I love Jake but he's a mess! lol! How he's gonna treat her the way he did b4 & then try 2 throw himself on her like that?? Hes so silly .... Charlie made me laugh though! sending jake to pick them up at the airport cuz he thought edward would be there.lol......  & edward .... man I can't even start on him, he's so frustrating. lol. can't wait for the next chapter =)

I loved this! Jacob is FINALLY figuring out what he has lost! You did a wonderful job getting into his head. Loved it, loved it, loved it!!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! i've been reading this story since yesterday, staying up almost all night before finally giving in to my heavy eyes, and have been taking for granted the fact that i could always click next after every chapter, and now, the moment i've been dreading, there is no next!!!!!! :( :( :(

haha,, its an awesome story that i'm officially addicted to! more! more! more! update, update, update!!!!   soooooooooonn!!!!!  please???   =D

cant wait for the next chapterr!!!!!

You know, I think for once Bella and Jacob should have a chance.  I love Edward and all but I think that he is being a jerk in this story, Jacob has shown some redeeming qualities...

Okay so I definately didn't like the idea of the chapter being in Jacob's pov at first, but you totally made up for it with all the drama that went down between the two of them. I also thought it was awesome how you had Charlie send Jacob becuase Bella had a "surprise" for him. You go Charlie! Put him in his place! Anyway... awesome job and update soon please!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO u cant leave it like that!!!! U tease!!! lol i made a review around ch 15 now im finished...and im hungry for more...

PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!!! cant wait to see what hapens next...

The suspense is killing me!!!!!

Btw LOVE Alice always have too bad what she's going through thoug,hope it all works out in the end.

And as always keep up the good writing u r doing great!!!!

Ugh!  A Jacob kiss!  I hope Edward figures out that he's been a jerk and flies out to Forks.  I hope he misses Bella and figures out that he's about to lose her.  Though I can't stand Jacob at all, you wrote him well.

IM SO MAD AT JACOB but the story is awesome cant wait to read the next chapter

Jacob's acting like a stupid hormonal boy. At least she stopped herself from going any further with him.... even if at the time it felt good.

I hope that Edward gets what ever crawled up his butt removed and flys his arse out to see her.  Ether that or starts apologizing every time he talkes to her.  These men do not think before acting... even when they think they are thinking...

Oh goodness! So many thoughts! (Great chapter even if i am throwing a shoe at you right now!) First and foremost, dang it Edward, couldn't you as any normal jealous boyfriend have thought that this was a major possibility and got your head out of your rear and at least went for a few days?!!!? Stupid idiot! I am not sure why Jacob suddenly noticed Bella,but that happens when you don't see people. You realize the things you miss. Hats off to Charlie. I love his intended bucket of ice water to Jacobs face. If Edward was not stupid it would have worked! (Although I suspect Jacob would have thought he needed to work faster and harder to secure Bella's attention) I hope right now on the phone Bella slips in who picked her up and lets E think on that one, or in the very least calls Alice with her "oh god what do I do now" panic as most girlfriends would. Please Edward get on a plane and go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (That is to E not you, I do not suggest story line changes, but would be super excited if that is where you have plans to go!)

I gotta tell ya, I almost walked away when I read that this was gonna be in Jacob's POV. And when you wrote in your AN "whatever happens in the next few chapters, just remember that B&E end up together in the end" I very nearly screamed at my screen "thatdon'tmeanshitifshebecomesthefcuktoyofthatwalkingSTDJacob!". I had my mouse literally hovering over the x button to close the tab in my browser, I was that close.

But just like a heroin addict, I couldn't help myself and read it anyway.

And...

three hours later here I am giving my review.

Yes. I was that mad.

Mad at Jacob for being such a sleazy mo'fo that he'd dare to kiss and try and get Bella in his bed even though he knew she had a bf. (And for generally being an all-round sex fiend)

Mad at Bella for allowing the kisses to happen and not kneeing Jacob in the balls while she had the chance. (Although I know she's still f'ed up about the the whole Douchward situation, so my degree of madness at her isn't as severe).

Still mad at Douchward cos he should have been there to put his hand on her ass while Jacob was checking it out. He should have been the one to have his tongue in her mouth at the garage. He should have met Charlie at his professionally cleaned house. And he should have been there so he and a screaming-her-head-off Bella could get caught having hot lunchtime nookie by Jacob.

A big hurray for Charlie for finally sticking up for Bella.

Your story's still awesome but let's not revisit Jacob's head again cos it makes me feel dirty and in need of a shower.

ahhhh jacobs thoughts are sooo frustrating!!!

i never feel like i should take them at face value. its always 'okay so whats a REASONABLE response to this situtation?' like bella being aroused by him? pshhhhh im in total denial. hes just an idiot who misread her blush. i loveee that charlie ment to have jacob meet edward. i hate that edward wasnt there to make him insanly jealous. but mostly i hate that jacob only gets to see bella and edwards relationship when its SERIOUSLY lacking rather than when shes insanly happy. ughhh its really frustratingg

mostly, i just LOVE your fic and cant wait for the next update(:

Okay..I know cliffhangers and plot twists are a writer's bread and butter...but I have to say this ~

I really have loved this story. I loved it when Bella finally got that backbone and decided that she was over Jacob. I loved the way she moved on and fell in love and I can even hang with the relationship struggles with Edward.  But I'm begging you....PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE do not let this story head off to "now Jacob decides that he wants Bella, and because she's upset and hurt by Edward she gets confused and feelings are rekindled" land.  Because that would make me very stressed and I need this wonderful story to help me escape from my OWN messes.  I swear if she ends up in any kind of relationship with Jacob it's gonna ruin this story for me. DON'T GO THERE...PLEASE!

Thanks for letting me share my angst and letting me vent.  I look forward to what comes next.