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Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Old Acquaintances
interesting
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Happy Surprises
Woohoo! This was truly a romantic moment. I loved the dancing in the meadow scene. I LOVED how Rose and Alice cleaned up, affirming more and more that Rose has more than accepted Bella as a sister and then I did a happy dance over the proposal.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Happy Surprises
Loved it, hun! I want the car.
Reviewer: MistyAnn (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Theory
I'm really enjoying your story. I too, thought that this was the way SM was going to go.
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Normalcy
fantastic, you have the gift...
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Revenge
awesome!
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Anticipation
ahhhhh...must read
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Breaking Through
intense!
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Combined Strength
the curiosity is now moving me toward the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Closure
awesome
Author's Response: Lol - KarenLynne, you're having a read-a-thon, aren't you? Thanks!! :)
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Memories
so compassionate, really i am impressed...
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Doubt
very good, love it :o)
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Theory
fantastic, this is a better direction to start then the shield but still in essence she is one because she can protect them all....love it..
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Insecurities
love it!
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Tenacity
not confused at all , in fact happily surprised!!
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Experimental Procedures
whoa, can't stop must read
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Normalcy
Nice to have some fluff after the big fight. Now hurry up and get to the next chapter,lol.
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Side Effects
Fantastic, i can't wait to see if she can communicate with jake or with any of them without being in close proximity to them as well....
Reviewer: KarenLynne (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Change of Heart
Leesa you have far exceeded the void for twilight in my life and i live for every new chapter of choices as if it were the best part of my day!!
Author's Response: Thanks KarenLynne - good to see you here, lol. Thanks for reviewing too - I live for reviews. :)
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Doubt
I like how you subtly make the difference in Edward's dialogue just slightly different from everyone else's. His vocabulary and cadence does remind us that he is from a different time. But it isn't stilted or akward. Just natural for him.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Theory
Very well thought out chapter. I like how everything flows naturally bit allows for
Bella's newness to her life. Nicely put together.
Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Retribution
BAMM! GO EDWARD!!
ahhh this story is intense... i love it... :)
must keep reading now, ciao!
Reviewer: KRo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Normalcy
Yeah first date after the change!
Reviewer: KRo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Memories
Speaking of alone time are they ever going to get to the sexing!
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Normalcy
I'm so sorry I don't review enough, I usually just get so caught up in the story! I start thinking about it and forget to review!! I absolutely loved Bella's revenge. I think you layed it out perfectly!!! It's a great story dear! I'm just curious as to where it will go from here?!?! :)
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