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Reviewer: Twiadict2911 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 23
Tears!! Sniffling... Why do I care do much... Damn you for making me care!! ( i mean this in the best way possible)
Reviewer: bellacullen18 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
this is great
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 34
I am absolutely furious with Edward. The same exact thing happened with him just a few years back and he's so quick to jump to conclusions. No one would believe him when he was innocent, and now he's doing the same thing to Bella. And just the evening before he was getting his grandmother's ring and planning to propose! What a crock. If he doesn't love and trust her and KNOW her anymore than that, then she's good to be rid of him.
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 32
Could J.S. be Jessica Stanley? I've been thinking this whole time that J.S. was either Jack or Joshua but I just went back and re-read the chapter at the paper and J.S was never refered to in pronoun form, so we don't know if J.S. is male or female yet. I can't believe Bella told Jessica! After the problems the school has had with leaks to the paper and then the fact that Emmett SPECIFICALLY said that if they told a single soul and he found out, they would lose their jobs. Even if she trusts Jessica, that was a stupid move. Because even if Jessica isn't J.S., Jack is still a suspect. Granted, Bella doesn't know anything about it, but still. He was in the room, and she doesn't know if he actually has the iPod on. Just that he has the earbuds in. He might could hear every single word. OR it could be a recording device. Great now I sound like Edward the conspiracy theorist. But again, you just never know. Bella should have kept her mouth shut. She's old enough to have some self-control. Though when it was first introduced, I had )and still have) doubts about the legitimacy of that school award. Could it just be a ploy by Emmett and the board to ferrett out the leak?
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 24
This chapter was sort of like re-reading New Moon. You hate the fact that Jacob is there. You hate the fact that he's around Bella and Edward's not. But it's a necessary evil to get to the later chapters and books when Bella and Edward get back on track and Jacob is left in the dust.
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
"He couldn't think of one thing that would ever ruin this relationship." That was the kiss of death right there. Everyone thinks everything is going along all honky-dory and then BOOM. Either Jacob is going to stir up trouble when they go to Forks for Christmas or Tanya is going to find her way back into the fray, with the newspaper on her heels. Geesh.
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 16
Eh, even with his POV, I still think Jacob's "a complete and total asshat". Even if he never realized that Bella was in love with him, what girl wants to hear all the sexcapades of their best guy friend? That's just tacky. And the whole "how was he supposed to remember that tall, blonde and sex on a stick was off limits?" thing, I mean really Jacob? Your - claim to be - best friend asks you to stay away from ONE girl out of the thousands you chase and you can't even manage that? Absolutely no sympathy from this camp. I'm definitely going along with the "grrr... when will Jacob just die already!" people.
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 12
No complaints on this front about the other men. I mean, yes, of course I want Bella and Edward to go ahead and get together, but she's been in love with Jacob for the last 7 years and hasn't ever really had a relationship. Definitely don't want Edward to end up being the rebound. Plus, again, she hasn't ever had a relationship. She needs to test the waters a bit, so to speak, before she settles down with her happily ever after ;)
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
As someone ho had ahorrendous case of endomitriosis I can tell you that yopu did a goof job. mine resulted in eventual infertility and hysterectomy. it is not fun, nor easy, you handled the subject well.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this story. I couldn't "put it down". Very clever and well-written.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Epilogue
Great story.
Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 32
wtf is Bella thinking when telling Jessica about the award??? omg...she knows that is totally against the rules and betraying the trust of her friends etc...Edward is gonna flip! Wow, stupid move Bells!
Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 31
J.S. is that guy in the gym?! And him and the editor or whoever, Doug are behind this award scheme?! I hope Bella figures it out...Or Rachel tells someone!
Reviewer: Bookaholic Girl (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 32
bitch did NOT spill!
oh hell no!
now she's a gonna get fired.
emmett's gonna have to lay the smack down on her ass!
i can't wait!
; )
Reviewer: sclark0925 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Epilogue
This was such a great story! You almost lost me around chapter 8 and I stopped reading it and read a few others before coming back to it. I'm so very glad I did. I loved that you presented them in a real way with problems and arguments. The ending was fantastic!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Epilogue
i loved it! im sorry for jasper and alice, i almost wish bella had offered to carry a kid for them! but it was such a fun story!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 28
ok so js is either the guy in the work out room, or jessica stanley
Reviewer: GinaMarieCULLEN (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 30
I am still curious about the man that is always "quiet" when they work out!!!! He has been in my head since Bella came back from Forks!!! HUMMMMMM
Reviewer: folleegrl (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Epilogue
I absolutely loved the story!! It did feel like any typical relationship that goes through day-to-day struggles to make it work. I loved Alice's story in all this, at one point I almost fell like Bella would offer to be a surrogate mother for her child. I think it would have exponentially shown the deep level of friendship they share.. also a great idea for a storyline. Thanks for your beautiful writing!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. I never intended for Bella to be a surrogate, but that seems to have been a fairly popular theory.
Reviewer: JMG623 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 (k)
Have you ever seen the movie How To Be? Robert Pattinson is in it and he plays the main character Arthur and for some reason your Edward reminds me of Arthur from the movie. In a way they are nothing alike but the vibe given off from them are extremely similar. I love that movie. haha. Anyways You did a great job! :D
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Epilogue
I want to start by saying that you are and excellent writer. The mistakes are so far and few between i cannot even recall one of them. The story had its lemons, but there was a plot. I have read a lot of stories lately that felt like I was reading the script of a porno. This story has substance and flow and for the first time ina really long time I could see played out in my head. As I read, the movie was clear the acting vivid and the emotion transferred. I was moved and appreciate the difficulty it takes to be a good writer. I also liked this story because I am from a suburb just south of Milwaukee. My best friend lives in a town just outside of Chicago and I have been where these characters have gone. it was special. The only addition I can make is that there are two pizza joints that are the best. The first for the deep dish kind and the best is Lou Malnati's and if you want to try it, order online and they ship! The other is D'Augustino's who have a seasoned crust to die for. I guess the only thing left for me to to read your other stories. I cannot wait!
Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
i grow and donate my hair to locks of love..a great cause!
btw lovin this story!
Reviewer: stupidlamb1976 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Epilogue
I just finished reading the story and I liked it.
Good work and I'm looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Bbuttis (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Epilogue
I just found this story and have spent the last umm, I don't know, maybe two or three days reading it :P
Ohmygosh. When I read chapter 32 I almost had a heart attack. I read the Finnish words a number of times before I realised that something was off. I'm Finnish myself so at first I just read the Finnish words and, as it is my native language, I naturally understood the meaning. It just felt like I'd been sucked into another reality... and then I continued a bit and found out what it was all about. Talk about a bizzard situation :D
And btw, nobody pimped this story for me, I just found this when I was browsing AH-category around page 60 trying to find some completed multichapter stories ;)
I'm glad that I read this. It's been a hell of a journey through thick and thin. I had an epiphany during this story. I realised that I could endure the hard parts - when Edward "dumped" Bella - when I knew, for sure, that there'll be a happy ending for them. I guess that summarizes the reason why I keep reading these BxE fics... the routine. It's just fun to read something when you know how it will end. Then you can just concentrate on the journey.
I'm just a big softie with my needs to have a happy ending... but hey, I'm not ashamed to admit it! :D
Thank you, it was really wonderful that you decided to write this story :)
- B
Reviewer: lira21 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Epilogue
Hello!!! I have to tell you that i love this story. I love the way you describe these charaters and I feel happy that I could finish it!!!! It took me two weeks but it worth it!!! ahhahaha
I'm reading another of your story this week....so this mean... that we will be in touch hehhe...
take care
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.
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