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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 30
heh, someone's fishing. Good chapter. No outtake, please:)
Reviewer: sessi_pattinson09 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
This story is AMAZING im always craving for more and more
PLEASE SEND ME THE OUTTAKE I want Edward in the bathtub
Reviewer: HEAR (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 30
I have been warned... I like my lemons... Here's my review: "Great chapter!"
Now may I have my outtake please? Thank you.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 30
Please send me the outtake!
And I live in a highrise in Chicago, right on the north end of Grant Park. I KNOW pizza. ;) When we order pizza, it is always Lou Malnati's Butter Crust Deep Dish, or Pizano's thin crust. Jusy adding my 2cents about the best pizza in the city. Giordano's Deep Dish is good too, but can be too drippy. Lou's you can hold with your hands.
Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 30
Rachel is definitely bad news, duh! I hope Edward can be strong enough to handle whatever she ends up writing about. Outtake please? Lemony goodness right here!
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 30
I'm going to miss Edward sooo much during February - but distance can lead to phone sex, right? Thank you for leaving Jacob behind again. Let me guess about JS, are they the initials for Rachel's byline/gossip column alias?
Reviewer: HEAR (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 29
Ok.. Now I'm confused... last chapter, I totally thought JS was Jessica Stanley but now you've gone and thrown a Jack in there (Josh is too obvious) and I always new the otherwise nameless "Jack" had some role to play since you've brought him up ever since the first workout... hmm... I guess now, I'm putting my money on Jack and giving Jessica a pass...
BTW, I am from Chicago and you are right.. Giordano's IS the best pizza EVER!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 30
I would love a tub scene. Who wouldn't want to take a bath with Edward.
Reviewer: bluedove (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 30
one of the few stories i keep coming back to. gotta love emmett and jasper, they are the koolest.
who hasn't had their bikini top slip a bit?
cant wait for the next update.
Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 30
i LOVE THIS STORY!! I wish i had some constructive criticism but i really do like your style. The only thing I might prefer is shorter chapters with more frequent updates. But honestly I'm thrilled with whatever I can get.
In exchange for the outtake I will share with you a very true very embarassing story that Bella's pool experience reminded me of...
A few years ago my boyfriend and a bunch of our friends took a trip to west edmonton mall in Alberta.. which is a provine in Canada if you aren't familiar... Now this mall has a theme park and a water park in it and we had a couple days there so we decided to hit up both. The day we were at the pool the waves were goin and we formed a long line linking arms. For some reason I decided to face the shallow end so the waves crashed on my back.. see where this is goin? Long story short I lost my top and flashed an entire public pool along with all my close friends for an extended period of time until I could fish out my top. I could have died. Still blush about it even now haha.
:D
Reviewer: MyBlackRoses (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 30
Woo!! One of the times I decide to review and you offer something for it. Lovely lol. I'm happy Edward 1.0 has yet to make much of an appearance since Edward 2.0. However, if you bring him back I will bite you. Or! Even better, I'll send my puppy over to lick you to death.
Yeah... Loves your story... And.... Yeah, that's pretty much it >.>
~MyBlackRoses
Author's Response: Our puppies can have a licking contest!
Reviewer: littlebunny (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 30
I love this story...so different in plotline because it has the mystery element! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: arianna (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 30
aw, after a period of sympathising with Jacob, I'm definitely back on Team Edward now! not looking forward to him going away though...
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 30
I got so caught up in the whining and ranting, I forgot to ask for the outtake. Pretty Please!
Author's Response: LOL. Don't worry - you got it anyway!
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 30
Hmm... What has that Rachel up her sleeve??
Great chapter, as usual! The pool scene was so funny!! I don't like Alice's mother at all...
Continue!! (And I would be happy to read your outtake! Thanks!!)
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 30
"Would it make you feel better if I mooned them?" Edward asked, running his hands up and down her back.
That was great! What he wouldn't do for the girl he loves!
OK, just got to get this off my chest. I hate the conflict that I know is coming from the whole scrabble club-Josh-Rachel-reporter-stupidness! I know it's necessary, and it makes for a really great story, I just hate it! They just got over the tiff at Christmas and soon Edward is leaving. ARRGGHH! I just want them to be happy!!!!
OK, rant and whining now over! Seriously, though, I love this story! I have been reading for months and get so excited when there is an update! You are a truly talented writer!
Reviewer: ScarlettRain (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 30
Oh! I'd like the outtake please! :) My email is lil_kimmy_lou@hotmail.com
Loving this story btw! Cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 30
I love Emmett in this chapter... He always makes me laugh.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: loreleikate (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 30
I want the outtake! I love lemons...they are tasty. :)
Lovely chapter, but the Rachel girl gives me the creeps; I see trouble on the horizon.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 30
Of course I want the outtake so could u please send it to me.
I am not sure about Racheal and Josh... they are so up to something and I have a feeling that something is going to happen in Febraury that si going to put a damper on Bella and Edwards relationship.
However I have hope that things will work out in the end.
Update really soon please
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 30
ooo bathtub outtake? yes, please, hahah.
Reviewer: kiamibee (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh, I sense tension and more Rachel coming soon...
I absolutely love how you've created a perfect balance of drama and normal everyday scenes without it seeming unrealistic or forced.
(and jealous Edward - you write him like no other)
I'd love to read the outtake!
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
Thanks for updating so soon!
And yes, I would like to read the outtake =)
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter. Can't wait to read the outtake. =)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 30
Awesome chapter. Poor Bella. Embarrassed in front of Alice's mom.
The outtake sounds cool.
Please update soon?
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