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Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
that was super intense and the yellin and proclamin his love was a shocker. i didnt see that comin
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12
That was mythic.
~bows reverently~
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
thats like a butterfly just flying aroud then "BAM" thunder strikes it out of nowhere. that was funni. i luv you "BAM" i hate u . that is hilarious
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
Oooh Jake was so funny in this chapter! I loved how he dropped the Prago. I am team Edward...but I wish Jake could be my best friend. He is usually do annoying in fan fiction.
So intense. I am enjoying this story so much! It is so well written!
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
I love your flowery words and bold statments. That was amazing and beautiful!
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, he is actually waking her up! This never happens in fanfic!!! I can't wait! I strangly find myself getting giddy whenver I read about Edward getting to know the Cullens. It is so heart warming!
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow! Just...wow!!!!
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this sassy, witty Bella. She is so appealing. Yet she is still Bella. And even though Edward is more of a jerkward (a sexy jerkward at that), he is still our good and sweet Edward. He has just had a "trying" past. I can't wait for him to meet the Cullens!
Wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
Well this story is dark and intense, and a little sad. But let me just say DAMN! You write Edward sooooo sexy! I love how rude he is and yet Bella knows that he is "good". This is how Edward would be if he had been led by the Volturi instead of the Cullens. He would be "good", but so angry and alone, that he would be bitter and cynical. But so sexy.
I love your story and your beautiful writing. I am going to continue on now.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ah ha! I thought you weren't going to bring Jacob into this story. I can see why you did. Helped get her thoughts going in that direction.
Glad to see that being home helped with the writting. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
The Bella and Edward make out scene was fantastic! And the ending is such cliff hanger! I hate cliff hangers! lol :)
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 16
Nasty cliffhanger, I need more, and soon.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 16
OOH! ITS GETTING GOOD!
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 16
Here's to alluring awkward banter! I'm so excited, Bella's about to figure out the big secret! What fun! Thanks for writing--I always look forward to your updates.
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 16
I, too, am team everyone. I know that Jacob really does care for Bella in his own pubesent way. It's not his fault that she was fated to be a vamp. I really liked the way you handled the first meating between them. Kudos.
Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
Seriously intense and wonderfully dark. I like it!
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
i really wanna know what the said
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 16
LOL...Shank you?! :D Nah...I like the way you write so you're better off alive than dead right now :D lol
I LOVED the makeout session...Go Bella go! She really needed to do that. I wanted to kick Jacob's ass for interrupting, damn him!
Why the hey did Edward have to stay away? Silly vampire. He knew she wanted to see him, for crying out loud! Sheesh :D lol.
Update soon! I gotta know what's going on.
Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 12
"You are offended that I disappeared, took from you a few of your precious hours? Then I am angry at you for taking my will. For taking my life! Every second of everyhour has been yours since you took that from me. You are angry that I stole into your room? Well, then apologize for stealing my heart! For you have taken that too, Isabella. And I am partly to blame, for I have laid it at your feet."
Um, woah *fans self* Gorgeous!
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
angela is funny. great chapter
Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm really enjoying this-- finely written and great characterizations!
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 16
Don't shank me. LOL I love it! *snicker*
I'm really like the interaction between Bella and your Edward. Very interested to see where the story goes. I look forward to the next update.
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
i personally liked this chapter
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
Oh boy...so is she going to think that he did the robbery or something? I mean of course she knows something is up since he seemed to specifically konw that something would happen in Port Angeles....
I have a feeling that he won't tell her the truth or he won't talk about it..and she is going to get really mad at him....
Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 16
Whoohoo! This gets interesting! C'mon, Bella, you have it!
Bella didn't believe the story? They LAUGHED! What's wrong with her? How odd...
And now, going to the Cullens! This will be exciting...
Agh, this Jacob knows how to ruin the moments... I'd kill him too...
Poor Charlie! I don't want him dying... I like him!
And Edward... I'm angry with him. He said they would meet 'soon'! Liar!
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