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Reviewer: chelleb (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Love is All Around
Epilogue please!
Thank you!
Reviewer: monument (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Love is All Around
Great story... and I would love an epilogue!!!
Reviewer: Coriea (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Love is All Around
Hrm...do I have to have just one favorite?? I liked the scene with the prom dress, Edward making Bella watch porn and both their reactions made me laugh, both times on the couch and of course the ending!
An epilogue would be super! Do I hear wedding bells...??
Reviewer: mouseymost (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Love is All Around
I love how they finally got their emotions in order so they could be together. Bella was extermely stuburn; I'm glad she came around!
Reviewer: PokerFace (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Love is All Around
aw, that was a really good ending.
they really really love eachother.
it was really well written, great job!
ive enjoyed this story alot, and an epilogue would be nice!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Love is All Around
That was a beautiful way to end the story!!!! I loved it and it was perfect how they said "I love you!" Hilarious that Bella still had that porn vhs tape from H.S. that Edward brought over!!!! Great job!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Love is All Around
Hehe, lemons are always a great way to end things, or begin things, or to just throw in the middle of things, lol. Very nice ending! It was kinda funny to me how they neither one seemed to be able to say sex, it was all "you know". It was cute and awkward and very true to the nature of the story. It was really fit the premise of the story that they made love on just an ordinary Tuesday, making Tuesday lucky. I'd definitely love to see an epilogue! I've really enjoyed reading this story!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Love is All Around
I absolutely adore this story. From the moment I started reading it, I knew it was going to be amazing. This story touched me deeply on so many levels and I'm thankful you wrote it. This was indeed the perfect conclusion; the perfect ending. I'm sad to see this story go but I'm happy these characters finally found peace in their lives. You've done a marvelous job.
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Love is All Around
yeah, you can bribe me with an epilogue, hahah. and for that i say -- amazing. although i wouldnt mind some more happiness..i mean, it took them quite some time to get here and i want to enjoy it to its fullest extent.
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Love is All Around
please....more
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Love is All Around
Not exactly the smuttiest of lemons, but definitly better than BD.
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Love is All Around
I swear, this story OWNS me! For the second time in as many weeks, I've been busily typing on my own fic and had a compulsion to check if a new chapter of 'LC' was up-and there you were! And this isn't the first time it's happened with this story. I've loved it since chapter one.
This an absolutely beautiful ending, profmom, and quite worthy of professional writer. It was sweet, and hot, and loving, and profound... I just can't think of anything better to say than, "Thank you".
I think my favorite part was Edward's absolutely real and believable breakdown and sorrow after their 'couch episode' when she rejected him. It would have been so easy to take that to histronic levels, or to become melodramatic, but your Edward, from the beginning, has been just a guy-not a saint, not a devil, not hardened, not emo-a real person you could expect to meet, and he reacted in such a realistic manner that it just made me smile.
As much as I love this story, I love it enough to say, 'No epi'. The ending is absolutely perfect as is, IMO.
~Autumn~
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Love is All Around
So beautifully conceived and written! Real relationships are like this (when we're lucky), with the misunderstandings, silences and reconciliations. I really enjoyed the entire story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Love is All Around
Great chapter. I'm glad they finally admitted thier feelings. Please update soon?
Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Love is All Around
What a great ending--you really tied it together. Loved the way you started with the ending and worked backward to the lemon. Really loved the ocean/wave imagery. Truly wonderful--I really loved reading this fic. And, of course, an epilogue is welcome :)
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Love is All Around
Loved this story! I want to know what happens next?
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:21 PM · On: After The Storm
Okay... so I got too caught up in the story to review. That was very wrong of me. Great story: a great combo of drama and comedy. Looking forward to future chapters. Thanks again for the great story.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Friends in Low Places
Wow. I didn't see the Lauren thing coming. I just thought she was another bully because she found it fun
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Let's Talk About Sex
Great dramatic chapter. Thank you.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:42 AM · On: The Dance
Great!
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Make New Friends
Another good chapter. I'm getting really excited to see Bella and Edward meet again as adults. Thanks for so much background info.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Biology
Another great chapter. Great writing style. Sorry I don't say much, but I don't have your gift of writing.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Bike
Fun chapter. I love the insight into all the character's personalities: good, bad or otherwise.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Brown Eyed Girl
Great chapter letting us get to know 'your' Edward.
Reviewer: fanfictionaddict (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Signs, Signs, Everywhere Signs
Simple, but gripping beginning. You're telling us lots without giving too much away. Can't wait to read more.
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