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Reviewer: robsessedheather (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
sweet mama jama. i love every second. im sure others have said. i was getting worried at first about her not noticing edwards addition to the list. and then right as i was really getting worried about it. BAM! you threw it in there in the most awesome way. i love that alice came over to talk about it. haha. typical girls!!! I cant wait to read about the wedding/honeymoon. seriously. you rock.
Reviewer: sparkle66 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I can't wait to see what Bella says to Edward about him knowing about her list!!! I feel you are going to do wonderful things with that. I also can't wait to see the wedding and honeymoon :) :) I know you are going to do amazing things with both!
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I am so ready to take it to the next level! Seriously, it's time!
Another amazing chapter, and definiately one of my favorites. It might actaully tie for first place with the one where Bella dominates Edward (OMG I still reread that one over and over)
As much as I love the physical part of your story, I have to say the emotional connection between these two is amazing. It really does touch my heart :)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
shit! it was worth the wait! i did nothing but wait for it friday and saturday (i live in a different timezone altogether) and i was getting anxious. but this was definitely worth the wait!!! i love it! i wish edward's list is longer though.. as long as bella's? hahaha.. seriously, i'm also happy to hear that this would go on after the wedding. i wish it would never stop even after bella is a vampire. =) you warned this is long chapter but i hardly noticed it. i enjoyed it so much it was done before i knew it!! i can't wait for the next chaper. Gawd i hope we don't have to wait long for it. thanks so much and keep up the good work!
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
That. Was. Epic. Best chapter yet of the whole thing. Not only was it unbelievably sweet, what with the interaction with Bella and the Cullens and all of them getting their feelings out there, (especially Jasper, AWW!) but man was it HOT! ExTREMELY hot! I figured she would discover his addition to the list sometime soon...can't wait to see what she has in store for him on the honeymoon! Whoo girl, you know how to write some steamy stuff! :)
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great chapter! I was all confused when Bella started at number 37 and didn't even notice that Edward had added something to the list. I couldn't imagine her not noticing, she's usually so perceptive. Then when she started thinking about it I starting laughing. Telling Alice to pack a cowboy hat was great :)
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
WOOO WOOO! lol OME it is getting SOOO good. I can't wait till the nexy one! Great job!
Reviewer: mrsalreyami (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Crap, that was SOOOO hot. You are killing me with this story, seriously. it is f-ing fabulous!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Sooooo good!!! LOVIN the lab scene! Giddyup Bella! Can't wait for the honeymoon!and how hot is his Jacob-watching-MINE fantasy?!? Yummy!!!!!
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Loved it. Loved it. Fucking LOVED it!!! I am already drooling for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great story!! Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: nannanutbread (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
no, love you, love you! fucking amazing...so hot!
Reviewer: southerndaisy (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I LOVE this story!!!!! Not just because it's hot, but because it also has heart. One minute I'm tearing up when Bella is thanking everyone, then I'm holding my breath during the lab table, and then lmao picturing Bella in a tree and Edward saying "mine". It's the best. You're the best.
Reviewer: artzyme1122 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Greatness!!!!!!!
Give us more!
Reviewer: dells (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I swear, your story is the gift that keeps on giving. :) I'm so happy that it will continue into the honeymoon. I recommended The List tonight to a good friend of mine that has been trying for years to get me to read fanfic (X-Files first, then Harry Potter fic), and she's happy that the Twilight world finnally suceeded in tempting me into reading fanfic to get the porn the originals lacked. I felt it was only right that I made sure she reads this awesome epic you've crafted. In addition to The List, I also rec'd that she read Past and Present (you like that one too, right?) I can't believe how lucky I've been to find such awesome fanfics so quickly. I've read a lot of fanfic over these last few weeks, and The List and Past and Present occupy the #1 and #2 positions as best stories I've found so far. I've re-read The List a few times, and will want to enjoy it many more times, so I hope it never gets taken offline. Please, Please, Please hurry to post the next chapter, I can hardly wait for the rid'em cowgirl scene! :D It's unfortunate that Edward wasn't able to quite reach far enough with his mouth to take care of the 69 fantasy while on the lab table, but I'm sure you'll set an awesome scene for that as well, and I'm looking forward to it, you tease. Looking forward to some rough post change vamptastic sex too. Hell yeah! I'm also dying to see if Edward enjoys fulfilling the vampire role playing. At some point, can you make Edward purr again? that was so sexy. :)
dells
Reviewer: Twi-zzled (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
laura!! wow!! loved the lab table scene! love the edward has his own ideas and died laugh at the against the tree jacob would see and he would mouth 'mine' wow!! loved it!! i am super excited for the nest chapter!! keep it alive
Reviewer: Inwen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I thought it was fantastic....the lab table was perfect!
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Loved the chapter! Love the story! Oh how I would love for that last fantasy of his to happen. Don't get me wrong, I like Jacob, but he needs to know it's Bella & Edward not Bella & Jacob. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: let_me_be_bella (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ok this chapter is a lot of what i thought was missing from BD so i really liked it, Bella thanking everyone, Rosalie officially being her friend and all that. I loved this chapter and your story in general!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I have so much churning in my head right now that I can't make sense of it all.
HOLY HELL'S FIRE! I have never laughed so much with a fanfiction before! "Son of a bitch", "Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker.”! LOL!!!!!!!!
I swear you’re gonna kill me with this! It had it all. Humor, romance, HOT ACTION, and more HOT ACTION! The biology lab scene still has me shivering all over. Yikes!
And then, when Bella figured out that Edward had read & ADDED TO THE LIST, I almost fell off my chair in mortification! I swear it’s as if I’m Bella & feeling every ounce of her humiliation. But I love how Alice came to immediately make Bella feel better. And I SOOOO loved the interaction between Bella & Rosalie, umm, Rose. Lovely.
This story is going to be the death of me. But not to worry, I love every freakin’ word! What a way to go!!!!!
(BTW: than you for confirming that this will continue past the honeymoon and Bella’s change. I just can’t wait to see Edward’s reaction to Bella’s blood. WOO-HOO!!!!!!)
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG! I was just gonna complain about how long it's gonna take for Bella to notice Edward's addition! I almost knocked over, I tell ya. And the lab table! That sneak little Cullen tease. I'm gonna punish him.
The family talk was very sweet and moving. Thanks for doing that for Bella.
I love Emmett. End of story.
It was also nice of Bella to invite Rose to go shopping. There's a little bit of a barrier between them, but I'm so glad that Bella's making the effort and Rose is being open to it.
Jasper is a sweet heart.
And Alice is always so loving and kind and a great soul to be around.
And Edward and Bella together is just perfect. It's to beautiful to see them be so trusting of each other to explore their boundaries.
This is one of my truest favoritist stories and I cannot stand to wait for updates! Please have mercy on us and update very soon! OOOOOhhhh I just CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Will you have a little illustration of Bella's dress? I know that you may "custom-make" it for her, but if there's any picture that kinda describes it or pictures that can be comboed to show, please link us! = ]
You rock it so hard with this story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This was fantastic!!! Edward needs an official list, definitely!!!
Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Loved it.. Just absolutely freaking loved it...
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Mmm... I'd like to see Edward's list in print... Bella probably would too. Make her less embarrassed that he saw hers.
Reviewer: mp604 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
awesome chapter laura, as well as being hot i just loved the really sweet moments with bella and family members :)
I've been checking everyday desperately for this chatper to be posted so please put the wedding up soon!!!!
you're amazing!! x
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