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Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

OH IT IS GETTING GREAT UPDATE SOON



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I will!

Reviewer: bumbelbee (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh my god! I LOVE this story!

I think it's great how you wrote the dialoge between Bella and Edward...

finally he's going to tell her everything... and Emmet at the beginning of the chapter was hilarious! ;)

I'm fervently awaiting another brilliant chapter, which is hopefully a bit longer!



Author's Response:

Haha... well if you've read chapter 14 already, you know that he doesn't tell her *quite* yet.. But she'll have to find out eventually, right? I'm so glad you like the story and that you enjoyed Emmett in particular. Thank you for reading and reviewing! The next few chapters are a bit longer, so hopefully you'll like those too...

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 13

AHHHHHA! I loved this chapter so much it was awsome! I look forward to your next one! I wonder if she already knows what he is and has learned it from Jacob!? I think that would be lovely. Sighhhh.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I made you laugh! I don't want to give up too much of the plot... But the big reveal is coming up... I love Jacob, so maybe he'll be making an appearance? Hm...

Thank you for reading!

 

Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 13

Yep, it's too short, but it's beautiful!

And Emmett is the best! He and Alice are so wicked... Hehehe



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love Emmett too, every story needs a little comic relief, right? I'm planning to do an Alice POV in the future, so I hope you like that too! Thanks again!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ahhh I just love his...  Devotion!

I can't wait to read more..  :)



Author's Response:

X!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

Poor besoted Edward. Alice and Emmett are so dang funny here. Could you do some more POV with them?



Author's Response:

Besoted is exactly the word! I've always found that the 'tough' guys are the ones that fall the hardest. It's only fitting that it's this innocent girl that is his undoing... And yes, I'm planning on doing more Cullen POV actually.. Maybe not all of them.. But definitely Alice, for sure. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh wow! How is Bella going to respond to hearing everything?! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing... and hopefully that next chapter was okay too! = )

Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 13

I liked it...I'm going to read 14 even if it isn't the final one.

Don't lie about LVL...

Reviewer: Aspenleaf (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 13

Best chapter yet, Emmett and Alice were great! their arguing made me laugh, gotta love Emmett. Can't wait for Edward to tell Bella everthing, thats huge. Wonder how she's going to take it.



Author's Response:

Wow, really? Haha, I thought the length was definitely going to be an issue since there was such a big mood change between Emmett's POV and Edward's, but i'm so glad it worked for you! The 'reveal' is coming up...! thank you so much for reading and reviewing (and playing on the forums).  XX

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wonderful!!! Toe curling... yes... wierd phrase, but you all know what I mean!  That first kiss relived!

Excellent chapter!  The humor from the others was great!  Very nice touch.



Author's Response:

Toe curling, ey? Nice. Haha, I get what you're saying though...

I'm glad you like it. Sadly, this thing is getting harder to write! XX

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

I think it's great that he was just standing in the parking lot and that he was then going to just walk off into the forest.  Bizarre.  Not very human-like. 

I also enjoyed that her 5 questions were basically verbal diarrhea and he got away w/ "yes or no" types of answers and then he creates the whole "I get 5 questions" round and they're way more in depth and probing and informative for him:-)  Cute.



Author's Response:

:: high five :: 

See? You get it? Like, I'm not trying to write Bella like she's some idiot, but I think that since the majority of the story is in Edward's POV it might come off that way... But in actuality, Bella's not so dense, obvi. 

And yes, verbal diarrhea is the bane of my existence so it was only fitting that poor Bella had her own bout with it... He's still always trying to get the upper hand with her, even if he's failing miserably. 

Thank you!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love that you actually have him eat.  Seriously.  Like, I understand that it's uncomfortable to barf it all up later - but it seems like a small price to pay to maintain their facade.  I was always annoyed that they didn't even eat like a yogurt or something in the books.  And they're vampires, how much can it really hurt? 

You're too hard on yourself - this chapter was good:-)



Author's Response:

I absolutely agree!  So what if he has to barf it up? 

And I'm not entirely sure about the 'too hard' on myself business, but it's okay... I'm trying! Haha, that's what counts right?

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love how shocked he is at her concern. 



Author's Response:

.. And a little creeped out, too. 

Haha, poor Edward.

Reviewer: cullenized (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

i love this chapter! this entire story, in fact! its sooo good. i can't believe it only has 180+ reviews.

i love how the confrontation went. it felt so passionate and so real. it's so much better than how edward and bella made up in new moon. this approach seems more realistic--like this is how a real couple might argue and finally make up.

i look forward to your next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I don't mind the 180 reviews so long as they aren't 180 reviews of people saying, "Oy... Pack it in, Love. This thing is ridiculous."

And yes, I wanted their interactions to be a bit more believable, even with the context of the story in general being an impossibility. But the love stuff? Yeah, I'd like to think it is. Otherwise. what's the point of writing all of this out, right? = )

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 12

I must say that this is my favorite AU story...it's beautiful...A "sullen"Edward cracked me up and I thought he would become their sullen Cullen...hehehe. Anyway, great story and keep it coming. Perfect timing with Edward confessing his feelings in anger and Bella kissing him...it was forgiving time since she herself had said everyone was capable of a change of heart and can be forgiven. I can't wait to see the upcoming discovery of what they really are and eventually her desire to be turned...Poor Edward needs happiness, love, and acceptance so I hold out hope for the girl in his fantasy that would rebuild him..each others eternal love. I should probably put the wine glass down now ; but will still admit (blaming the wine) that meeting seen with Cullens was great...Alice pleading and Jasper going outside for one last attempt may have resulted in a tear or two. I'm just saying, I'm just saying great story!!!

Author's Response:

Tears! I love getting tears. Yes, that makes me a horrible person. 

And no, don't put down the wine glass! I'm sure the wine glass is 1/2 the reason I got such a kind review. By all means, booze it up when you're reading my stuff, I'll take all the help I can get. Haha.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

I remember how confused I was when I started reading  this story. Now I am really hooked. And this sentimentally handicapped Edward remains consistent, which is no mean feat. I look forth to more chapters. Certainly the Volturi will show  themselves at a certain point.... 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that it isn't as confusing anymore? Haha, I'm even more glad that I've lured you into getting hooked.

I got your review-reply from your story... I would be more than happy to look at anything before you submit it.. I don't know how much help I can be for the writing or the ideas (as I rely pretty heavily on my betas for their honest opinions to tell me when something I write is ridiculous), but I'm up for helping you! 

And yes, the Volturi will make an appearance. I still think of your comments on the pluralization of the noun whenever I write about them.. See? You're educational again.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 12

Now that was a grand gesture.

Loved it!! Loved it!! Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 11

Awww - his hopes dashed at the last minute by her sleep talking. I love how the Cullens are teasing him, it cracks me up. And Bella has every right to be pissed. I love her sassyness.

I can't believe he is going to wake her up though! He is a glutton for punishment.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

Beautiful.

And he did piss her off pretty good, so he kinda deserves the hate. :)  I love that part in MS. He should have known Alice was up to something, sending him over there like that, hehe.



Author's Response:

Of course he pissed her off! Geez, what was he thinking? Showing up in the middle of the night in a girl's bedroom when she pretty much hates you is the worst possible thing that a person can do...

 

... Unless of course she secretly loves you too. = )

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

Profess away...that was lovely!  :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I think I will...

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

Glad they were able to get Edward to agree to help.

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm going to respond to all of your reviews in this AR since the process on this site is a bit more complicated than on FF.net. But, I just wanted to say thank you for going through and reading and reviewing each and every chapter. I've gotta say that my favorite was :: thumbs up::. Haha, it's nice to put a visual to the words! I'm also so glad that you liked the banter between Edward and The Cullen kids, I wasn't sure if it was completely out of place in the mood of the rest of the story.. But I think that every story needs a few moments of comic relief, right? I think I'm most comfortable writing the gushing-romance-stuff, so the fact that the attempts at being funny were well-received. Thank you again, so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

 

 

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

That was great!! Very well done.

So - the Volturi want Alice & Bella or just Alice?

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

He should have waited until he could have seen their eyes....but I can't wait to find out what they said to Bella.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love how he throughly put his foot in his mouth there. And she just gave it back to him, bit by bit!

 

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

WHAT? NO! Don't keep from doing it! It's great. I absolutely loved their banter. Edward is an ass. And she calls him on it. I almost lmao when she told him not to be rude to Angela!

Their banter is priceless!! You are doing an awesome job!

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