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Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 27
Thank god..its all getting better :)
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 25
gosh im just praying for a christmas miracle in the form of Edward showing up...*crosses fingers*
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 24
ug still sick..and god now she has to tell edward. I hate jacob lol
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 23
ok thiks chapter honestly made me sick to my stomach..like I was the one getting somewhat broken up with..and then Jacob...UGGG. I'm going to get the klenex and cry a little over this chapter and then hopefully move on to happier times in the next chapter LOL
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
wow...its all going too good...I sense pain coming..although I'm perfectly happy for it to be lemony fluff from here on out LOL
Reviewer: Shoean (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 8 (k)
great story so far, I love the fact that you make it so hard for them to get together and keep some mystery around edward as well. good times are fun but it's nice to read something more "realistic" ^^
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
OMG just enough lemon juice to sting LOL...whew.
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 14
ouch...that was HOT
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
i laughed so freakin hard i had tears running down my cheeks...thank you for making my night LOL I just have this image of RPatz made up like Edward beatboxing too cute!
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 6 (K)
silly bella...she should have taken edward for a ride..i mean taken him up on the offer for a ride ;)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Epilogue
Awesome. Just discovered this story and have truly enjoyed it. It has made me laugh especially with Emmett. It has made me cry a lot due to Bella and Alice. Even anger for the miscommunication between Edward and Bella. But appears it all has a happily ever after. That has always been my favorite ending for any story. Great idea and told excellently. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Goeie_Schaduwmeisje (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Epilogue
i'm gonna say it again; great story! I like how other people use no bad times at all in the stories, but I love it all the way more when they are there. please continue writhing stories. i'm just so impressed by yours.
good work!
greets SM
Reviewer: samii (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 37
I FUCKING KNEW IT!!!!!!
Reviewer: samii (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 34
ITS THAT JACK GUY AT THE GYM!!! I KNOW IT HE OVERHEARD HER SPEAKING TO JESSICA
Reviewer: nowayjose (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 32
duuuude, did you really have to make bella spill the beans? granted there are no vampires in this story, but we all know she can keep a secret.... ugh.
Reviewer: Goeie_Schaduwmeisje (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 12
hey Blue 25,
So I am reading your story, and I'm now at the outtakes from chap 12. and I have to compliment you with the perspective you're using. I found it really difficult to write a story with the 'all-knowing-perspective', but the way you're using it, makes it look so easy!
And then there's something I wanted to say something 'bout the outtakes from chap 12. 'cause in the beginning of that, you change perspectives. I don't know if you did that on purpose, but y'know, it's really rare to do such a thing. you know why's that? A good story used to be nice to read, and a unexpectant perspective change can really affect that (in a bad way).
just keep thinking of that, please...
but that's all. The rest of the story's really nice to read, nice descriptions, conversational writing is not bad at all...
Keep writing! I really like your pen (or computer XD)
greets
SM
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 32
Oh no! I cant believe Bella spilled in the award to Jessica... WITH JACK IN THE ROOM AS WELL!!!! I hope this does not come back to bite her! How horrible would that be if it got out and Emmett was forced yet again to publicly fire someone close to the family! And what will Edward think.... This could ruin him and Bella.
Ok, I have to stop.... I do remember you saying that B&E have their happy ending...
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 23
So I just started reading a few days ago and I must say.... this chapter had me in tears and boiling mad! LOL I was so looking forward to reading the way jacobs face would have looked when Bella showed with Edward! Arrghhh! Dont get me wrong Im all TEAM EDWARD all the way but at this moment i just want to kick him! I really hope there is some serious ass kissin on his part coming up....
Asshole Edward= Not Hot!
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 38
I have read TONS of fanfiction in the past month, but this is the BEST!!!!! A truly GREAT story!
Author's Response: Wow - thanks!
Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story... it took me three days to read it but, im glad i read this story!! i hope to be able to read your later stories.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: bribri (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 9 (k)
your such a good writer! i was crying during this chapter :( alice is such a good friend, my heart goes out to her for the misscarriage
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Epilogue
I found this story while searching for something that was completed. I was on vacation and was getting perturbed that my favorite stories were not being updated with the rapidity I would have preferred. I immediately loved your story for many reasons. It was nice to see a AU-Human story with the guts to make Edward not perfect but not a complete jerk. I know you put in a ton of work and I just wanted you to know it was appreciated.
Thanks.
--dh_director
Author's Response: Thank you! Your comments are appreciated as well.
Reviewer: quicksilvermad (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Epilogue
ABSOLUTELY TOPS! I read through this (in a few sittings—this is not just fic, it's EPIC!FIC) after finally rediscovering my secret love for Twilight with the works on this site. Instead of finding the same nonsense that's all over the internet, I found work that can be considered of literary caliber.
"Out of Her Head" is certainly long, but excellent as well. A lot of times I find that the longer a fic is, the more the author gets stuck (speaking mainly for myself here) and things get abandoned or previous plot points get ignored.
You've written a masterpiece. With twists and turns—sexy moments and laugh out loud or cry moments... Moments that kept me rapt with attention and actually thinking. I had an inkling early on about who J.S. might be as I was suspicious of iPod Man, but then you planted that seed of doubt with Jessica and it was so perfect.
Thank you, really, for taking the time to sit down and write this journey for others to enjoy.
P.S.
Edward being terrified and screaming at one of those cheesy haunted houses while Bella looks on and tries not to laugh at him is an image that will forever remain in my head and give me cause to laugh randomly to myself when my brain cycles through stuff. Again, Thank you!
Author's Response: I think you're my new best friend. Thanks for the awesome comments! Even though this story has been completed for a while now I still appreciate readers finding it and enjoying it.
Reviewer: Luv_Twilight (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved that. So much. Sincerely. I really wish that you would make a sequel, but I understand that there isn't much anymore to write about.But this one was ABSOLUTELY MINDBLOWING!! I hope you get another great story going, which I know you will, and everyone will adore it, just like they loved Out of Her Head. Thank you very much for writing this and sharing it with all of us. Wish you luck with everything in the future,
Luv_Twilight
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: greta (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
And I'm up in chapter 18. The ending is really lovely. You're good. I like you
Author's Response: Thanks! I like you too.
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