to pull himself together, at least somewhat. Bella's thoughts about male PMS were funny :)
Poor Alice :( I feel so bad for her :(
Muse = Win
I'd write more but my keyboard is mucked up tonight..
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
You've captured Bella's selfless side very well in this chapter. Her willingness to try to pull Edward out of jerk mode and to be supportive of Alice shows how much she cares about those in her life. It's also interesting with the 'what about Bella' comments she has in her internal monologue - we all have moments like that, and it makes her seem much more human to have her selfish moments as well. I look forward to seeing how she takes the news about the European tour and how everything works out for Alice and Jasper.
Reviewer: pseudocullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
well written and a web-page turner. *ugh* i can't seem to stop reading this! hehehe... spent the better part of the day reading this story. can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: lustie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 21
wow rite more soon this story is absoutly amazing
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
Aww I'm glad they worked out their problems. :)
*sigh* guys aren't always assholes after all.....there's hope :)
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 21
Yay! I'm so glad they worked through that and had hotr makeup sex. And I find it so funny that Edward (along with any other man hahaha) is so turned on by gals masturbating... I mean, I thinnk it's sexy when guy does it sometimes, but guys always g so overboard in their enthusiasm about it lol
I look forward to seeing them in Forks for Christmas and meeting Jacob!!!! :D
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 20
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On to the next chapter I go
Reviewer: Soccermom (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 21
Wonderful chapter. The sex scenes are incredible.
Reviewer: Soccermom (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 17
Damn and what love you gave. That was a beautiful love scene and I hope you are proud of it. Excellent
Reviewer: lions_lamb_4ever (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 21
I loved this chapter! It was great writing
Reviewer: crystal calla (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 21
i cant wait to read more... im intrigued
Reviewer: Soccermom (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
ugh, just a cliffe I was going to bed to finish this tomorrow but now, I have to stay up and read more.
Reviewer: alex2sweet (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 21
i love it i love it i love it
so much!
more ... pretty please?
:)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 21
I thought you handled that well. I didn't think he should be upset about Jake, just that Bella had omitted his entire existence. Great job. :)
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 21
I don't think Edward was too hard on her. I'm relieved he didn't totally freak out and run away.The make-up sex was hot! Excellent job! I love that Edward kept their phones put away for the whole weekend! The ending was so sweet - knowing that they loved each other even more! I am really looking forward to whatever happens when Jacob comes back into the picture!
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 21
I just read this whole story and loved it. Can't wait for more. Update soon!!!
Reviewer: kathi (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter.Wonder,what will happen in Forks and how a conversation with Jacob will end?You are a great writer!!!
Reviewer: Soccermom (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 (K)
interesting, lets see what happens next>
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
It's actually a line from a comedienne named Monique Marvez. I highly recommend her. She's awesome.
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