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Reviewer: milene (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Epilogue
This story is an amazing story and shows a beautiful and heartbreaking way to love. I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!
You have made my day so much happier-)
AWESOME!!!
XOXO
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow - what a wonderful story! I enjoyed it so much. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Reviewer: lyssalani (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Epilogue
When I was looking for a story, I skipped over this a couple times. I never felt like I would like it. However, I am so glad that I decided to check it out. I really enjoyed it! Youre an awesome writer and i plan on adding you to my faves!! Thank you for creating a wonderful story. Keep on writing!
Reviewer: samii (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Epilogue
I've just spent all day rading your story instead of revising and i've just got one word to say,
Amazing
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Epilogue
A really lovely, emotionally complex, and ulimately satisfying story. (One that I am truly glad to have not started until it was complete, as I would not have enjoyed waiting between updates.) Thanks for sharing you gift!
Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Epilogue
That was a great story! A great ending !!!
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Epilogue
amazing story - your writing totally blew me away. This plot is so unique and I loved every chapter. I'm glad I only came across it when it was finished because I don't think I could have handelled waiting for this cliffhangers to be solved! Anyways just wanted to say great job, definitely one of those re-readable stories :)
Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Epilogue
I liked this a lot too; The highschool stuff was especially interesting and I could feel Bella's angst. Nice ending too - a little different than the typical HEA. One note: The Tempest is a comedy, not a tragedy...and one of my favorite plays and fitting for that point in the story: "Our revels now have ended..."
Reviewer: bloomingdale (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Epilogue
i really liked this. i love the stories of bella and edward where it isnt so perfect and happy - until the end when they get their heads out of the sand!
Reviewer: emilycullen0 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Epilogue
It would be a lot better if there was more writing about them being together than them getting together.
Reviewer: emilycullen0 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:27 AM · On: No More Words
I am very pissed right now!
Edward should always have the power! Not Bella! You are so lucky that I'm still reading cause I normally would of quit ages ago!
Reviewer: miranda (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Epilogue
I really loved this story. Thank you!
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Love is All Around
lol that metaphor will have me eyeballing the ocean a little differently from now on
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Emotions
sheesh they all need to head off to see the Wizard for some brains courage and heart.
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Love Stinks
oh thank god he finally found his balls. I was starting to worry about shredward
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:16 PM · On: No More Words
Yeah I'm missing Batward right now..this story is painful. I guess it will make any HEA so much sweeter
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Brown Eyed Girl
lol it almost makes you wanna smack Edward that he is having such a fabulous day when Bella is suffering :(
Reviewer: ayden2408 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Epilogue
i loved this story i also read breakfast at tiffanys on fan fic and i loved it
Reviewer: brighterthansunshine (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:36 PM · On: After The Storm
So I was planning to just leave one long surprise review at the end since I'm sure you didn't know I was reading this on the sly the last few days, but you pulled out one of my favourites quotes at the end of this chapter and I couldn't resist!
Dear LORD this has been depressing! I wasn't full prepared for this story's emotional impact, but I think you've played their emotional states brilliantly. I love Edward's shredded art sculptures- they sound like something I would be selling at work.
Full review at the end, but I couldn't resist now.
Author's Response: OH MY!!! I did not know you were reading. Yes, I know LC is depressing. I didn't realize it was as I wrote it. I feel a little guilty now by how sad it makes people. I only hope it makes the overal emotional impact worth it. THANKS!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Epilogue
Very happy ending. I thought that Edward's art was a little weird, but hey, who I am to judge. It's what brought them back together. I came to appreciate Rosalie, Lauren , and especially Alice a lot more as the story progressed.
You did an amazing job juxtaposing Bella's recovery from depression and Edward's downward spiral.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 06:55 PM · On: The Dance
First off, I'm kind of glad that Charlie got hurt (as long as he gets better) b/c that will get Bella to move back to Forks/Seattle.
Second, what happened between Bella and Mike prom night? I know they hooked up, but it couldn't have been very good if she is calling it the incident.
Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:52 AM · On: More Than Friends
Loved your description of her orgasm. I don't think I have ever seen it compared to surfing before!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Friends in Low Places
What a beautiful story! I totally love it!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:18 AM · On: More Than Friends
Oooooh! So beautiful!
Reviewer: mcanary (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Epilogue
I'm not sure how to discribe how i feel about this story. So intense at times, light at others, the feelings of what teenagers go thru, the loss of friendship-in more ways than one, but then the gaining of it back, the tightness that gets in my chest as i read some of the passages, what can i say...i loved it ;-)
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