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Reviewer: Edwards kissoflife (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 16
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Reviewer: Edwards kissoflife (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 16
I am so enjoying this story. I hope you have inclination to pick it back up. You write your characters brilliantly and I really wanted to know what was comming next.
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
Do you know? I have been so feverishly devouring chapters that I haven't given even a thought to leaving a review. (I know; blasphemy for authors, but nirvana for readers.) This is truely a fabulous piece. You have done a great job with your characters and the pov's are never redundant. (That He said, she said really gets old after a while, don't you think?) I am so totally hooked.
Reviewer: Fantasy7 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 16
When was the last update? Please, please write more. You can't leave it like this with Charlie headed off to Port Angeles to die? Will Edward and the Cullens save him? Will Bella be able to find Edward in time? Please update soon?
Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 16
More?
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 8
This was awesome!!! can't wait to see how it all plays out!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
I how Bella sassy towards Edward! Its awesome!
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
Please, please, please, PLEASE finish this story!! I'm begging here! :)
Reviewer: Ochanteuse (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
I heat this story and need more.
Reviewer: Ochanteuse (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
I like Bella's pov. Her banter with Edward was really cute.
Reviewer: Ochanteuse (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really like your Edward. You've captured him perfectly. He has the perfect amount of edge that one would associated with a vampire.
Reviewer: Ochanteuse (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really like your Edward. You've captured him perfectly. He has the perfect amount of edge that one would associated with a vampire.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 16
Gah! i hope that you update this soon! it is an amazing story!
Reviewer: CiAnna27889 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 16
This is one of the best reads I've found in ficdom. I really hope you have time to update. I'd hate to see it just stop when it is so good!
CiAnna
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
I absolutly love this story of your: it's original, entertaining and extremely well written. I hope that everything is going ok with you and that you will post another chapter soon.
Reviewer: michiganmama (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
I really love this story. Love how Edward is so clueless! It's endearing and funny. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi,
I am writing this with the hope that you haven't abandoned this terrific story.
Will you update soon?
Jo.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 16
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
I like how long your chapters are! I'm loving the story. Rude Edward is getting on my nerves. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter! I like how he called her a stupid girl! HAHA!
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
Wow!!!! I absolutely LOVE your story!!! It's wonderfully written and totally amazingly awesome and original!!! Anyhoo, love the whole thing!! Especially how you are getting the character's personalities down pretty well!! Can not wait for the next update!! And cliffy's can be mean and terrible, but they are important to a story. They leave people, breathless, wanting more, and terribly riled up! Great job!!
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 12
I wish I was clever, funny or even slightly articulate. If that were the case, I could express my bundled delight and impatience for the next installment! Since I am not clever, funny or articulate, I will type (as it were) plainly: Please give us more of your genius! What can we as your dear readers do to help? Poems, sonnets, bribes, beer, virtual love beams or hugs? Name it, and it is yours :) Thanks again for the wonderful story!
Reviewer: misyx (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 16
Hey there. I've been meaning for a while to submit a review to offer some encouragement in case it's something other than the RL that has diverted you from giving us our crack. This story is awesome, and I hope you haven't grown bored with it. I certainly have not! Your Edward is so intriguing, and I'd like to see more Bella character development, like the last chapter you posted. She's just starting to become more 3-D to me. Hope all is well with you. Thanks for the terrific reading so far!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
I enjoyed the flashback about the immortal children. Dark.
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