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Reviewer: djcarnation (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 01:02 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
good story glad jacob got his imprint at last.everyone got their hea,except paul and the volturra
Reviewer: sarahaimee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 09:40 AM · On: Nerves
I love love love the dresses, but those models all look like they could do with eating a handburger ... or 3.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 04:49 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Nice ending. Clearly the volturi cannot be destroyed, the v world needs them. Order must be maintained!!!!. But their greed and paranoia is taking its toll on the ppl they wish to rule.
Q: Is it a good idea to seperate, even for a little bit?...I think not.
I take bella too long to get aggiated... she needs to work on that. If it wasn't for monologue of jane and felix, they all would've died.
But it doesnt matter, the story is over and Jake is no longer trying to hump bella's leg.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 03:06 PM · On: Jacob's Happiness
Finally, jacob has found his own relationship to emotionally leech off. Thk god. I would hate to have him as a spurned suitor to my girl. Dude does not know when to back off. I would have to do some 'time', cuz of of him.
As per the trap... why don't they just send Bella alone, or w/ edward jasper and alice? and talk their way out of it?. And it would be a good idea that they let many ppl know as possible in the vampire world that they are visiting volterra peacefully, so that aro would be forced to atleast 'try' and keep his white hat on in case rumors spread about his lack of hospitality.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 11:13 AM · On: Closure
Jacob Black...you couldn't buy that guy a clue. 'NO MEAN NO'. phucking rapist/stalker.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 10:47 AM · On: Doubt
Bella: I have all this power, and not only don't I want to train it and understand it... I don't even want to use it!.
TRUE FOOL.
Boo to this line of thinking, Boooo i say.
#Cullensareidiots
Become a cullen and your stupidity goes up two fold.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 10:30 AM · On: Theory
"there has never been another vampire to choose this life." - carlise
Eh, wrong... what about Gianna in volterra? and other like her who work w/ vampires in the hopes of one day becoming like them?.
Carlise (your) Theory = EPIC FAIL
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 09:37 AM · On: Experimental Procedures
Okay... this is an amazing talent!. Nice creativity.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Change of Heart
Seriously why doesn't she smell bad to jacob and vice versa. Is this your attempt to keep the angst of a triangle relationship going w/ jacob who can't seem to take no for an answer?. And what is w/ her reluctance to eat anything? Are you a bulimic and trying to pass it off in your writing or something?. Not everyone desires to be a twig ya know.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Concealing Evidence
Why doesn't bella want to hunt?. Why is she being an asshole about it?.
STAY TUNED...
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 07:58 AM · On: Awakening
OMG... if i read one more "this is my fault" I will go on a mudering spree!. All these fanfic are the same, they are peppered w/ "Its my fault", 'im to blame", "I'm sorry", and my all time dreaded line "No, its not your fault, its mine!". OMG. Seriously what w/ all the catholic guilt!.
Also getting tired of drawn out guilt, like what this chapter just produced. Why the F would edward think that she would be mad?. She has been BEGGING for it for yrs, and now she got it.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 06:53 AM · On: Phone Call
Jacob, still as asshole. What. A. Dick.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 06:47 AM · On: Retribution
Haha im the new alice. How did I know exactly how Riley was going to get totured before I read it. Haha.
Reviewer: Vintage Girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Innocent Victim
whear were the cullens all this time.
Reviewer: carob (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Nerves
Loved the dresses.
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Imminent Conclusions
i loved this story!! it rocked!! thanks for finishing!!
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
I love this story, I don't like that Bella's parents were killed but I can see the need for it to happen. I really really love Bella's gift it's rather cool
Reviewer: Psychoroach (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Imminent Conclusions
Beautiful story! I loved it!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Concealing Evidence
Nice chapter...
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Questions & Unexpected Responses
What are Jasper and Emmett hiding...? Where are Renee and Phil's bodies?
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Awakening
I feel like Bella would have gone into the same state of shock that Alice went into...Great writing, either way.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Timing
Aww, Renee and Phil too?!! I'll be happy when Bella is okay again.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Unresolved Issues
Alice is bothering me...she's usually so happy and chipper!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Phone Call
I'm glad that Edward is being "the bigger person", haha.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Retribution
Lovely writing, you write a harsh, angry Edward very well.
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