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Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Laura,
I haven't read another ff author that writes Edward as well as you, in terms of first keeping him in character, then developing his character beautifully. You so perfectly balance his utter devotion to Bella with his acceptance of his lust and their growing physical relationship. Thank you for putting so much heart and soul into this story.
Richelle
Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
You are a goddess, or Dr. Laura. I'm not sure. Many men (and women) are blessing you for your vision and encouragement. Health insurance should pay for this.
Please give me the ultimate in happy endings ... soon. I'm about to bust.
Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
#37 for Bella's list:
Seduce Bella with a striptease. One restriction: she must be restrained so she can't touch Edward--or herself. She can only watch. Objective: make her come.
Reviewer: jadevolturi (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
you promised that friday is the latest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, please, please, please, PLEASE upload another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It has been submitted. It is now in the hands of my validating beta. And she is usually pretty quick but I don't know for sure if she'll get it up today or tomorrow!
Reviewer: leiram (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
When are you going to put the next chapter ?????????????????????????
I know writing its not easy but your story is great and i cant wait to read more.....
Author's Response: I submitted Chapter 20 for validation around 5 p.m. this afternoon. Hopefully it will go up tonight but probably no later than tomorrow. Kallie is usually pretty fast.
Reviewer: banana526 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
So let me start by saying that I have read this entire fic in less than 2 days... OMFG! This story is so HOT! I am looking forward to the next chapter! :) You seriously ROCK!!!
Reviewer: leiram (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Pleas keep writing these is great...............
Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
This whole fic is the hottest thing I've ever read ! Oh and the car ... Good choice .
Your now In my authors who Rock Hall of Fame!
:D
Reviewer: eschob (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
the truck-bed thing was very sweet! (and hot!) can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: maikingie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Very awesome! I have spent the whole day reading through the entire story thus far. Thanks so much. I can't wait till the next one come out. Your story just seems to really fill in that space in an adult way. Almost making me wish there was an adult version to the twilight saga...but if there was...I'm sure yours is a great example of what would be. Thanks for the time you spend writing for us fans. I totally appreciate your time!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Keep writing
Reviewer: Loreli DeLovely (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Love the tenderness.......even when they are naughty, he always respects her. YOU STILL ROCK
Reviewer: Loreli DeLovely (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Love the tat!!!! AWESOME idea! You frickin ROCK
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I've just dicovered your story and read the 19 first chapters in 2 days! It's awsome, absolutely amazing, very addicting and beautifully written!! Just the right amount of lemons and sweetness!
Bravo!! Continue!!
Reviewer: 2footprints (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
WOW. this was an amazing story. I am pretty sure i was turned on for the majority of the chapters ha ha. You have an incredible way of writing erotically but still mature. Great work and I look forward to the ending !
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Yeah, I already left a review for this chapter, but I just reread it and had to let you know something...
You have altered my thinking with this story (possible forever). Now, whenever I make a "to do list" I think about this story. I can no longer make a grocery list without getting hot!
I'm ruined, Laura. In a good way. :)
Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
another excellent chapter! You are such a terrific writer! Really a pleasure to read. Can't wait for part two! Thanks!
Reviewer: Loreli DeLovely (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Love the leaving of the panties!! So much fun. YOU ROCK!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Laura, ummm, wow. That's all I can say...it was amazing to read the full account of Emmett's and Jasper's reactions to Bella's tattoo. It was f'ing hot. And honestly, having Edward find the list? I nearly peed my pants. When it got to the part about something sticking out of the mattress, I actually gasped out loud and exclaimed, "Oh my god!" My husband asked me what was the matter! Have I ever mentioned that he loves "The List" nearly as much as I do (but he's never read it, if you get my meaning...)? And then, as if I wasn't already absorbed by the hotness, EDWARD REALLY DID CALL OFF THE DARE!!! HOLY HELL!! And he added to the list!!! Woman, you are killing me!
I think my favorite part, though, is Bella's ongoing empowerment through this story, and Edward recognizing internally how much she fit in with the family. It is clear that she is just as strong a member of the Cullen Clan as everyone else, and that is so rewarding to uncover as a reader. Edward's pride in finding and keeping her is just the icing on the cake that is "The List." I can't wait for Part II to come so quickly! :)
Reviewer: Mace (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I was gonna wait until I'd finished this story but hey, I'm no lurker! Your Bella is finally vocalizing all the thoughts I had as I read SM's books... Yes! God, this so hott... I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Also, Dirty-Talking Edward is beyond ridiculously sexy!
Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Excellent as ususal!
obbesseddeb
Reviewer: Sparkleshine (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Can just picture sneaky!Edward adding to the list. Very good story.
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
wow.woman you are trying to kill me every time it takes you to post something i think i'm going to die!!!!love it by the way!!you rock!!
Reviewer: starfish_fairy (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
This was so sweet! I love this story it is one of the best ones I have read. I can't wait to read about #8. :D
Reviewer: AndieCullen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! I can't wait for more!!! This is the HOTTEST fanfic I've EVER read!!! WAY TO GO!!! So when are you getting us the new chapter, sister??? Can't wait!! Smooches to you from the husband for giving me all sorts of FANTASTIC ideas!! Thank you!!
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