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Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Emotions

BAH! I can't believe you ended it there! Too mean. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:54 PM · On: No More Words

SNAP!! Bella got her balls back! I hope she doesn't leave poor Edward hanging for too long though...

Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Emotions

This story is amazing! I couldn't stop reading. I absolutely cannot wait to read the next chapters!

Reviewer: Natsu2 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Emotions

Geez Louise!  Cut the ambilicle cord already Esme!  Poor boys.  I would go insane if my mom insisted on living near or with me!  Now only if I could just get my mother-in-law to move away....

I liked EPOV.  And I like how Rosalie's playing the middleman.  I'm crossing my fingers for a breakthough with Bella and Edward's relationship!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: n6374604 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Emotions

please continue - this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read.

Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Emotions

Edward and Bella are so... complicated?

Phew, Bella's visit is such a surprise.

Lovely fic, by the way.

Reviewer: butterflies1993 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Emotions

I really like this story alot!   This is the first story I've read that I wanted to cry during almost every chapter.  I just really hope they work this out soon.  Even though this story makes me sad I am complete hooked on it.  Because I will be happy when they finally get their stuff together and realize they are perfect for each other. I hope you update soon because I really want to see what happens next.  

Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Emotions

YHou know what I like about this story, Profmom?  You have the most believable Edward-in-love.  He's not a saint, but he's not a angst-ridden devil either.  No noble gestures, but no sudden alcohol/drug issues, no Emoward crap, no wild declarations.  He's a guy.  I love him being REAL, you know? 

And don't let anyone give you crap about the tiny cliffie, either.  I did the same thing a couple of chapters ago in mine, and I thought some people were gonna come unglued.  For the record, I really like single POV chapters.  They give you the space to really develop characters and situations in a way that is very hard to do well when you're worrying about changing mid-stream.

I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter (though I always like Edward better than Bella POVs-both th write and to read).  You've even made her tolerable to me, and that takes some doing!

Autumn

Reviewer: ThreeAM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Emotions

I just sat down and read this all in one go - you've  really got me hooked. I like how messy and unpredictable it is, and I like that neither Bella or Edward are perfect, or blameless.

 

 I also really appreciate how seriously you treat Bella's depression - your characterization of her provides a really great model for how it takes time, and effort, and friends and family to deal  with mental illness.   It's definitely not something someone else can just "fix" for you.

 

 It's a great story, and I'm looking forward to whatever comes next!

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Emotions

um, that is completely unfair!  i'm going to need a faster update with double the cliff hangers like that :(

but in all seriousness....i'm so glad this story is somewhat making its way out of its incredible depressing nature.  i felt almost sedated while reading the other chapters, seeming weighed down by the incredible burden of their hopelessness and misery.  now...the numbness seems to be working its way into my heart--well, at least that heavy feeling is gone.

happiness in the possible near future?

then again, i can't stop reading it -- so....whatever you do, i will most likely enjoy, haha.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Emotions

crap!!  great chapter...evil stopping point :)

Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Emotions

I won't throw things at you for the cliffy, if you don't leave me in the dark for long. Thanks :)

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Emotions

Great chapter!!  It was so nice to hear things from EPOV.  Esme scares me a little!!  I mean it's so nice that she wants to be with her boys, but good Lord!  LOL!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Home

Loved the confrontation with rosalie... it was real and honest, and wasnt just an easy fix with those two instantly becoming friends. that was cool of you.

And meeting Jasper was wonderful as well. He was so sweet and nice, and no wonder Bella approved of him...

And her old boss. That scene was fucking hilarious!!! XD

And Edward... *sigh* I swooned at his message all over again hahahaha

The way you ended the pure torture! How will Bella respond??? Was he beign too forward too soon? Or will she get all excited and do hand flutters and the like? XD

I'm excited to see what happens next and am I glad I have the next chapter to read!!! though I wont be abkle to do it for a while... oh well. lol

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Emotions

What's so intersting about them as a pair is that they only esem fully functional when they're together. One's happy and the other's nto when they're separated. I like how you've worked that. Looking forward to seeing if Edward's going to open that door.

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Emotions

*squeeeeee* I'm so excited for next chapter!!!

Also, Rosalie is awesome. I don't know if I mentioned that yet. And Esme amuses me.

Thank you for this wonderful story! I'm excited for the next update! :)

Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Emotions

Happy times are on the way, right?  Right?!  Right!?!

 

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Home

I'm so very glad Bella is repairing friendships and is on the mend. I also really liked how you described Jasper and Alice's relationship right here: "They had entire conversations with their faces. He adored her.  He could barely take his eyes off her, but it wasn’t possessive; it was as if he were afraid to miss a moment."

Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Emotions

Edward's possible scenarios had me laughing out loud. Loved it!!

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Love Stinks

Actually, I like the juxtaposition. Good job (although it still made my heart hurt). I really liked the shredding paper part. It seems...appropriate.

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:28 PM · On: People Get Ready

Yay Alice and Rosalie! :) I really like the way you portray Alice in this story. In a lot of stories she's all "shopping, shopping, shopping!" and this is a much better and deeper characterization of her.

I also liked how you touched on the issue of depression. It's important that Bella recognizes that she is depressed and that she's actually looking at and evaluating her life now instead of just surviving.

Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Emotions

Oh Gosh... You are killing me. I can't wait. My heart is aching for him. I just want him to have some relief. PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Just a Boy

Very good characterization in this chapter. I really liked it. Bella's trying to be stronge and Edward wallows (he's really good at wallowing, isn't he?).

I like Emmett, by the way. He's got a lot of life smarts and he's a hell of a lot more straightforward than Edward, even though he has his own issues.

Excellent writing! Keep it up!

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:46 PM · On: No More Words

:( I'm about ready to cry right now. Wow. And your last line, "Somehow, those two feet of mine carried me away," was wonderful. I really hope things get better soon!

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Friends in Low Places

Your daughter is very smart. :)

I really love this chapter. I liked that Edward unintentionally revealed a little too much in this chapter. I also liked that the focus wasn't on Bella (well, it was, but that was in the background), but rather on a conversation with Lauren. I think it's great that you made Lauren a real person, with her own strengths and faults, instead of just the "bitch" that so many people make her out to be.

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