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Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Revenge

Was it too much, too violent, did Bella go to dark into the darkness, was it worrisome not only to watch her go dark, but that the cullens & wolves were enjoying it a lot.  Should we have felt bad for Victoria when she was a caged animal and Bella continued to poke her with a stick.

 

NAAAAAAAAAAA  I think it was GREAT!!!!!

Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Revenge

Great story, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Anticipation

You forgot to cover "tosses" computer at author ;-)

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Revenge

OK that just freaking rocked... nicely done... could not be happier wit the out come

 

Reviewer: DazzledBrunette (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Revenge

That was great!! I'm glad that Bella was able to torture Victoria so much before ending her life.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Revenge

Woop woop!  That was an AMAZING fight!  I loved it!  I loved how Bella was able to utalize the powers of her fmaily to help her.  Loved how she saw how connected they all were to her and also how she never once doubted her own abilities.

Excellent!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Anticipation

<whew> I'm so glad I'm still behind ;)  I would have hated you for this one.

Loved the whole circling her and toying with Victoria, excellently done.  Great job of building up the tension too.

K I'm moving on....

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Revenge

Wow, I guess Bella got her revenge!  I'm glad it just wasn't killing her, Victoria needed to understand all the pain she caused.  I'm glad she's gone now.

So, does this mean that Edward and Bella can move forward?  Will they be getting married?  Will they have to move?  How will they face the rest of eternity?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Breaking Through

Hmmm I'm glad I'm behind and don't have to wait on an update.  This is getting realy exciting.  I wonder if Victoria is really losing it, or if she is more intelligent than the Cullen's give her credit for.

Another well written chapter, k I'm moving on to the next ...

Reviewer: lillyflynn (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Revenge

Wow. That was so good :) I really like where you've taken this story.. I love the idea of a strong, powerful Bella x

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Revenge

wow. just, wow. you are most definitely one of the best authors i have ever found. i dont know if this is supposed to be the end of the story, but if so, great ending. if not, awesome beginning to eternity.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Revenge

Victoria is finally dead.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Revenge

WoW

Reviewer: brookie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Revenge

AHHHH i love this story! thankyou for writing it!!!!

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Revenge

woot go bella victoria so deserved it :) cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: geek_chic (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Revenge

badass bella rocks!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Revenge

Great job...loved it.

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Revenge

First off, you know that I love this story. Your Bella is so incredibly strong and amazing. I love that she was given the chance to stand up to Victoria with the whole family's support behind her power.. The one thing that I found a bit disturbing is that Bella was becoming a bit unhinged herself while dealing with Victoria. (And, yes I understand that if I had watched a psychotic vampire rip my father apart, I would be a bit unhinged too. It's just that compassion is such a huge hallmark for her character that I'm worried about her dealing with her first conscious act of killing.) I'm really looking forward to the rest of the chapters. I'm glad you're not just ending it here.

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Revenge

WOW!  That was awesome....and sort of sad in a way.  I was so glad to see Victoria dealt with and to see that she died a terrible death, like Charlie did.  I was sad to see Bella that way.  I know I know, she needed to do that, but I just never pictured her doing those things.  I bet Edward wanted to deal with it for her....

What could possibly happen now???.......can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: VampireGroupie (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Unresolved Issues

So far, I really like your story. I am a little confused about her not smelling like a vampire to Jacob- is she not going to turn? Oh well, I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out! I like your plot so far; Edward's revenge on Riley was satisfying. It is a nice AU to the book.

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Revenge

What an awesome chapter!!  Finally she got her revenge and it was so sweet. 

I have loved this story so much!! 

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Revenge

I'm sorry to say that I have not reviewed before, but after reading your note, I had come out of lurkerdom to tell you how much I've been enjoying your story. I found Bella's brand of justice in this chapter very satisfying after remembering the fact that Victoria not only killed Charlie and Renee, but also the extreme cruelty in her method of taking both of Bella's parents from her. The way that you wrote the last few minutes of Charlie's life was particularly heartbreaking. Victoria deserved everything she got and more.

Since I haven't commented before, I was sitting here looking back on not only this chapter, but the ones that came before, and the one that jumps out to be at the moment is the scene where Bella and Rosalie connected using Bella's power, finally truly understanding each other for the first time. Actually I enjoyed all her connection with each member of her new family, and the uniqueness of each. That was definitely one my favorite chapters, in not my favorite. Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to share your story so that I and others can read it. :)

Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Revenge

AWESOME!!! Great great imagery...what's next??

Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Revenge

This has been a great, great story!!! I loved you writing and loved these past chapters. This chapter was great. I loved bellas entrance to the scene and what she did with Victorie. Bad ass bella!

Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Revenge

That was wonderful..I could feel the intensity of this chapter and I love how she got to finish off Victoria..You rock!!! Lots of love..Stephanie Cullen

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