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Reviewer: MandyW (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow! You ROCK! I can't quite imagine the physics of the lab table but who cares!?! Great job, and keep up the amazing work
Reviewer: lovestorylover (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Love the Jacob fantasy part by Edward. Floved it! Please tell me there are still many more chapters to go and you will be posting the wedding and honeymoon soon....................
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Just Way Too Much FUN!
Good golly...my husband is quite happy that I've found THIS story...LOL!
Can't say this big enough:
THANKS FOR SHARING...
;)
Kathie
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Well done !!!!!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ummm, wow!!!! Fantastic as usual. It will be interesting to see Edward's reaction to tasting her blood.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I actually got a little teary-eyed with Bella's one on one talks with the Cullens. It was beautifully done, not too sappy, but genuine. Very nice touch! I love how you make it not just all about sex with this story, it's about the love and connection and committment. And the committment to smut, of course.
I absolutely laughed with Edward's fantasy about claiming Bella in front of Jacob. How absolutely primal. Somehow I don't think that's going to be happening (or at least happening with Bella being aware of it)!
And Bella figured out that Edward saw the list! I was jumping up and down a little when she so cluelessly didn't notice at first except subliminally. And then she noticed. Boy did she notice. Loved the mental image of the whole Cullen clan participating in the list. hehehe She does realize that she would get major props from Emmett for it? He'd respect her even more! And Edward by association.
Thanks so much for the update! You totally made my weekend.
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I was wondering when she was going to realize that! :D
I love this story. So much. I have nothing of real consequence to say except that this story is one hell of a lot of fun. Go Bella! Go Edward!
Reviewer: lucky-kate (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
THIS IS FRINFIN GOOD OMG OMGMOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG THAT IS SO AWSOMEEEEEE
Reviewer: GinaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
That. Was. AWESOME!! :) Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Ride 'em cowgirl!!!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved this epic chapter. Every word was awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
O.M.G. I am SO glad that I saw this story recommended on The Gazebo. Holy hell! This is such a damn good idea for a story...I can't wait to keep reading...too bad real life has to interfer at the moment.
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Again, an awesome chapter... can't wait for more!!! Had a thought for the list when i was at the gym the other day... Edward & Bella in a sauna! It'd be interesting to see what sort of effect the heat would have on Edward's skin! Just a thought... this story's got me so hooked!!!! update soon!!!!
Reviewer: jamiejackson42 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
THis chapter was by far my fav. I loved Em's part and I love YOUR Edward. I was upset about the car at first but after reading your explanation I totally got it and you're so right.
PLEASE DON'T END THIS STORY AT THE WEDDING i KNOW IT'S COMING AND i DONT' WANT IT TO END!!
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
there is nothing better than Robporn...............
Reviewer: jadevolturi (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
ADD A CHAPPTER AND I WILL LOVE YOU MORE THAN I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!! wow, you could say i'm obsessed...
Reviewer: songirl (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Saturday morning delight. Master of desire. Too good read alone, and too hot to read in public.
Reviewer: sarapride (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I think you are doing an excellent jo! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
WOW! you HAVE to post the second part!
Reviewer: Anitamichichi21 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Awwww me missed. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: RedBlood (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
ABSOLUTLY AWESOME, FANTASTIC, INCREDIBLE ...
Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
PLEASE update. I love this Edward and Bella. I can understand in this version why they love each other so much beyond just some mysterious pull. This is the best type of sexual fantasy: insanely attractive EDWARD who respects you and cares about you but wants to fuck you like an animal. The sex scenes are beautifully written. Incredibly hot but so smooth and well crafted. With so much of this stuff I've had moments of eye rolling at the hyperbole but yours are just ohmygodohmygodohmygod.
UPDATE!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I savored every word. Awesome job!
Reviewer: angela of alagaesia (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Thank you Laura for everything in this story and tonight for the truck scene. The sentiment was so perfectly Edward, you d such a beautiful job writing for him, and the way you express Bella's love and affection for this gesture was perfect.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
That was delicious! And holy shit, I'm so excited that Edward found the List. Yes, that's right, I'm capitalizing it. It's a proper noun now.
I can't WAIT for #8...hubby and I are high school sweethearts, and I'd be lying if I said I never thought about going at it in an old classroom ;-D
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
hahahahahaha Edward discovers sex journal. watch out bella hahahaha
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