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Reviewer: Weezy77 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have never read such a story that i am so dependant on. i love absolutely everything about this story! the only part that i cant stand is the time in between postings.. ugh, but its probably a good thing cuz as soon as i find out that the story has been updated, everything in my life is put on hold. unfortunately most of my time reading this is on my iphone which doesnt allow me to review. im so sorry that i cant add some wonderful comments to your story more often especially when you are so nice to all of us with this incredible story- you are the author that most deserves it!!! anyways i just have one question, will all the items on the list be completed? i really hope so. thanks again for the amazing story

Reviewer: ApplesForEve (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

epic feels like a minor statement in relation to this chapter. it was all kinds of great, i think it would take hours for me to write down all that i loved.  i like how you mixed in bella's moment with the individual family members with the sexin' of the biology scene.... so many good times!

Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Completely amazing.  I love this story.  The part with Bella and Jasper was totally incredible.  I think that Jasper is definitly one of my faves.  I love that they were able to share their feelings like that..  Greatness!!!

Reviewer: eschob (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

love you too!

Reviewer: AimeeGA (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

My favorite part was in the end when Edward mouths, "mine" to the fantasy Jacob.  Something he would never admit to Bella, but you know he must at least think at times!!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Freaking A!!!! I'm so hot over here I think I need a cold shower. The fantasies are amazing. I think it is hillarious that they both have a fantasy about someone seeing them! Oh my gosh and the whole lab table role playing holy fuck! You are my idol right now. My mind hasn't thought quite like that in a few years, but now....I have a whole fresh stream of fantasies! I just don't even have words. I think it is hillarious that it took her so long to figure out that he had written in her list! I wasn't sure she was actually going to get that little tid bit. I can't wait for more....I'm seriously at a loss for more words even though I feel like I'm about to explode from the excitement and anticipation of what happens next. I am so happy this was so long by the way. Amazing!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

the list keeps getting better and better.

Now that Bella knows about Edward this should get real interesting.



Reviewer: twimomof4 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This was great! I love the Jacob would see!

Reviewer: MrsCullen1987 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

*BreathBreathBreath - and trying to produce some correctly written English*

After all I finally finished this chapter today.. I tried to read slowly, I tried to make breaks in order to not being finished too fast.. ;)

I am soooo addicted to your story and I really love and enjoy every word you wrote, every line, every chapter... and I am always like "OMG, that is sooo damn fucking hot/mind-blowing/sexy/sweet/romantic/lovely/wonderful/beautiful/ A M A Z I N G - there`s no possibilty that it get`s even better" - but this chapter is outstanding!!!!! After the balcony thing I was sure there couldn`t be anything to exceed that... But.The.Almost.69. Jesus Christ - I was nearly about to explode...!!!!  :)

Don`t worry, don`t hesitate, just keep going and write on and on and on - you are a goddess!!!!!!  And of course I have to add, that I love the emotional and romantic aspect of your story very much - this chapter really made me cry a few times... You are perfect and your work is really a great piece of art!!!!!  I have to admit that I actually love your story more than the "original" by know - your characters perfectly match with SM`s but develop even further and in a way, that couldn`t be any better for us addicts ;)

LOVE IT!!!   And again: T H A N K   Y O U!!!!  For every word!

Greetings from Germany

Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Oh. my. god..  Please please please please please please hurry up with the next chapter.  I kep thinking that there is no way this story can get any better, but you keep pulling it out of the bag..  Just wonderful!

Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Ok another interim review - made it to the biology classroom experience.   Oh. Dear. God..  Very very very HOT!

Reviewer: xorganisedchaosx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1


seriously, there is something about the way you write. it's captivating.


Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1


*unable to write, speak, think, see straight*






Reviewer: MeadowC (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I <3 possessive Edward! I'm so glad you're writing past the wedding. I can't wait to (eventually) see the change in demeanor when Bella is a vampire and they are "equals". Love it!! Great job. :)

Reviewer: Susie Q (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

This is a great story.  Love the more "realistic" emotions of Bella and Edward than SM wrote them.  I mean you know, in real life, no one could have been as in control as SM's Edward.

Bella's List is wonderful and Alice helping her - what a great idea because Alice is a mess.

Keep up the could work and the sex banter between Edward and Bella is so GOOOOOOD!


Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Ok another interim review - I'v simply no idea how I'm going to make it through this chapter if you keep bombarding me with so many wonderful conversations.  I've just read the exchange with Jasper and blubbed yet again..  I swear Jasper was making me feel everything described by the characters, but its not Jasper its you..  Just want to say thank you to you, for making me love these characters even more than I already did, for helping me FEEL again, for filling in that huge gap in the story, for just being so bloody talented in your writing its un-bloody-real. THANK YOU! xx

Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Ugh where did my husband go!

Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Mmm Can't wait for more. It's unbelievable how addicting this story is. Your writing is amazing and just when i thought the list couldn't get any does. and not only that.... it seems like Edward is starting to make his own list! --Can't wait.

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

you have me  somewhere between major lol and OMG/need new underwear and



but mostly lol!!

cannot wait for the next installments!

Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

An interim review - I've only got as far as Bella and Alice's chat while shopping but I just blubbed like a baby.  I don't cry easy so thats a huge compliment to you as a writer and you as someone who has taken characters I love and helped them grow even further than in  the wonderful books.  I'll do a proper review at the end of the chapter but just had to say how much I loved this exchange.. xx

Reviewer: Cleigh (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Oh my God.  This was one of EDWARD'S FANTASIES!  36 + 41 = Fucking yes!

Ha Ha that was funny. This series is so totally addicting -- and you have over 4,000 reviews! That's something to be proud of. Obviously I'm not the only one craving pervy acts between Bella and Edward.

Sometimes I wonder if there is something wrong will all us mature (at least out of our teens and tweens, ugh) Twilight fans.......but then I'm like no, Stephenie Meyer just kept her books so G-rated. Tease.

Hey, I know you probably have this whole story planned out but just as a suggestion maybe you should redo number 27 once the big change happens. Yes, we have all officially lost our minds for Edward Cullen, a fictional character we are all in love with. Sighhhh...............

Great job on the entire story!


Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Amazing!!! I love you ;)

Reviewer: celticstorm08 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Great update! So now Bella knows that Edward knows... I wonder what's going to happen on the honeymoon (besides 36 &

Reviewer: teamtwi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I really hope that there is going to be more! Your stories are as hard to put down as the books were!!! Keep up tyhe awesome work!!!

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Fantastic. I keep thinking there is no way for this story to get any better, but then you do it. And look at your reviews! You are truly in a league of your own. You deserve it!

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