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Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

oh. my. god. ok. hold on. ok. ok. im ok. ok. now. first thing. just the intro had me freaking out excited. i would LOVE for this to go on for the rest of my life. seriously. and i love how she told everyone how much they mean to her and everything. i always thought she was a little unappreciative of alice, but that made up for it. and the bio lab. holy HOT. no words, only.. HOLY MOTHER OF GOD hot. thank you thank you. as always, you are fan-fucking-tastic.

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

epic is right! THANK YOU :)

Reviewer: vickiurb (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Need. More. Now.

Don't stop!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Edward has come so far in his far in his attitude and 'hipness'. And to here him say 'fuck', that's enough to push any girl over the edge. I look forward to a little wedding reception 'play' and a VERY steamy honeymoon. I will ready with a glass of wine, some soft music in the background and 'my little friend' to read the next installment. Afterwards I am sure I will need a ciggy-butt and a cuddle@! LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

FUCKING CRAZY!! So he kinda has a list of his own!!! And the lab table! Holy hell girl!!!! I loved the Jasper talk, and damn poor Jacob, I have to say don't do that to that poor boy! LOL! I'm excited and so very spoiled by this chapter...I don't know...now I'm gonna want another this long and full of edward goodness...please!

Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

omg omg omg!! this was so very good!! i can not wait for the next chapters!!!! update!!!

Reviewer: Beckylady (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

They're getting married, getting married, married! Thank you so much for committing to finish up the list. Hehe...then again, if they keep adding to the list you might never finish. LOL. This chapter was wonderful. It had steamy goodness, but it also had some family happiness. Awesomeness! You rock. :)

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

ok so that was freakin great can wait to read more... can you give us more of edwards list <evil smile>

Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Please, please, don't stop after the honeymoon! Just keep writing forever...until you're old and gray and can't remember how to spell, just please keep going. This story is one of my favorites!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Awesome chapter of epic proportions of win! Especially Edward fantasizing about Bella while taking matters into his own hands. Heh... Cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I love love loved this chapter! It was all kinds of greatness! There is so much to love! I enjoyed her talkes with each of the Cullens, especially Rose. That was nice. I loved the lab table, HOT! I think it's hilarious that she finally realized that he found the list AND added to it! And then, to top it all off, we get Edward stroking himself & fantasizing...what's not to love?! Oh, love the part about mouthing 'mine' to Jacob!

Can't wait until the next chapter...wedding & honeymoon...*squee*...

Thanks!

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I have decided that your longest chapter yet is one of your best yet. That's all. I love the fact that Edward has a 'list' of his own, even if it's in his head. Hopefully he will share it with Bella. I love that Edward is working with Bella to complete her 'to do' list. What you have here is...pure genious. I mean every word.

Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I love this story! I can't wait to keep reading - I can't wait to read what you write about the wedding and honeymoon. Keep up the good work.

And on a side note...I think my husband would like to thank you because this story has left me inspired on more than one occasion!

Reviewer: theatregirl (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Amazingly hot!! More . . . please??

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

OMG! I think this was one of the best yet! How do you do it?? I swear, not a boring sentence in the whole chapter! I love this story so much I am actually sad to think of it ending! I am super excited about the next chapter!

Reviewer: cbear (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Woo *fans myself off* AMAZING. I love this story and I love you lol... I cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: skshep (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Oh yes! I forgot to add my favorite line! Alice: "Um, go Edward?" LMAO! I literally laughed out loud at that! Totally something she would say! Love it! I'll definitly have sweet dreams tonight! My husband is loving what your writing does for us!

Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Wow. This chapter was jam packed with emotions. First I cried, Bella talking to Alice and Jasper was very sweet. I laughed of course--several times. I felt cheated when Edward was packing up the stuff from the biology room without fulfilling the fantasy--you are such a tease, lol. It is a great, great chapter!!

Just a couple of things/thoughts--I am glad that you are continuing the story past the wedding, but thought you could also turn this into a series once you feel the story has reached the end--of course you may be ready to be done with it by then but I am pretty sure that we would all continue to read it!!

I have been thinking about the blood that Carlisle drew--would be cool if she bottled it in a wine bottle and created a loving label for it.

Also read a few of your other reviews, people commenting and questioning whether vampires can be tattooed--well, I am just finishing reading eclipse for the 4th time and thought of something. The only thing that marks SM's vampire's skin is their venom (Jaspers scars) If Emmett wanted a tattoo, it would seem that he could collect Rose's venom and add some ink--I know, lol I am thinking about this waaaay to much!!!

Reviewer: skshep (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

GUH! The biology room was just as you said ... EPIC! My heart was even racing a little bit! Gah! Any ETA on the next chapter...? I don't want to rush perfection by any means, I'm just on the edge of my seat for how awesome your take on it will be! And PLEASE do us all a favor...there is nothing worse than all of the build up to the 'big event' and then him just 'sliding in' (for lack of a better term?) like it's no big thing at all! I mean COME ON! Ah! Now I'm on a soap box...I'll stop now! LOL. My point was, you're awesome, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: 1234cullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

oh my fin god this was hilarious

awsome as hell love edwards list lol

bella and edward having sex and jacob seeing that :) lol

cant wait 4 da honeymoon !!!!!!!!

gosh i feel like a teenager again!!

PLS update soon

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I thought it was very sweet how Bella made sure to talk to every one of the Cullens. It was just the right touch because who knows how much of her human life Bella will remember? It's important to say these things now.

Dinner on the lab table was very romantic, but my goodness, Bella really did make a pig of herself with dessert. Having two is just greedy. Lucky girl. Oh, methinks that Bella needs to get Edward some glasses, a tweed jacket, and maybe a ruler. In case, erm, she has to serve any more detentions.

I am so happy that Bella didn't notice #36! Yay, we got five more! I don't even care why she didn't notice. Let's give three cheers for preoccupation!

I think that Edward needs to write a List of his own. I think it might be interesting to see the progression in his entries as related to the progression in his relationship with Bella. And as Bella's proves - Lists are great things.

Reviewer: tnkrbellsam (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

When I saw this story was updated, I immediately grabbed a glass of wine and went to open it up. When I saw your AN I started laughing. I loved the lab table. It was perfect, especially him just ripping the panties off. Very Edward. I love that she finally realized he found her list, and freaked out, but was then ok with it. I can't wait for that part of the honeymoon!!!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH love it ! I love that there are more additions to the list ... edward taking bella against the door ... that would be one of mine too ... (*blush*) ... awaome work again ! I cant wait for the wedding *eeek* YAY and the honeymoon ! omg im getting myself all worked up!! lol cant wait :)

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

OMG that was, as you say, completely EPIC! Edward's fantasies! WOW!!!

Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

AHFUCKINGMAZING.

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