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Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 21
Loved it, they both needed the confrontation to bring up their issues with trusting each other, which was great and the fact that it lead to some smokin hot foreplay and sex is fantastic.
I think Edward and bella managed to handle the Jacob thing, like mature adults, and I was impressed with the way you wrote it. I can't wait to see what happens next,, but I am very sad to see the end of their weekend.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
Another entertaining, excellent and well writen chapter. I thought the coitus interuptus on thanksgiving was bad, this time it was so much worse and at the same time so so much hotter. But I think Bella has some splaining to do, and I really hope that it doesn't ruin their weekend alone, but it's long over due and much anticipated on my part.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 19
looking forward to Bella and Edwards alone time, but having been naughty and glanced ahead, I know that something happens to part them before christmas, and I know it's gonna be sad and make me cry, but in a morbid way I am looking forward to finding out how they go from being this inseperable and happy, to different states for christmas.
Another excellent and entertaining chapter, making out while hiding from the extended family is always fun to read.
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 31
Yep SO I haven't reviewed this story YET i don't THINK !! But Just so you know IT"S FREAKIN GREAT LOL !! I love this Kudos to you :)
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 31
Alice has been struggling around this baby issue for chapters now, I hope she gets her resolution. Oh, and so sad that Edward has left. You just know that prize is getting leaked...
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok. I am concerned about Christmas. Do you think it will be okay for édward to be away for Christmas? I hope that doesn't cause a fight!
Good stuff
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 31
Ohh poor Alice!! I really feel bad for her, even more than for Bella...
Great chapter!! Continue!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 29
james ? cant remember surnamE !
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 31
Poor Alice. I just want to give her a hug.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 28
jessica stanley ?
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 23
the guy in the gym......a reporter?
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 18
yet another wonderful and emotional chapter. Yet more juicy lemons, and steamy hot ones at that. I loved the misunderstandings and miscomunications that have happened to them, very realistic and like any new relationship.
But the dreaded call to the father, to let him know that his little girl is dating and not so little anymore. Almost as dreaded and feared as the boyfriend/father meeting.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so I am just gonna jump ahead and read the next chapter
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
very hot and sweet, smoking and sexy. I just loved it. Glad that they finally have done the mattress mumbo. But even better to see that the emotional attachment is building a strong foundation for a future mature and comitted relationship. Another excellent and well written chapter, so I am going to cut this review short and jump right into the next chapter.
Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 31
i just spent the day reading it all and i love it!
Great Job!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 16
darn band practice, but I am really glad that the whole tanys thing has been bought out into the open, but I think it might be time for Bella to return the favour and tell Edward about Jacob, it's only fair.
Sweet to see possesive edward, although strangly I don't want to hit him on the back of the head for it. Jacob on the other hand still has one coming despite the fact I like him a little bit more since his perspective in this chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 15 (K)
not at all nice to leave us hanging like that, but the great sexy times more than makes up for it, as does the promise of finding out just what the heck happened with Tanya and Edward.
I am glad that the second date went the way it did, and while I am glad they got hot and bothered with each other I am even more glad to see Edward taking Emmetts advice and nurturing Bella, because they both deserve it.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so I am just going to jump ahead and read it right now
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh man there is just so much going on in this chapter tat I don't know what to praise first, but I loved how much closer Edward and Bella seem to be getting, that their frst date went oh so very well, and that the kisses were so smokin hot and just plain all out sexy.
the girls bonding was very well written and explains alot, about bella and her character but also about what the others are coming to mean to her as friends.
can't wait to find out more about edwards past and now that the chapters are going to start earning the rating I am even more interested, so onwards then.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 31
I am looking forward to reading how he copes with the separation.
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 31
I love Sweetward. :)
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Lucky Chapter 13
I just loved the rap, had me rolling on the floor laughing. It's great to see Emmett and Edward acting so much like brothers, and to get more insight into their relationship.
Jacob now has company, I may not have figured out what tanya did, but I am getting the urge to slap someone again. It's great to se that everything is moving along. Bella and Alice burning Jacob memetos is a great sign that she is movng on, and lucky for Edward he seems to be in the right place at the right time.
I really hope to doctors have got it wrong and that Alice and Jasper will have a child together, it's not fair, when everything else seems to be working out for all the people around them. I hope all goeswell for Alice, Jasper and Edwards try out, and While I would dearly love to jump right into the next Chapter, I have to be at work in 5 hours, and I need at least some sleep,, so no matter how hard it is to stop reading this when there is more to go, I will have to give it a rest for tonight and start again tomorrow. I can't wait.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 31
It's tough to be away from your sweetheart for so long... :-(
And poor Esme...I know she didn't mean any harm, but I still feel terrible about what she said to Alice.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Outtakes from Ch 12
loved the dates, poor Bella though talk about a bad dating run. glad it's not three strikes and your out or Edward might never get his shot. on to the next xhapter, because sleep still isn't really that important? right?
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 12
poor edward, but the bowling alley night just be the wake up call that he needs, it seems to have worked well for Bells. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so once again sleep will be out off for a little bit longer.
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 31
I love that you're updating so often...when I see that email in my inbox, I start grinning like a giddy schoolgirl!
Looking forward to some Sweetward and possibly some PhoneSexward...? ;)
Ooh, and I'm really interested to see where this school excellence award thing goes. The fact that Alice said she'd never heard of it before has me a little sceptical about its validity.
=D Keep up the awesome writing!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 11 (k)
I kept remembering the scene in the movie where Edward is playing for Bella, it was so hot, and sexy. Even in a crowded club I imagine it still would be, especially sice it seems to have woken Bella up again, But once again I find myself wanting to slap Jacob, and unable to go to sleep because I have to read the next chapter.
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