wow, just wow!

I must say, I am waiting very impatiently for number 32.  PLEASE!  I'M DYING!

This is the best fan fic EVER!!!!!

Thank you!  Thank you!  Thank you!  LOL :)  I've never been so happy to see the numbers 1 - 9!

Waiting (impatiently) for part 2!  Biology Rocks!!!

I laughed,  I gasped, I "what-ed",  wow, is about all I have left. A very entertaining story. Thanks. I can't stop reading.

aaahhhhhh so super sweet!!!!!!  Great chapter....and remember...he did say forget the dare!!!!!!!!

another brilliant one.  i love how edward found the notebook. and i love even more his addition!!!  cant wait for the next update!

HAWT

You write amazingly!! I just recently found this and just spent the last 4 hrs reading it!! it is amazing!! I cant wait for more!!!!

Because of Bella, I would never be alone again.  I would never be just one.  I was about to be one of two.

Oh I adore that line. It just oozes of all the romanticism that is and always will be Edward. Hot sex or not - at the core of his being this is what he's all about. Just. Damn. So sexy.

The rest of this chapter? HOLY HELL!

First we get more details on what the boys were thinking about the discovery of Bella's tatoo. Thank you! It cracked my shit up at the same time it was exciting to really get a peek at why it turned them on.

THEN? Then Edward found the list. While she was sleeping! He got incredibly aroused by it! And then he made his own little notation! Hooray!!! I'm glad I wasn't that far off the mark with my imagination. It was as hot as I pictured it would be. As for his little notation...hilarious. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to that little discovery.

Then? Aw, he somehow crawls even deeper into our hearts by making Bella's final moments with the truck both sweet and incredibly hot. Ice cream. Bella is so going to get him back when she figures out why he brought ice cream. Somehow, I don't think he'll mind her revenge. *snicker*

So bravo lady! It was fun, exciting, had a panty wetness factor of 10 and still left me wanting more.

Much love,

~Lisa

Hi There

I have never posted or reviewed before,  infact your story is the first fan fiction I have ever read.

Last week I bought Twilight to see what all the fuss was about (I did the same with Harry potter 5 years ago and have been avidly hooked ever since and read the full canon at least once a year) then I saw New Moon and Eclipse cheap in a shop so bought them too. A few days later (while on holiday) I woke at 7.30 am and though "what the hell I'll give that book a go"...at 2.30am the following day I finally decided to go to sleep even though I was only a few chapters into Eclipse! I finished that as soon asI woke. These works have intrigured and excited me in a way I didn't think possible, so much so for the first time ever I decieded to write fan fiction. I am a few paragraphs in and thought for research I should read some fan fiction and here we are...that was yesterday I decided to start with the List and have consumed all 19 chapters.

I LOVE IT...it's already improved my sex life and I've been married for 10 years!

It's giving me the confidence to really carry on with my writing, I need to get past the exposition and have the confidence to actually type the meaty stuff and see it in black and white.

Please keep up the good work and I hope you achieve your publishing goals.

 

Many Thanks and Kind Regards

Kryogen

Author's Response:

Welcome to the madness Kryogen!  Glad you're hooked like the rest of us!  And so glad you're enjoying my story!  Write on!

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg. okay, i know that looks a lot like gom over and over again, but what i am trying to say is:

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! oh my motherfuckin' GOD!!!!!!!!!! oh, the cruelty! please please please write another chapter by today! or type it up or whatever, but just please! with an edward sundae on top (by the way i loved that part!)

luv ur fanfics,

one of your biggest fans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey There! You are so talented...!!!

(i know that you already know that but I have to...SAY IT!!! again!!!)

Someone told me about your story and I read it in two days!

I really like the way you treat Bella and Edward!!!

It is like watching behind a keyhole!

By the way, it is priceless when Edward says the F*** word!!!

Waiting Patiently for your next chapter!

:D