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Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ok another interim review - I'v simply no idea how I'm going to make it through this chapter if you keep bombarding me with so many wonderful conversations. I've just read the exchange with Jasper and blubbed yet again.. I swear Jasper was making me feel everything described by the characters, but its not Jasper its you.. Just want to say thank you to you, for making me love these characters even more than I already did, for helping me FEEL again, for filling in that huge gap in the story, for just being so bloody talented in your writing its un-bloody-real. THANK YOU! xx
Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ugh where did my husband go!
Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Mmm Can't wait for more. It's unbelievable how addicting this story is. Your writing is amazing and just when i thought the list couldn't get any better...it does. and not only that.... it seems like Edward is starting to make his own list! --Can't wait.
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
you have me somewhere between major lol and OMG/need new underwear and
arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh!!
but mostly lol!!
cannot wait for the next installments!
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
An interim review - I've only got as far as Bella and Alice's chat while shopping but I just blubbed like a baby. I don't cry easy so thats a huge compliment to you as a writer and you as someone who has taken characters I love and helped them grow even further than in the wonderful books. I'll do a proper review at the end of the chapter but just had to say how much I loved this exchange.. xx
Reviewer: Cleigh (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh my God. This was one of EDWARD'S FANTASIES! 36 + 41 = Fucking yes!
Ha Ha that was funny. This series is so totally addicting -- and you have over 4,000 reviews! That's something to be proud of. Obviously I'm not the only one craving pervy acts between Bella and Edward.
Sometimes I wonder if there is something wrong will all us mature (at least out of our teens and tweens, ugh) Twilight fans.......but then I'm like no, Stephenie Meyer just kept her books so G-rated. Tease.
Hey, I know you probably have this whole story planned out but just as a suggestion maybe you should redo number 27 once the big change happens. Yes, we have all officially lost our minds for Edward Cullen, a fictional character we are all in love with. Sighhhh...............
Great job on the entire story!
Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Amazing!!! I love you ;)
Reviewer: celticstorm08 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great update! So now Bella knows that Edward knows... I wonder what's going to happen on the honeymoon (besides 36 & 41...lol)?
Reviewer: teamtwi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I really hope that there is going to be more! Your stories are as hard to put down as the books were!!! Keep up tyhe awesome work!!!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Fantastic. I keep thinking there is no way for this story to get any better, but then you do it. And look at your reviews! You are truly in a league of your own. You deserve it!
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love your story! I can't wait to read more!! I cannot wait to see Edward's reaction when Bella presents her blood to him after her change! (I know that point is from previous chapters, but I just found your story and I waited to give a reply until now.)
Keep the awesome writing coming! I cannot wait to read the rest!
Sarah
Reviewer: shamrockon (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker.
i fucking love that!! omigawsh!! go edward, that's all i'm saying! update soon, i'm in love with this sexy story of yours!
Reviewer: jhayes (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
love the new items on the list and the vampiric items especially, you gotta go there. But you are the genius here! Brill
Reviewer: MildredDempsey (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I've read a lot of literature and erotica in my time. I've had to do both professionally for reviews and to decide if various stores I've worked for would carry the product.
This by far some of the best I've ever read.
It's also in keepng with the orginal characters. I go a bit crazy when fann fic has characters doing something that they just never would in the orginal stories. So far in these twenty chapters I haven't seen much that I don't think fits with Edward or Bella.
Plus, who ever thought detention could be that much fun :D
Reviewer: Twililo (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
" Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker. "
Love it!
Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love how she discovered that Edward had read her list. I loved the planning to pack a cowboy hat for the wedding...how about a leather whip to go along with it. I love this story I don't want it to end.
Reviewer: ms_mimi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I am new to fanfic. I have read a few others but this is BY FAR one of the best. SOOOOO erotic. Thanks for the inspiration, because I am making my own list for me and my guy.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OK!
I really can't express my extreme gratitude into words here. First, it was so beautiful that she was able to speak to each member of the family about her appreciation and love for them. That was something I wanted to read so badly and I thank you for writing it and writing it so perfectly, that it hurt.
Second, I am so profoundly speechless at the bottle cap. I had to get up from the computer and get my tissues because I was FULL ON weeping. No joke. I was weeping like someone told me someone close to me had died. I wept....twice.
Third. SWEET JEEBUS!! That is what i am talkin about when I think about them on the table. Hell yes! Please and thank you!! I had to um.... change wardrobe :) Thanks for upping my water bill with each new chapter. Hell, it's money well spent.
Finally, this is probably one of my favorite chapters you have written. It was done so well and to be honest, so beautifully. Thank you so much for making me FEEL this story, in many ways. Your writing is exquisite. Thank you thank you thank you for sharing your gift with us!!
AMAZING!!!((hugs you))
Reviewer: Tess (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Absolutely brilliant. Please don't stop! I can't wait to see what comes next! This has become my weekly fix :-)
Reviewer: Twilightxofan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
W.O.W.
I seriously cant wait 4 the next chapter ;)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
this story has a blast so far & can't wait to read more. don't make me wait too long!!!
Reviewer: Egyptgirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Everytime I read a new chapter u blow me away. I love how u manage to make them sexual in a way they couldn't b in the books yet u manage to keep them EXACTLY in character. It's such an achievement!
Another thing I love about this story is the fact that mixed in with all the delicious smut both Edward and Bella talk to each other about important issues in their lives without being overly angsty. Something I'd love 4 them to talk to each other about is how they both feel about the fact that she will lose a lot of her memories of this time once she becomes a vampire. Just a thought.
Anyway I just wanted 2 say ur brilliant and this is my favourite fanfiction ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This chapter was, indeed, epic! Bella's little scenes with each of the Cullens were so sweet, especially Jasper. Awesome lemon. And the reveal with the list was great too. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: JulesnJim (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Dear Ms. Cullen - I have been reading this for awhile, and I finally just had to post and tell you - you are awesome!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You're right about calling it Epic!! holy crow, this chapter was DA BEST! the mix of the lab table plus the 69, the addition of QUALITY stuff on the list, and (...omg) his number of fantasies...especially the last one about Jacob... it seems Bella is not the only with a voyeurist curiosity.lol
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