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Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 30
Man, I can't make up my mind who JS is. But I think I'm going to bank on the guy in the gym. Josh really is only at this club thing. And JS is in cahoots with the bigwig at the paper, so I would infer that he's older. And Josh is younger than Edward, making him quite young. Unlikely to be him...
By the way, the name Rachel reminded me of Rachel McAdams and her role in State of Play...
Reviewer: lauraelizabethcullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 30
aww, poor Bella. Always embarassing herself. lol. I loved this chapter and cannot wait for the next update! Or that outtake ;P
And I totally think that J.S. is Josh.
Reviewer: briagirl19 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 30
can't wait to see what is up with Rachel and Josh... I am thinking J.S. is Josh, but then again, I'm sure you could have something else up your sleeve. Poor Bella with the exposure in the pool- I'm glad that she didn't let Alice's mom get to her.... love the story and am looking forward to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
Me want outtake!!! *makes nom nom face*
Whoa. Sorry. *cough* I... erm... yeah. This story rocks!
... but I would like to read the outtake too!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 30
Thanks for the update. And I get the same feeling as Edward on something is up with Rachel. Hmmm... Can't wait to read what will happen next.
Oh and I am always up for reading outakes. ;)
Update soon, please?
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 30
oooh! bathtub outtake! yes, please.
this story is in my top five of favorite stories. i squeal like a fangirl when i get an update email.
and here's a fair trade for the bathtub outtake...i have a lemony one-shot up on fanfiction under same name, not sure if i mentioned it before, but it takes place in a certain doctor's office. lemon for a lemon. :)
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 30
bathtubs and edward???? definite must on my list. i like the way the have become comfortable with each other and the pool scene was great. i also think it is sweet that he likes the nerdy side of her personality. i am sure rachel is going to be causing some issues and i hope edward doesn't allow anything to shake his trust in bella.
Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 30
Outtake please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 30
I think Rachel is a red herring. Great chapter. And the pool scene cracked me up.
Reviewer: mrsjasperhale88 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 30
Thanks for another great chapter! I'm glad to see that B & E are still heading on the right track. I'm with E though, something about this rachel chick rubs me the wrong way. I hope he can figure it out soon before bad things happen and could potentially ruin his relationship with B. I loved the scene with Mrs. Brandon btw, i was cracking up when bella flashed her. too funny!
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 30
Another great chapter. It's killing me, not knowing if my guess on JS is right.
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 30
I so don't like the sound of this Rachel woman...grr. Edward will work it out, though! He'll get her good! I hope...
I think it's cute that Edward finds Bella's nerdy side cute. =D
Absolutely LOVED the pool scene. I'm feeling quite sorry for Alice though! That poor girl. She's turned out well, despite her parents and obvious upbringing.
And the Janet Jackson moment was pure class!
Please do force your fun Edward times on me! Pretty pretty please? Lemons are becoming my favourite fruit...
Looking forward to the next chapter, as always!
Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 30
lemony is definitely my thing. i would like to read it. :)
Reviewer: PotKettleBlack (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 30
I love love love this story! I'm excited to see who J.S. is & what you're planning to do with that storyline. This Rachel girl has got to go--she's up to something & I've got a bad feeling about her. Oh, and I want the outtake too! Thanks so much :)
Reviewer: tayz13 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 30
I am so happy 3 updates in a weeks time!!! I am sad that February is fast approaching and we wont get to see Edward :(
Whats the deal with Rachel? Who doesnt love a lemony outtake??!?!
Reviewer: Lizzytish (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 30
J.S. is Joshua. C'mon! Of course it is.
Anyway, good chapter. How long is the whole story going to be? It seems to keep going even when I thought it would finish. I'm glad it hasn't.
And while I ALWAYS read your updates, I don't always comment. I AM commenting for the outtake. I'll try to comment more in the future, though, I promise. :)
Reviewer: hihotintin (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 30
I just knew girls named Rachel were evil!!lol j/k...great chapter though. I'm glad to see that Edward is truly making an effort to juggle both the band and Bell;so far he seems to be succeeding! I love sweet Edward,espcially when he is attentive. Plus I would have loved to have Edward moon me!lol, great chapter all around. Things seem to moving progressivly for my favorite couple. I'm hoping to see more of it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: jnblake (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 30
It usually drives me nuts to read a story in the 3rd person....but not this one. For some reason, separate BPOV and EPOV are stories that just appeal to me. I really enjoy everything about this storyline. It's very entertaining, and best of all I never know what's going to happen next. I'm wanting to know what's going on with this Rachel chick, it might drive me crazy before you update again. But I do love this story and can't wait for an update <3
Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 17
Best chapter yet
Reviewer: Lj_action (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 30
im knew that this reporter stuff had to come eventually but i am annoyed with them none the less. i really hope that bella doesnt slip up with info when edward goes on tour. and i really dont like this rachel.
Reviewer: sillybean (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 30
Hey Blue25, this story is one of my favs. I like that is actually a story and it isn't just sex. But....I would love to read the bath tub out take!
thanks!
Sillybean
Reviewer: JennWen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter! I think Rachel's looking out for E/B... I'll gladly take some lemony goodness :) looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 30
heh, someone's fishing. Good chapter. No outtake, please:)
Reviewer: sessi_pattinson09 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
This story is AMAZING im always craving for more and more
PLEASE SEND ME THE OUTTAKE I want Edward in the bathtub
Reviewer: HEAR (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 30
I have been warned... I like my lemons... Here's my review: "Great chapter!"
Now may I have my outtake please? Thank you.
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