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Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 15

it may not have been the best chapter, but they can't all be awesome can they?  love your story.  can't wait for more.

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

Actually, this chapter didn't really suck. Not to me, anyways. I liked the Alice/Edward interaction. I always have liked their little connection. They have always been destined to be brother and sister, in my opinion :0)

The Rosalie/Edward interaction was just too funny. I loved it! She's such a bitch and I freaking love it. I mean, seriously, if she didn't care, she wouldn't put so much into it, right? ;) lol

I love that it ended with Bella asking Edward if he wanted to come in...It gives me hope that they might actually get passed the Q&A and enjoy each other ;) LOL

Great job and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

Ah, was that the Dies irae?

Can't wait for more..

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 15

You're too hard on yourself!  I loved the whole skipping rocks scene!  And I think that this chapter gave alot of information out!  I thought it was great!

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

i'm still a little confused but am enjoy the story a lot and the way it is goin

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is a good story, i'm a little lost but lovin it

Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 14

I am so loving your story.  It is a great take on the whole Bella Edward story.  Please post more soon.

Reviewer: youngmei (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

I'm really liking this story, especially because it is from edward's point of view. Please update soon.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

Definitely wasn't expecting that at the beginning. It makes you aware Edward was dealing with very serious issues! Immortal children. I don't think I have ever read about those in any aspect in a FF story, great job there! And Edward, being the executioner...WOW.

Can't wait for the more difficult questions - Bella really has no clue...at all? I hope it doesn't shock her too bad...

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loved the conversations between the Cullens - too cute! And Edward's confession of devotion - loved! The reckless pursuit of physical interaction with Bella is great! It's awesome to read stories where Edward doesn't quite treat Bella as such a china doll. It's nice to see him lose control just a little. And for him to be so awkward with his "human side" is endearing!

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

ahhh, that was short. really waiting till bella know, tho ;) thx for updating. pls update soon

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hmm the look into Edwards past was interesting...Even though he doesn't seem to regret his actions because he believes he was being just and giving out the consequences where necessary, he regrets seemingly everything about his existence...and I have a hard time believing Aro does as well...maybe I'm so used to having Aro being manipulative and selfish ...but I don't ever trust him haha

And Edward was really really sweet there at the end, when he said he would always put Bella first

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

The evasdropping Cullens - hilarious.  Very sibling like. 

 

Complete and total all-encompassing devotion - puddleworthly

 

Everything?  Interesing:-)

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 12

Loved Edward's embarrassing moment over her "bedclothes".  hilarious.

 

Edward's declaration was made of WIN!  Can't wait to hit the next chapter.

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

Holy crap - he's waking her up!!!  Oh boy. 

 

I love when she embarrassing admits she felt they were dating.  And he's so excited to hear her say that.  Her tear on "not nearly enough" was so heartbreaking. 

 

 

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

I LOVE your Bella!  She's strong.  The ambush in the parking lot was great - so glad it was in EPOV to read through all those stabs to the heart she was giving him.  And his lamenting to Alice was excellent.  So low.  Only to be shot super high by her ILY and crash right back down w/ her IHY. 

good stuff.

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

What made Edward decide to not return to the Volturi?  This conversation? 

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

This chapter seemed a bit disjointed from the others.  And maybe that's because Edward is so different and it's an angry chapter?   It was also awkward for him to refer to each Cullen by their physical descriptions... presumably, he would have been able to read their names off their minds.  But it made it kinda difficult to understand who was talking in some spots.  I found myself rereading bits. 

 

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

The 2 week day by day breakdown was great.  I absolutely loved the way you had time pass and highlight the events.  Such small actions, yet they're what he remembers the most.  I love it.

Ooh - the Cullens are talking to her... i'm sure that Alice has seen something at this point.  Maybe warning her?

 

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

So glad to see this update.  Yes, it is a bit darker.  But, we all knew that Edwards past is dark.  And that is why we love to see him so caught up into Bella.  ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter.  :)

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

Yes, I thought it went brilliantly! I didn’t EAT you! How much better could it have gone?!  

^^ Excellent line


 
I love how, since Edward isn't a Cullen living the human charade for 80 years, he is so bumbling!  He is shocked at every response she has b/c he has no idea that his behavior is "off".  He's so blissfully naive... in a way. 

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

This was very different but I liked it. I want Edward to be more comfortable about his love for Bella, though. I mean, they're obviously in love with each other. Where's the kissing?! :D lol

Sorry...I'm the kiss fan :P LOL

Well done!

Reviewer: fruitcakegirl (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

I started reading this this morning and I'm hooked! I have to stop now or I'll never get to sleep but I plan on coming back for more tomorrow. I need to find out what Edward's mission is and how he'll react to the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Yes! Hooked! That's what I love to hear.. I hope that you like the rest of the story. In my personal opinion, Chapter 12 is perhaps the only bit of the story that I'm not completely *Meh* about, you know?

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

Love the Taylor Lautner comment.  One of the happiest days in my life is the day I found out Robert Pattinson is an adult.  I didn't feel like such a perv anymore.

Super chapter.  This Edward has been through so much.  When did he go Vegetarian?

Update soon please!

Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

I came across this story randomly and I must say it is really well written... I love edward and his "discovering" new emotions and the humour in this story is fantastic :) I wonder what will happen with the volturi... well all I know is that I'll defianetly be waiting for a chapter....

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