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Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 28
Would it be one Miss Jessica Stanley, who's sneaking in Bella's apartment while she's supposedly out of town?? J.S. was apparently going for a tete-tete right? That sounds like that ho-bag.
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 28
While I've thought Jessica was a little odd from the beginning, I think she's the obvious guess for J.S. So, I'm going to guess that it's James. Of course you could be making Jessica obviously odd for a reason!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 28
Wow! That was a good lemony chapter! So...what will he do with the pie? Food on body...anyone?
Reviewer: Dreamcatcher91786 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just finished reading all the previous chapters and the whole story is...AWESOME!! I love the relationship between all the characters, and your style of writing captivates me! Only thing that bothers me is that Edward's a bit of a hypocrite which I'm glad Jacob pointed it out.
Also my first guess on who J.S was that is is Jessica, but then that's a bit too obvious. Can't wait for the next chapter =)
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28
I'm in love with you for writing this. It's fabulous. It's taken me three/four days to read through it, but oh dear, it's GREAT. Yay happy sex!
Reviewer: wanderingstill (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 28
Is J.S. Jessica Stanley, perhaps?
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 28
LOVEd it! That was one hell of a lemon! On the kitchen table no doubt!!! Cannot wait for mroe!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 28
Great chapter!! I think JS is the guy that plays Scrabble with Bella or maybe it's James? Hmmm...can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: angelvamp (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 28
I don't think it's Jessica. Too obvious. Maybe that guy that's always in the gym when she and Jess work out? Has he been eavesdropping this whole time? I don't know, but I think that the J is JS is for James.
Reviewer: Hollie_x3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 28
I have an idea what he could do with the pie...think American Pie...;D
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 28
Lol...could he be from Spider man??
I dunn...it's late and my brain isn't working at the moment.
B.Q.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 28
Whoohoo, they are starting back on the right foot. Hopefully, things will continue to go well from here on. But I know the upcoming tour is going to be a hard spot for the 2 of them.
Keep up the great work, we don't mind waiting a spell between chapters. :)
Reviewer: Story_Unfolding (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 28
Jessica Stanley. Liked the chapter! Keep 'em coming! :)
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 28
We haven't heard from a James yet....could he be behind J.S? Loved the chapter. Welcome back.
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 28
its jessica... I know it is
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 28
i've got a bad feeling jessica is evil - i felt that from the beginning!
Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 28
is JS Jessica?? that would be cool if she was playing bella for info i might be wrong thow anyways good chapter look forwared to the next
amy
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 28
JS has to be Jessica Stanley right? I mean she just revealed she was a writer eh? oooh or maybe that was too obvious....no i'm pretty sure it's Jessica...yep...oh i'm not sure! lol...nope it's Jessica....? =)
Great great chappie, awesome peachy lemon!
Melsie
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 28
I just read this whole story, and I LOVE it! I can't wait for more.
Is JS the supposedly-innocent Joshua the obituary writer?
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 28
i thiink it is Jessica Stanley???????? i want alice and jasper to get a baby!! that situation makes me sad:( how often are you going to update? love this chapter how he takes her on the table. awesome
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 28
what a yummy reunion.
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 28
Well i think i need a cold shower now
lol
Reviewer: amystewart72 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 28
I think JS is Jessica Stanley! I've been suspicous of her from the beginning of their relationship. Poor Bella. She's being played by Jessica, and it's going to really hurt when everything comes out.
Thanks for the lemon...we needed that!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 28
Jessica's got to be the leak-maybe she put a bug in Bella's apartment?? She is a shallow, sneaky bitch who flirted with Edward in bella's presence, after all. And why didn't the oven heat up? Is there a bug in there???
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 28
I love this story, I can't wait for the update to see who J.S. is. I know I should know but I don't I guess I'll just be surprised.
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