Loved how long the chapter was.  Of course your writing was wonderful.  The lab scene was romantic and then sexy as hell.  I can't wait to see if you write stories of Bella as a vamp.  Especially with her abiity I bet you'll write some steamy stuff.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

omg! whoooott bella AND edward! lmao

they gonna have one long healthy sex life... ahaha

OMG! What an awesome chapter! I love Edward's fantasy about taking Bella in the woods and Jacob seeing them. Although I don't think it would be a good idea.... I love that Edward thought it! I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. You rock my world!

Great chapter Laura!!!   And I love the long chapters :)  I like how Bella talked with each of the Cullens and how each of them responded to her.  Her conversation with Jasper was something I really wish was in the Twilight books, and I totally agree that even though the separation in New Moon was painful (for all of us), it took them to a completely different level when they were reunited.  So I'm so happy that you had Bella thank Jasper for being somewhat responsible for strengthening their bond in the end.

And her conversation with Rosalie..... I thought that was very fitting for Rose to just respond and ask her to call her Rose and leave the rest unsaid.

Excellent... excellent.... can't wait to see Bella pull out the Cowgirl hat on Isle Esme ;)

Loved it!

The scenes qith bella and each of the cullens were so sweet and perfect for each of the characters.

Loved the lab table scene, hot !!!!

Haha Edwards little jab against Jacob was hilarious and so... human! A jealous Edward is actually hot! It would be awesome for Bella to totally be blase and nonchalant about Edward finding her list! Maybe that would shock the pants off Edward... pun intended! haha

You fucking rock!!  Keep on!!  Hopefully sooner than later?  Sorry to be so demanding.  Just can't get enough!

Hello....Just finally had to leave my first review...I'm rather new to Twilight fandom, but this is one of the first stories I've found and read, and I love every part of it... I've even printed it off as one text file so I could read it on the go.  I've read to through Chap 17, so I'm printing off the rest tonight so I'll have quite a fun evening ahead of me, especially since I actually have no kids and will have quiet..... love the writing, as a past fanfic writer myself, I am a stickler for quality, and sometimes it is hard to find great smut with high quality, and you have nailed it perfectly, now I must go read..... Congrats on this great work, you have outdone yourself.....

Kelly

Okay... I just first have to tell you that it is very rare for me to cry at stories.  Yes, I feel emotion when I read them (when they're done well) but there are only a handful or two of stories that have brought actual tears to my eyes - and that's spanning all the fandoms I've ever taken part in.  Bella's little speeches to the Cullen familia just felt so real and I could practically hear her saying the words that I was literally tearing up while reading this on my couch.  This may be a bit biased, but I was affected the most from what she said to Rosalie; you managed to capture an uneasiness between them that melted into something more without it being OOC or too over-the-top.  Yes, the sex was lovely as always, as was Bella's mini-freakout about Edward finding the list, but for me, those took a backseat to Bella's conversations.

On a side note, I'm glad you are continuing this a bit after the wedding.  I do, after all, hope to see the moment when Edward tastes Bella's blood again (in a non life-threatening setting) and some of the other pieces on the list that obviously have to wait a bit.

<3M

Wow, this chapter was fantastic! I really loved the bio table- that was absolutely epic and I'm glad we got to read that from EPOV.

Also, I'm so excited for the honeymoon and Bella acting out Edward's fantasy- that will be absolutely awesome. Her reaction to him finding out about the book was freaking hilarious and brilliant.

The only thing I really didn't like was when she took everyone aside and talked to them. It just seemed too rehearsed and unnatural to me. I know she meant it to be sentimental but it was kind of cheesy. But that's just my opinion.

The other thing I liked was when she called Rose and asked her to go shopping. At first I was hesitant but then seeing how much Rose appreciated it, I thought it was a good touch.

Great job!

All I can say is your list just gets better and better.Can't wait till you add the next chapter. Both of them are naughty, but I am glad that this is something they want to share with each other. I don't know makes it more realistic  I guess. Update soon.

I just love your writting and this story. I laughed when he found her list.

Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze.  She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind.  Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.'  Fucker. I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS ONE - LOL!

Great writting.