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Reviewer: SunkenTeethDrivenBlood (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

haha! i was wondering when Bella was going to figure it out. i'm glad she has the upper hand again. Edward will be in for a surprise, mwahahaha! awesome chapter. i laughed so much.

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Wow, I think this is my favorite chapter so far.  It had a little of everything.  I especially loved the sentimental moments of this chapter.  Bella going around to each of the Cullens and saying thank you was so touching.  Your writing is so great that I felt the different emotions for each talk that she had.  I also liked the way you played out #8 by adding in all the items that represented all the firsts they had shared.   But act of "on our lab table" was heart stoppingly HOT!

I can't wait for the next chapter.  They will actually get to go all the way now, and I can't wait to read about it.

Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Totally awesome epicness!!!!!!  She knows...she accepts......he fantasizes....the lab table, Fantastic!!!!

Really enjoyed the one on one talks she had.  Especially the one with Jasper.  I always felt that they were kindred spirits with a special bond.  I hope their relationship blooms after the change.

While I can't wait for the wedding/honeymoon....I really an excited to see how you handle "the change"

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Wow, and wow, and WOW!  The best chapter yet!  Laura, you are amazing!  I cried, I laughed, I loved it, I'm sure I'll write more than 1 review since I'm going to have to read this more than once to absorb it all.  I'm still cracking up over:  "Jacob would see and I would mouth 'mine.' Fucker."  Classic!

Ok, I'm going to start reading it again.  I don't think this huge smile splitting my face is going anywhere for a while...


Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

LLLOOOVVVED IT! I loved the non-smuttiness, I loved the sexy good times,  I loved it all!

Reviewer: EdwardLover1 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

You had better write fast!!! Please go write now!!!! Yay #8, I've been waiting for that forever!!

Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Thank you! This super-long chapter was phenomenal!!

Reviewer: mattys_mama (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Hot hot hot! As usual, your imagination is fantastic. You must have one hell of a sex life. LOL!!

I'm begging though that Bella's voyeur fantasy and Edward's fucking her in front of Jacob fantasy don't coalesce into one event - I'll cry. :-(

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

It's wonderful!  I loved the emotional aspects of the beginning of the chapter.  I am so pleased that you included Bella talking to all of the Cullens.  It was very poignant.

The lovin' is still hot!  What about sensual massages.  I know it might seem tame considering all the other things they have already done, but if you are still looking for more ideas.  I offer that as a possibility for them.

Excellent chapter all around.  It struck me reading this chapter that your story is EXACTLY the reason that Twilighted was created.  It's just perfect.  Thank you for sharing this with all of us. :)

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Edward's fantasy about Jacob watching is friggin hilarious!  I can't wait until Bella is a vampire...

Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I loved this story. I cried when Bella was telling her feelings to each member of the Cullen family, it was very sweet and so Bella. I loved  the lab table scene,and and lemon there. WOW!!!! The part with Renee and sleeping over, everything in this chapter was excellent!!! Very good, can we have more and soon. Thanks so much for a great story.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Major props to you.... I love that you've included Edward in the List and that he has his own now! Whee!!!

Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

OMG the LAB TABLE !!!!  It is so worth the wait for any words you right.  Simply fanfuckingtastic.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

omg what a great chapter had me sooo going hehe cant wait for the wedding woot


Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

HOTHOTHOTHOTHOT...holy cow --er "crow"  :D (that still sounds weird to me...I've only seen it in Twilight)

Ok, that rocked.  And I really love Edward's panty fetish. 

So so glad to hear that you're continuing this past the wedding...I truly hope to see what Bella does with that pint of her blood.  *grin*



Reviewer: tmr (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1



Like everyone I'm sure, I am THRILLED that you're going to continue through the honeymoon and beyond!  Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

AWESOME chapter girly!! I am speechless.  Where do you come up with these ideas?? They're 110% hot, hot, HOT!!! CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This certainly was a little bit of epicness!! The scene on the lab table was hot. I was wondering after the last chapter how you would pull that off, but you did it with style, as usual! Can't wait for the wedding! (And honeymoon, of course!) :)

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I loved this chapter!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

My,my,my. This was one of my favorite chapters in this awesome story only second behind Edward seeing Bella's tattoo in the shower. I was wondering when Bella was going to realize that Edward added an item on her list. What a payoff! She wrote those entries without a second thought and went about her day. It took until much later when she realized the difference in where she left off last and began today. I love how you laid each pebble one by one feeding the shock and epiphany that she did not write that entry. Alice was perfect too. I was laughing so hard. Oh my! Great writing. The best by far is when Alice said it was not her and when the entry was written. I almost fell out when Bella realized that Edward saw the list and made an entry. 

Okay, the rest of the chapter. The testimonials were great and very heartfelt. I love the talk with Rosalie the best and her response was classic Rose. The dinner in the Biology was very romantic. It was great that the meal was a nod to their history together. It is interesting that discovering Bella's list of fantasies has made Edward think of a few of his own long since hidden. This should lead to one great wedding night. 

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: nannagud (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1


can not wait for more!

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This is great -- please tell me that you are going do a "List" version of the honeymoon!! It would be such a letdown if you don't!

Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I have no words lol. I'm beginning to be left speechless with each chapter because of how epically good they are! You do an amazing mixture of eroticism, sweetness, humor, and all out dirty goodness that leaves us all weak in the knees.

The moments Bella had with each Cullen family member were so sweet. I especailly liked her moment with Jasper. I'd imagine he'd be carrying a lot of guilt for what happened during her birthday.

I have to admit that I was squealing along with Bella and Alice at the realization of Edward adding to the list. Cannot wait for the cowgirl hat to come into use. ;)

Like always, you are brilliant and we all love soaking in each one of your words.

Can hardly wait for what is to come! (pun? :P haha)

~ Much love and respect


Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

So GOOD! I was thrilled to see the update, but wow it included so much yummy stuff.  Bella catching on that he added to the list was superb. I loved her sweetness with the Cullens. It seemed so real that she would want to talk to each of them. Getting married definitely brings out the sentimental fool in all of us. My favorite though......

Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze.  She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind.  Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.'  Fucker. 

TOO HYSTERICAL. I love it. Thanks for the update to a spectacular story.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Oh my FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!the most AWSOME yet!!!!!!!!!!!! I TOTALLY LOVE it and the fact that Bella knows that Edward added to the list just makes it better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the honeymoon and for after her change!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll honestly be in MOURNING if you EVER end this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!If you EVER run out of ideas, well, there are probably thousands of us out here willing to offer suggestions..........................Not that you need them!!!!!

Keep up the GREAT work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Just LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   

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