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Reviewer: amandasj (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Holy moly...The bio lab scene was so crazy hot and got me thinking about high school all over again! Of course, my bio partner looked nothing like Edward but whatever. LOVED this chapter and can't wait for the wedding and honeymoon! Yay!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow. This was a wonderful chapter. I LOVED the entire "Bella realizes Edward read the list" scene. It was cleverly written. I am so excited for the honeymoon!!!! Now they can step things up! I can't wait!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
DAMN! HOT HOT HOT!
Reviewer: sbrettgal (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ha! love Edward thinking about his fantasy with Bella in front of Jacob and then calling Jacob a fucker. Hilarious!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved the lab scene....Fucking HOT!!! You know...I'm thinking my own list wouldn't be such a bad idea :D lol....
I thought Bella's reaction when she knew Edward found out about the list was great!! :D lol.
I so cannot wait for the wedding and honeymoon!!! Woohoo!
Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG!!! First.. I LOVED the bio lab scene.. hotness amplified!!! Edwards list is just.. well.. ridiculous.. I think he by far has the better list!!!
I CAN NOT wait for the Honeymoon.. hot damn!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Thank you for continuing this story!! It's one of the very first ones I read (ever) and I just love it! The tone, the flavor, everything about it.
The saddest part is that the next button didn't appear when I got the bottom of the page. Not seeing those four little letters is such sorrow...
Update soon please so I can smile again!
Reviewer: PintoBean (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
*stops breathing*
*exhales*
Damn! Go you!
Seriously, that was freaking amazing! And ending with Edward's fantasies was awesome and makes me wonder what's on his list.
Oh yeah, when Bella told Alice to pack her a cowboy hat the first thing that poped into my head was "Yeehaw, save a horse ride a cowboy!" <[:-)
Bring on the wedding and honeymoon!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
yummy
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG THERE IS SP MUCH TO REVIEW ON!!! Because your chapters are so freakin long!!
1) i loved bella talking to all the cullen's; it was really sweet and i could definetly see her doing that, and all the cullen's responses were dead on
2)HOLY CROW DETENTION SCENE WAS SO HOTT and way to go seductive bella!! and i'm glad edward let go a little : )
3)awwww mushroom ravioli : )
4)awww lemonade : )
5) ^^^They both reminded me of reading twilight for the first time and now i'm gonna read it again
6)I started cracking up when she said "oral examination" haha
7) OMG bella found out that edward found out about her list and added stuff (YAY!)
8) I now want a cowgirl hat for myself haha
9) i cant wait to read about the wedding and the HONEYMOON!!!
10) best freaking chapter ever
11) you are amazing
12) looking forward to 21!!!
13) xoxo
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Effing Epic, that's what!! The biologu lab scene was soooo hot. Wow, these two are going to have a lot of fun in the next few centuries. Hurray for Edward for loosening up so much and double hooray for Bella for getting over the fact that her list had been discovered and being able to laugh about it!! This was also a wonderfully warm and fuzzy chapter. The best. Thanks!!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved it! Especially Edwards inner struggle with himself in the classroom.
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i absolutely loved it. you know how to put just the right amount of smut into a great story. i can't wait to read more.
Thanx for writing and please post more soon!
chasity
Reviewer: Melliegirl13 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved it! I think it's awesome and a little hilarious that Bella figured out that Edward saw the list. That is perfect! This story always keeps me entertained and wanting more when I'm done reading it. I can't wait to see what you have for the next chapter. The wedding and the honeymoon!!!! I'm so excited! Keep up the great work and update soon please :D
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Incredible chapter! It was so hot!
Reviewer: melasia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh, I love this chapter. I love the connection with the Cullens. I love that Rose gave her the chance to get closer. I love that Jasper shared his feelings w/ her. I love the conversations w/ Alice...all of them...in my fictional twilight world this is the exact kind of relationship they have...sisters who trust and love eachother completely. Please tell me they are still honeymooning on Isle Esme...I wish it were real...I would so go! Oh, did I say I love this chapter? It has been my favorite...you made me cry at the emotion, love, and complexity of their world.
Please don't make us wait to long for 21! ;~) M
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
loved it and love you!
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Love this! It was long and wonderful! I'm glad Edward saw her list and is trying to help her get some items checked off :)
Reviewer: Avery Grace (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Delicious! Fabulous! It makes my day when I see an update to the List.
Reviewer: Dark Fea (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Was the cowgirl really edward because it sounds more emmett like to me
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
What a great chapter! I cannot wait for the wedding and honeymoon!
Reviewer: Danielle629 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Cowboy hat! That's great!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
clearly there is much in this deliciously long chapter to be praised, but for some reason there's one that sticks out. most fics portray rose as an immediate BFF to bella and still claim to be canon. but it's not. i like how your rose does soften to bella as they are becoming sisters and keeps to rose's fierce family loyalty and yet also sticks with "book" rose in her caution to jump all in, struggling to agree to disagree in accepting her choice to become one of them.
oh yeah, and the whole multiple-list-items-checked-off-at-one-time was effing hot.
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Aw I loved the Jasper moments--its funny that he's such an underused character in canon but he's so popular in fanfic. I squeed when she hugged and kissed him.
Loved the teacher roleplay, and the (sorta) 69. But Im glad that at the end you have Edward focusing on the vampire stuff--which is what Ive been looking forward to the most. Especially role play vampire. Check out the beginning of the fanfic The Red Line if you havent yet--its an AU Human that starts with Edward doing awesome vampire roleplay.
And I love that they both have voyeur fantasies--PLEASE do the one about mike newton hahaha.
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love the one-on-one time she had with the cullens, thanking them. And I loved her realization of Edward adding it to the list, that was precious :) Yay for the Wedding and the honeymoon, cowgirl "i wouldn't know it was called that" she is too cute for words sometimes!
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