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Reviewer: Candi_ass (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i don't think i've giggled this much in a long time!
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
my gosh
That.
Was.
EPIC.
Just wow...and argh the table scence was my favourite but I couldn't stop laughing when bella realised that edward had read their list !!!!
Still...I am looking forward to edward's reaction when vampire bella gives him the vial of her blood...
you have robbed my of my words and I don't know what to say except scream like a fangirl and cheer for you to continue
rachie
Reviewer: Krissy1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG that was hot.. This story is doing wonders for my marriage or should I say sex life lol...
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG!!!! The biology room was priceless!!! all of it!!!! Also her talking to all the Cullens individually especialy Jasper touched my heart.
Bella realizing that Edward saw the list hilarious!!!!!
And i'm really liking Edwards list too,especially the bit of Jacob watching lol,loved that,it is so him to think about that.
Cant wait for the honeymoon!!!!
And as always u are so wonderfull love u !!!!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
SQUEE!
I actually woke my soon-to-be-hubby up when I squeed at the part where she realized he added #36. He sat up and asked if I was alright. I just grinned at him and went back to reading.
I LOVED the Biology room scene. Very yummy.
This is great!
Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
love love love it as always. hehe...did he jizz on the biology floor and not wipe it up? Cuz that would be kinda funny. Gross...but funny :D
Author's Response: Yes, he jizzed on the floor. No, he didn't leave it there. There's a line that says something like, "We cleaned up and retrieved our things..."--that was meant to encompass Edward cleaning the floor. But I didn't think I needed to be explicit about it! (I agree it's kinda funny to think he might've, though!)
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
it was wow.what happened in biology class.wowwoowowowow.i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker." Hahahaha!! Oh my gosh - I really hope you make Edward's list come true, too! I can't even believe all the ways I love this story! Yay they're getting married! And honeymoon whoo!
I have to say I am thrilled to hear that you're planning on extending the story past the honeymoon... I hope it continues for a good long while =) Thanks for updating! It always makes my day!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
haha, she found out haha!
Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Awesomesauce!
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow... that was awesome. I can't wait to read about the cowboy hat... and Edwards fantasy that Jake see's was hot. Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ok the class room was truly hot loved it. Truly funny edward wanting jacob to see i was laughing so hard. I cant wait to what happens at the wedding and the honeymoon this story amazing
Reviewer: Prongsy (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You know, I feel a little bad for not reviewing sooner... but you are a goddess. I'm a writer too, and I know how it feels to be too addicted to Twilight to write anything non-twilight related. I just wanted you to know that even though it's not original fiction, it's still damn good! Thanks for sharing your gift of storytelling with us!
Sam
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
My man has no idea why I have become so inspired of late, but he's NOT complaining! Thank you for the extra long chappie full of super hot sexytimes as well as little droplets of hinty goodness about what may be coming. I REALLY hope a hunt and some vampiric role playing makes an appearance - also 39 and 40 are so hot. Oh who am I kidding, I just can't wait for the whole list to play out like some sex-starved perv. This fic is masterful, and I also loved the tender moments like B sharing her gratitude with each Cullen and winning over Rose.
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
wow. there's so much that happened in this chapter I don't even know where to start!
Second, I didn't know it was called ‘cowgirl.' I mean, I understood what it meant and, now that I was reading it there, maybe I had actually heard it somewhere. But I'm not sure I would have known to write that. I would have just put, like, ‘me on top,' or something.
Son of a bitch.
This is by far my favourite line in this entire story. I love it-- it says so much about her character and it makes me adore her. Innocent and snarky, tougher.
Mostly though, I'm just excited for the honeymoon/wedding. Thanks for such a long chapter! (TWO of them!)
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
HAha Epic is right! love the reveal of her finding the entry I was wondering what happened too! awesome update!
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Sweet Mary Moses! I had to stop half way through and take a shower. I love your version of Pervward. His POVs kill me. Ungh!
Reviewer: kaottic1 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i'd love to hear more of edward's fantasies!
Reviewer: SmugUnicorn (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
That was soooo good. Long but excellent chapter. Can't wait for the wedding & honeymoon. Nice of Edward to help Bella with the List. LOL.
Reviewer: shelby524 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG!!! Thank you soooo much for the super long chapter ^.^ All of this stuff was amazing, i can't wait for the next update *squeals like alice*
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I was wondering when I was reading it how she missed the added number. I was almost chanting. "Read back over the list. Read back over the list. You didn't write 36. Read back over the list." It was rather amusing if I say so myself. The table was hot. I was half expecting him to pick her up and do No. 32. I'm looking forward to the wedding are you going to have Jake come around or stay away. If I remember correctly didn't he comment on their sex life in the book at their wedding. It's been a minute (almost time to reread).
Reviewer: teamtwi (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I am new to this site, and this hs to be the BEST story so far!!!!!! I started reading others, and find myself coming back to this one!!!! Keep it up!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
it's just so good! so glad you're taking this story past the wedding because i'm dying to see what happens with her blood...can't wait.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You are good, really good. That's all I really have to say.
Reviewer: robsessedheather (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
sweet mama jama. i love every second. im sure others have said. i was getting worried at first about her not noticing edwards addition to the list. and then right as i was really getting worried about it. BAM! you threw it in there in the most awesome way. i love that alice came over to talk about it. haha. typical girls!!! I cant wait to read about the wedding/honeymoon. seriously. you rock.
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