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Reviewer: ksgeo (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You are a freaking genius.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
:) hot
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
awww Edward soo sneaky!!! But enjoyed every moment of it!!! I llloovvvveee how he's so much more relaxed now. Can't wait to see how the wedding & honeymoon play out =)
Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i loved edwards last fantasy with jacob seeing them have sex, it related to one of my favorite scenes in the book where jacob hears edward tell bella about his favorite nights =]
i dunno, possesive edward is the best kind in my eyes =]
cant wait for the next chapter O.M.G its gonna be amazing!! xx
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved all the sweetness at the beginning! I also love that your Rose isn't a total bitch. She was cold and a little selfish in the books, but she did warm up to Bella over time. I think even without Renesmee, they would have been close after not too much longer.
And of course...I LOVED the lab scene! So hot! You are amazing, you know that? You should.
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
So good! Now, let's get on with the rodeo, cowgirl!
Reviewer: tabs (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
fantastic! as soon as my friend told me the next chapter was up i dropped everything and came online straight away to read it... you didnt disappoint!!!
i love that she had those one on one moments with the rest of the cullens and the convo she had with rose was realistic. it wouldnt have been right if they had have ended up the very best of friends and become inseparable!
of course im loving all parts relating to bellas list... ;)
cant wait til the next installment...
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh my God, so hot!! Can't wait for the wedding!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Loved that she realized that Edward added to her list. Need to see Edward pull out his own list on their honeymoon. Anything to make this story go on FOREVER.
Reviewer: Chriscrew (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Unbelievable! You are amazing! I love Step Meyer but OMG you ROCK!! By far my favorite fanfic!!
Reviewer: fangrl17 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!! i loved the idea of his possesive fantasy i would luv 2 see a possesive edward fantasy play out, hell i'll take possesive edward he's really sexy when he's possesive. loved it and cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
the last fantasy was my favorite by far. I'm sorry to see this end. I do hope you end up covering all the list items, but of course, I'm sure you will. Otherwise, what's the point of them on there, right? There Should BE a sequel. With Edwards fantasies onit. Or maybe the list gave Alice an idea. Of course as long as she and Jasper have been married, I'm sure they've played all those out, but maybe she can have flashbacks....Just saying. It's brilliant writing and I've suggested it become part of the iFic series.. Hope you don't mind.
Author's Response: I'm thinking of a sequel, Edward's List, that would further accomplish items off of Bella's while also adding Edward's fantasies in. iFic? Really? That would be sooo cool!
Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hey, could you write Edward's list? Clearly, he has his own, so it would be....uh.....fascinating see what his was.
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Can';t wait for 36. And for Edward's list.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Holy crow Batman, another awesome chapter. LOL @ Bella figuring out Edward added to her list but missing what it really meant. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love this whole list thing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Loved all of it! Not only was it completely hot on their lab table
(because DAMN it was!), but I really enjoyed Bella talking to all of the Cullens and thanking them. It was so sweet! I think Jasper was my favorite.
Can't wait for the wedding!!!
Reviewer: _LuvTwilight_ (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Seriously, loving this story and I think they need to compare lists now that the cat is out of the bag.
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Flipping fantastic as always Laura. This story is just too hot to handle. I love that Edward even considered TRYING number 32 - such progress!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh. My. God. Laura. Cullen. I am used to giving very specific, in-depth reviews, but for the epic chapter 19, version 2.0, I don't know that I will have room to do it justice....where to begin...(I'm starting my own list...)
1. Bella's thank yous to the family were brilliant. Precious. Lovely. Heartfelt. Should have been in the book. You are a genius, my dear, and it helped so much to solidify Bella's relationship with each family member in such a formative way. I was especially grateful you included her conversation with Rose and Carlisle. Rose, because the arrived at an understanding, and Carlisle, because we finally hear the depth of emotion he feels for Bella.
2. Working in the lab table, sheer brilliance, my dear. On the one hand, it was so sweet to have all the things that solidified their early relationship--Biology, mushroom ravioli, the lemonade cap...on the other hand, the naughtiness that ensued post meal was even better! You write some of the most fantastic lemons around, hands down, but I really think you outdid yourself this time. Not only do we have Edward doing 8 AND 32 AND 41 (that sneaky dog!!), but also we have dirty talking Edward to seal the deal for Bella. Priceless.
3. Bella finding out Edward added to the list--OMG, beautiful. And, of course, we have Alice there to help bring balance to it all for Bella to ease the freak out. That was nice of you, I'm sure Bella appreciated it! But the things she added to the list, hmmm, let's just say I'm really looking forward to THOSE!! She is getting more courageous as each number gets crossed off the list, and I love to see her empowerment.
4. EDWARD HAS A LIST???!! Okay, this is even more exciting than Bella's list, admittedly...I think he will need to pull it out on the honeymoon, so they have a sit-down, no hands barred list discussion on the honeymoon and cross every fricking number off the list and add LOTS MORE!!!
5. Suffice it to say, just when I think you can't make the story hotter, you do. Woman, I thought I had seen the meaning of the universe when you came up with the tattoo, but clearly, you have many more tricks up your sleeve. Frankly, I cannot wait!
You continue to rock my world, Ms. Cullen; remember you are the sole reason I even signed up as a user on the site so I could review your amazing stories. Keep it up!!! MOOOOOOORE! :)
Reviewer: closettwilighter (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Holy freaking shit, Laura!!! I nearly came on my damn keyboard!!! I have to have more! Please update soon! Fantasizing Edward has put me clean over the edge. Damn, now I need to clean up!!!!!!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG YAY!!!!! No. 8! I swear I've been waiting for this one since you first wrote it and HERE IT IS!!!! I'm so happy and excited! Plus No. 32. OH YEAH! Now I'm cheering for 33. Come on wedding and honeymoon cause MORE is gonna happen!!!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ummmm that was absolutely amazing. when is bella going to tell edward that she knows he read the list? hmmm? loooove it :)
Reviewer: dramaqueen872005 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Bella's horrified reaction to finding out Edward had read her list was hilarious. But what she has planned sounds mighty fine! Great #8! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: EmeraldsTwistedSister (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Enthralling as usual.. I'm so glad she realized he added #36. The new dimension is awesome. But the best part is :
Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker.
You genius author, you!
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