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Reviewer: JulesnJim (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Dear Ms. Cullen - I have been reading this for awhile, and I finally just had to post and tell you - you are awesome!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You're right about calling it Epic!! holy crow, this chapter was DA BEST! the mix of the lab table plus the 69, the addition of QUALITY stuff on the list, and (...omg) his number of fantasies...especially the last one about Jacob... it seems Bella is not the only with a voyeurist curiosity.lol
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
LOOVE IT!!!
Reviewer: JuicyT (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
LOVED THE EPICNESS!!!
Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next. You are a fantastic writer!
Reviewer: Amanda Wilder (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Sigh...so wonderful. Thank you.
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
jeeeeeeeeeeeeeebus christ, but edward's last fantasy damn near finished me off!!! i need more!!! on the critical side, not only is this story damn erotic and very pleasurable, but i also think it's really well written! you so totally rock dude!
Reviewer: jlc (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG where is the next chapter!! This is so good.
Reviewer: Mamma4ever (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ABSOLUTELY FREAKING AMAZING!!! I love this story and at first I thought I wouldn't because it seemed so OOC with the books, but it doesn't matter, I freakin' love this!! YOU ROCK!
Reviewer: shellystareyes_stupidlamb78 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i wish this was bound and sitting next to my other twi books you rock ! ty
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Awesome chapter hon!! I love Bella realizing that Edward had seen her list. So awesome. Loving this story so much!
Reviewer: twimuse (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
omg amazing. i still love so much that alice is involved in all of the sexual plotting. i am looking forwrd to reading what you have on store for the vampire Bella.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
AAAH!! This is one of my favorite chapters!!!
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Holy Mother of Mercy.
:::heads for shower now:::
This is absolutely brilliant. Thank you for continuing!
Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS EPIC!!!!! it was soo frickin funny how they did that on their lab table i can't wait till the wedding but most of all the honeymoon :) and im really happy that you are goin to keep writing and not just stop at the night of the homeymoon i really want to read about what they are goin to do when she is changed :) i do have a question though will bella be getting pregnant in this story?
Author's Response: NO.
This is post-Eclipse/pre-BD---while I'll use aspects of BD, I am not holding myself to what happened in it. In particular, there will be no pregnancy.
Thanks!
Reviewer: ILvU (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Loved it from the start... hope we get to see sum of edwards fantasys been played out. Can't wait 4 the rest keep up the good wrk x
Reviewer: kmap111 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
It's very interesting really, not nasty surprizingly. At least not for me.
Reviewer: Sarichka (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i am speechless... i look like the cat that got the mouse XD
i loved it... *tries o think of a stronger expression* it was just so amazing. i want an edward, but doesnt everyone. my minds reeling :D
cant wait for more
Sarichka x
Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
AMAZING - so hot and yet so sweet! Fantastic work!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
One more thing!: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, lets follow up on some of Edwards fantasies ! Especially the one in the tree! OH MY GOD!!!!!!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
First of all, OH MY GOD!!!!
I was so excited to get this next chapter! I was impressed with how you, even though you have much improved Edward , kept his character true to his romantic form. I was impressed with the lab table scene to say the least, but I would not say that it is my favorite part of the chapter. I truly adored how you allowed Bella to have personal time with every family member. I t made me very happy to have the rest of the "cullens' involved. They are the family we all fell in love with and I was happy that you acknowledged that!
I was truly relieved to read that you will carry this past the wedding, as I am so completly intrigued with the idea of Edward drinking Bella's blood and can not wait to see where you go with that! Of course, now I need to go so I can buy a cowgirl hat!
Thanks
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i love this story! funny romantic and just plain sexy!
Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Assertive, possesive, sexually dominant Edward is frickn' hot....it is Sunday morning and I worship you. Keep writing
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Super Chapter!! I love it all!!! I think the Biology Room was very romantic!! I can't wait for their wedding and honeymoon!!
Reviewer: Picksee77 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Okay, I'm only 3 chapters in-but I'm hooked! Your Bella and Edward are so likeable and cute together-it's nice to see them in a normal sweet relationship-not always all angsty and intense. Even the "dirty" stuff has a sweetness to the hotness :) Awesome.
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