Love your writing Can't wait for more. It is such a powerful story. I am foaming at the mouth for the next chapter. I just wish I could write like you.

I adore Emmett as the school principal!  I've never envisioned him in that particular line of work, but well, it works for him!  I can see that with his personality he would motivate his staff and be able to be friend and mentor to the students of the school.  Brillant choice!  (I think most people would have put Edward as the principal...but this is fantastic.)

I'm looking forward to reading more!

I wish you knew how much I adore "butterflies and hurricanes" the piano solo is incredible. 

Poor Alice. My best friend is going through the same thing right now, and it always brings tears to my eyes. 

Edward will figure himself out. Bella isn't pushing him, which is good. 

Loved the chapter!

I can't say enough how incredibly sexy Edward's musicianship is.  I love that you're having him move seriously into a musical career-- it's very Edward, and it's just so sexy.  And, I really like the conflict this brings up in B/E's relationship.  It's not just a simple argument that they'll fix with make-up sex.  THere's no easy anwser here, just like it'd be in real life.  I really look forward to seeing how they work through this.  And I love knowing that you'll be throwing us lots of chapters this week!

Blue, I'm always more than a little sad when I get to the end of one of your chapters, because all I want is MORE! Sigh. I'm really happy for E, I'm glad B was able to see his funk for what it is, but now I'm all worried about their impending separation. But I know that Forks is up first, so I will focus on that. I had almost forgotten about little Alice, since we've been lemoning out with B+E, so thanks for bringing her back in, even if it was very sad.

BTW, "Butterflies and Hurricanes" is one of my fave Muse songs...good choice!  Now get cracking on the next chapter, STAT! PLEEEEEEASE?!

Poor Alice.   Bella should be a surrogate mother for Jasper and ALice.  That would be amusing to see unfold...it could lead to a whole new fetish for Edward. lol 

 

I love this story.  Can't wait to find out what happens.

OMG!! LOVED it!! Bella's response that she felt like she was dating a girl was hilarious. Poor Edward!  He is really stressing over his relationship with Bella. Does he not think they will survive the separation? I know he is having a difficult time being apart from her. I hope he can get his shit together, before he starts being an ass to Bella. I hope he tells her his fears about what will happen to their relationship when he is gone all the time for his career. I was waiting for the bitchy Carrie to say something to Bella about the tour.  I thought oh no!! There is going to be an argument between them because he didn't tell her! GAH!!Why was Carrie acting like that towards Bella? Who the hell wants to hear about all of your boyfriends ex girlfriends and hook ups? She is wicked to do that! i am proud of Bella that she didn't give carrie the reaction she wanted!! Poor Alice! I hope things work out for her. So glad that Bella was able to be there for her and that Alice finally felt comfortable enough to tell her about her miscarriage and endometriosis. GREAT JOB and I look forward to more!!

(That fanfiction story with your friend was very funny. Thank you for sharing, made me giggle)

I love Edward in this. How he just can't really control all his moodiness...And there is a whole lot of moodiness. But he tries which is pretty adorable. Especially with the roses and all that good stuff. This is going to complicate things...Always something with these two. Bella can be patient and all, but that's some patience. Especially if he's famous...I hope he gets used to the idea that it won't be all niceness. He'll need to say goodbye to any traces of his personal life...again.

And poor Alice. Can't they adopt? I know it's all really important for many to have their own, but still, they can have children the other way. Keep Going!!

...maybe he will make enough $$ to support them both...?  Knowing those two, though, they will probably "try to do what's best for the other" while sacrificing themselves only to suffer the whole time.  Hopefully they can figure this out.  I'm pulling for them.  Oh, and poor, poor Alice.  Maybe they can adopt...

Poor Alice. 

I have endo.  It''s a life sucking, painful bitch.  You wrote it beautifully.

Luv this, but something seemed slightly off with this chapter, still luv it tho

Dont shut her out from Edward. He is an internal kind of guy, but dang it, even he sees the error of those ways. Just kidding, your story, I was just yelling at him like I would someone I know. I am really glad Alice is opening up to Bella. This is definately a private husband/wife issue, but Jasper is a guy, and Alice needs her girls! So looking forward to Forks, and what will happen when Edward meets everyone! Yes everyone!!!