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Reviewer: Bella3268 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 11:04 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

LOVE. IT!!!! ^—^

Reviewer: LauraMO (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:20 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter


Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:55 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

That was bloody hot!!!!

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:20 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

Very sexy and well written.  Loved it!

Reviewer: EdwardBellaRenesmee (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:02 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

very good. this could have actually happened and sounds more like them. i would love to hear about his reaction in seeing her come out of the bathroom in that nightgown before she fell asleep.

Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:24 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

bellas the lucky one thats all i've got to say, damn lucky

Reviewer: witchlight (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 02:16 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

What a lovely fic!  You did a beautiful job with Edward, particularly with his joy at finding he hadn't harmed Bella at all.

Reviewer: badazzles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:05 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

This is great. I mean WOW...Damn IT!!  IS it HOT in here?

Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:29 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

nice job.it's so beautiful.you trully captured the love the felt for each other and thank god you didn't turn into something ugly and disgusting.amazing job!!

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:32 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

That was really good. I love seeing into Edward's mind although it's not really into Edward's mind as Stephenie Meyer didn't really give us too much in Midnight Sun with being in Edward's mind, but this is so very close!

Reviewer: ritz (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:04 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

that was very good!!..well written!

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:00 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

You REALLY captured the essence of Edward....great job!

Reviewer: sleepyhead91 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:24 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

loved it! well done hope yu write more!

Reviewer: Jeninas (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:17 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

WoW! I love it!

I think, that it coud so happen...

<3

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 12:31 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

I absolutely loved it.  You really captured the essence of the scene - his fear as well as the intense need both of them experienced - but still very much demonstrated the love and devotion between them.  It was also written very well.  Great job!

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:08 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

This is my favorite time of Bella & Edward together and you extended the "missing" pieces wonderfully!  Thanks so much for a enjoyable experience

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 03:52 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

Fantastic story. It fit seamlessly into BD. Really perfect! Thanks.

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 02:27 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

Wow, that was beautiful. I think I prefer this missing scene over the first one, because Edward is not bombarding himself with hatred all night afterwards. Success! Haha! Great writing, I liked this. :)

Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 12:17 PM · On: The One and Only Chapter

Another awesome scene. Wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing!

-Alyx

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 09:37 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

This was very erotic and intense.  I could really feel the passion in their lovemaking.  Great, great job with this!

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:53 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

LOVE this!  Great vignette of "what-Stephenie-didn't-put-in-the-book".  And unfortunately, unless they plan to make Breaking Dawn and give it an "R" rating, this is probably as close to a visual as we're gonna get!

Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:31 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

This was so sweet and tender.  You crafted something very beautiful.

 

Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:22 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

and looks like u have done it again

1 word AMAZING

thankyou for this little prezzie of joy on my lunch break!

Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 03:49 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

Another good one!  These are the best story-based love scenes in EPOV that I have read.  As I said in the other review, they are very Edward-passionate, but non smutty.  WOW!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 02:50 AM · On: The One and Only Chapter

So I think this is a concept a lot of people have tried to write about but I will say this, never have I actually encountered it so...PERFECTLY!!! 

This was amazing. I think if SM had actually had the courage to write the scenes we all desperately missed from the book, it would've been just like this. You really did a great and wonderful job =]

 

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