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Reviewer: dblkickflip720 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Intervention
God so sad :( I can only hope for the best
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Responsible
Please please please, on't make Carlise die, don't make Edward die...Im in here, reading trough the tears and begging you for a novel you have already written..don't make them die, please...
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Divine
I get the same feeling reading this as SM books, i couldn't stop reading and i needed to go and do so much but nothing could pull me away, love it.
Author's Response: LOL, Thanks Maria... trust me, i'm like that with writing it too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for all those pretty stars!! xoxox Bec
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Unwanted
Wow bec over 1000 review's that is so great. You know this is a great story... I have a 14 year old daughter and she ask to read it I told her yes and she is going to start it on friday... I read her the 1st chapter and fell in love with it...... Kym
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Kym. My 14 year old daughter and a few of her friends read it too, and they all love it. I tell them to skip over chapter 17 though... lol... i got my daughter to read that chapter on ffnet, because it is rated pg13 over there... the version on this site is NC17. One of my daughters friends has read the NC17 version, and she was most impressed, lol... but i wasn't.
Chapters 26 and 27 are finished and posted on ffnet if you want to go read them (the link is on my profile)... qjmom is on holidays, which is the reason for the delay with them being posted on this site. I'm working on chapter 28 tonight... then 29 is the epilogue, so the story is nearly over. Thanks for all your support throughout this story, i always love your reviews. xoxox Bec
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Goodbye
WOW I have no words.....
Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Divine
This was just amazing to read...
Author's Response: Wow, thankyou for the amazing compliment. There's only a couple of chapters to go until the end... i hope you stick with me. :)
Reviewer: nicewordusage (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Unexpected
I did NOT see that imprinting this coming. You're a genius. I am very attached to this story and can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: BMM80 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Divine
This is the best story I have read so far. I felt real emotion reading this. Will you be writing more soon?
Author's Response: Thankyou so much, and yep, i sure will. chapter 26 is submitted and awaiting validation, and i've JUST finished writing chapter 27, it's being beta'd as we speak, and will be posted on ffnet in about 20 mintues, lol. quick enough for ya? :P
xoxox Bec
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Divine
EPIC "AWWWWW"
Oh my God, that was so beautiful in a very "the notebook" way!! <snif>
Reviewer: LPetty415 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Compassion
OK... I'm a little disappointed with how easily Edward just decided to switch back to domestication. Maybe it was because I liked the "new" Edward just a *little* too much (haha), but I feel like it was too rushed. I'd much rather have seen Edward leave and go back to hunting on the streets, maybe popping in now and then to see the baby, and have Bella gradually come to realize what we all know she needs to.
Well... maybe I'll learn to like this plot turn in future chapters.... Other than this one complaint, I've thoroughly enjoyed the rest! Great job!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Goodbye
ah...more tears...{Mora leaves to buy more tissues}
Author's Response: Awww, just you make sure you come back to us Mora, you can't stop there. Keep the box of tissues handy, you'll need them for a little while yet.
Thankyou for reading and reviewing, and for all those beautiful stars!! *hugs* Bec
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Shock
heart wrentching...{Mora wiping tears away}
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Unwanted
wow...this is deep...love it
Reviewer: mommachace (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Divine
you r such a talented writter and i so love your stories, please finish
Author's Response: Thankyou :) ... More coming soon. xoxox
Reviewer: songirl (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Discovery
Rivetting. I am squicked out and in suspence and can't stop reading.
xox
songirl
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Divine
Very nice. So sad that it's over. Of course...you could always keep going with a Twilight: The Next Generation story about little Edwob Charlisle....please????
Thanks for a great read.
Nan
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Choices
I'm annoyed that you had to run through all the wolf aging, imprinting lore here; readers should know this canon stuff already. But from your previous A/N's I understand why you have to. (Apparently some of your readers haven't read The Saga, and yet somehow stumbled their way into this fic and made it through 20-odd chaps...)
I'm just glad it was Seth and not Paul...but think of the angst potential! ;^)
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Compromise
"AN: I am very sorry to learn that I have lost a few readers because ... people aren't fond of the idea of Wolves imprinting on babies..."
Imprinting is a necessary plot device in Twilight; no one here should be AT ALL surprised or shocked by it, and--in this ONE case--should get their minds OUT of the gutter! What rock have these people been hiding under, and why are they here if they didn't read The Saga?
I expect they're the same morons who thought Bella's love for Edward after the fact wasn't "believable." Good lord, who ARE these people...and again, why would they read anything here if they can't accept two canon truths: E & B's true love will always prevail, and Imprinting Happens. :^)
As for "Furiousward"...You are absolutely dead right on E's reaction. The only part that doesn't ring true for me is that they seem to agree that he might abort her again "if necessary." I can't see either of them even SUGGESTING that, let alone considering it or being okay w/it. It doesn't make sense to me. Otherwise, though, you're right on.
The story seems to be barreling quickly towards its end, alas. I hope the next couple of chapters are long and complex before you tie it all up in a nice neat HEA bow...
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Divine
Sweet and hopeful. I'm a little worried for Bella about why this pregnancy is seeming different...
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Dedication
Yeah, but I think Bella's forgetting one thing: she will never, ever be able to leave her child, esp a child she bears herself.
Besides, isn't what she's doing nearly as bad as what Edward did? Ignoring his will and his choice NOT to have a child?
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Dedication
Yeah, but I think Bella's forgetting one thing: she will never, ever be able to leave her child, esp a child she bears herself.
Besides, isn't what she's doing nearly as bad as what Edward did? Ignoring his will and his choice NOT to have a child?
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Intimacy
Pretty hot for NC17! Not that I mind, surely..I think this is the only fic in my favorites that ISN'T an M.
I truly like where this is going...
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Reconciliation
"He hadn’t meant Renesmee any harm, he was just trying to save my life. He couldn’t have known what she was. I realized that..., but my anger at him for violating my free will, combined with the grief of losing my daughter had made me need to blame him… when, in reality, if he hadn’t done what he had done, Renesmee and I both would have died. It wasn’t fair of me to punish him forever for saving my life. She had been an impossibility from the start… I couldn’t blame him just because I hadn’t realized that in time. He was my husband. He had promised to love and protect me. Didn’t saving my life fall under the heading of ‘protection’? Hang on, 'Was' my husband? Still is my husband… yet, how terribly have I treated him?
Rationalization? Perhaps. But it doesn't really matter; destroying Edward will not bring Renesmee back or restore Bella's happiness; she isn't a vengeful person. E & B together is the only way this story can end. (I hope...)
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Divine
Thanks for the update! I love this story SO much. You have no idea....
I thought this chapter was very well done, and I'm so happy Bella forgave Edward. Very well done.
Reviewer: imbatnan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Solitude
"I allowed him to pull me against his body, loving the feel of his hard cold body against mine. I felt like I had come home." This is really what it feels like when reconciliation is the right thing to do: you can feel it in your soul.
And you were right to write them into some private time, to give them a chance to find their way back to each other. Screw anyone who says otherwise.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan... i hope your getting my replies, or you'll get quite a shock when you reach chapter 25 and see that this is still a WIP, lol. If 'private time' is your thing, you should LOVE chapter 17. ;)
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