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Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
OMG!!!! for real!! ??? this was uhhhh...uh-hum- sexy...!! lol
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow!! nice!! very sexy
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
Men are strange and fickle creatures. He probably had gas." that is about the best line!! I love and yes I LOVE the fresh prince of belair, we were rolling!!!
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 10 (k)
"That's because I have you trained. You're like a crack ninja team member. You're my number two in case I fall behind" !!!!! my all time favorite line!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 (k)
sniff.....that was great, peolpe at work think that I am crazy, crying at work!!! lol
Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
Awwwwwwwww.....I love it...girl you've got me sitting at the pc when I have to be at work in an hour...great great work chica :D
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 (K)
This is a great start!! I love it!!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Epilogue
She'd unfortunately discovered during their five years of marriage that Edward would spend half the day locked in the music room and the other half in front of the video game system if she let him.
ha ha ha welcome to the real world Bella!! that's a man thing. In my husban'd case its half the day in the garage or under a car and the other half in front of the computer screen...
Love the ending and the concept that while they are happy life is an imperfect thing, she lost her dream job, gave up a career for her kids, the children can be a handlful (normal!) etc etc although sad, i also liked the compomise Alice and Jasper had to make to get a baby too- life rarely hands out everything you want. It was a great REALISTIC conclusion. Thanks EVER SO for the story! You rock!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I've enjoyed experiencing the story again through your comments.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 38
owwwww that's a wonderful ending, I loved it. Thanks so much you are very talente at putting the whole plot together, looking forward to the epi to see how alice gets along...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 37
Emmett, Charlie and Edward - what a SWAT team!!! Love their colourful language!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 35
Charlie and Edward are great together in this chapter - like Starsky and Hutch!, I KNEW Edward would totally support Bella, as she faces the same situation he had 2 years ago. YAY, but I am sorry Bella thinks otherwise....
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 34
oh wow, the drama! love seeing charlie in control of the situation, youve made him a strog character and he is a police chief -so its great. I don't believe Edward is so easily swayed to believe the story against Bella ...and surely Carlisle, the board and Emmett have learnt a lesson from the false accusations of Edward and all it did to their family? yeah, right...? ahhhhhhhh
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 32
are the flowers NOT from Edwrad?
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 30
Shite, Edward's scrapbooking? Emmett should be told about this... Girlward definitely.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 29
OK someones going to leak some gossip about Edward, I am wondering if its Josh (too obvious?) or Jack?....no sure but have a feeling Bella will get the blame. Trouble brewing in paradise.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 28
OK greatest chapter ever?.....mmm yeah I'll go with that...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 27
This was another stunning chapter, things are really moving along. Jake and Edward interactions are really tense and emotional, Jake's really looking out for Bella...as the friend he's always been. I think E can see that. I like how they take Charlie back with them, its a good idea....oh and I liked the hicky! Sexward is so damn hot, I don't know how they are resisting doin it in Forks.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 26
"Black"... "Cullen" aha they finally meet and it was awesome. Hope Edward can pull himself together, Bella has really grown up and isn't tolerating any more of his moody crap - way to go Bella.
All those cookies...mmm I'm having WIDE AWAKE flashbacks. We just need to get some more unicorns happening...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 23
oh wow, that was so unexpected! Bella goes back to Forks to face Jacob, with her relationship with Edward uncertain...really interesting twist. I'm surprised Edward didn't think about how this may play out... I can't wait to see it also. Has Jacob come to realise his feelings for Bella and does she need a shoulder to cry on? I kinda hope so. Jerkward deserves a bit of healthy competition to wake him up.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 21
great argument and makeup lemons...Its a great story. Looking forward to Christmas, its going to be very interesting...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 20
backstage scene very very hot thanks. ahhhhh jacob....start talking Bella...
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 10 (k)
Thats okay! at least you learned your grammer lesson for the day. I was out on Fan Fiction.net for the first time two days ago and clicked on a story that sounded good. I couldn't get through the first chapter. I stopped reading the story and came back to Twilighted and bingo found your story to read. The other was hideous!!!! Have you ever "smelt" anything?? I've smelled something before but apparently the author over there was focused on how Edward "smelt" Bella (I think 7 or 8 times actually). After that I just couldn't wait for a 9th.
Anyway, my point is thank you for paying attention in 5th grade language arts class and for knowing when to learn what you may have forgotten.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 18
...the sexiest man alive moments away from exercising his oral privileges upon her person.....
jesus this is SO hot, you are giving me 'O's ... 3 a day...oh, man....(deep breath) but I have some concerns Bella'll be outed as the newspaper leak...bring on a Jacob vs Edward bitchfight! yeeehaa
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 17
mmmmm very nice lemons..I think i need a cold shower... (cough cough...)...
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 16
This is all great. Tanya stroy worth the wait - not what I guessed. but what is it with Edward and his big white bathroom?...
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