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Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love that Edward is making his mental list-I can't wait for the honeymoon!!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ok so I just read this whole story and it is amazing. You are an amazing writer I can't wait for more of this....I feel really bad for bella rightn now lol...I can't wait for the wedding and the honeymoon. Can't wait to see how far you go with this story. I think you should never stop lol...Ud soon
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ok so I just read this whole story and it is amazing. You are an amazing writer I can't wait for more of this....I feel really bad for bella rightn now lol...I can't wait for the wedding and the honeymoon. Can't wait to see how far you go with this story. I think you should never stop lol...Ud soon
Reviewer: AshleeiRock18 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I am so loving this story so far, and I have a feeling the rest only gets better! Indeed she is going to have to build up that list ;D
you are doing a wonderful job! keep it up
Reviewer: g-riley (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Excellent, This is fabulous. I can't wait to try a few of Edward and Bella's fantasies out on my husband. Please hurry with the next chapter.
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Love it, love it, love it. When will you get to more???
Reviewer: Redlady (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This story is BOOKMARKED on my computer because I check back so often to see if it's been updated. LOVE IT!!!!!! The love/emotion that they share which allows them to be compltely uninhibited is AWESOME! More, MORE, MORE!!!!
Reviewer: eeva (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Just read the whole story chapter 1-20 non stop! A fucking MAZING!!!!
Can not wait for chapter 21.
You're a cool chick ;)
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Awesome! Monster chapter, but the best so far. I wasn't sure how the whole lab table thing would go, but it is better than my gutter brain imagined, and maybe I shouldn't admit this either but Edwards possesive fantasy at the end, holy crow, could not be any hotter!
Maybe Bella could do her strip tease to the song Eyes On Fire, that song is hot as hell!!
You have captured the characters in a way second only to SM, thank you and please please please grace us with another chapter soon.
Reviewer: HannahCullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
LOVED IT!
I hope Bella doesn't start acting weird around Edward now that she knows that he knows about The List...
Edward should keep writing in it and Bella should just pretend like she doesn't notice ;) just a thought.
I can not WAIT for the honeymoon! Gahh. :)
Keep up the great writing!!
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OK I am going to fucking die!!!
Great chapter, you totally rock, It took me all weekend to get caught up on the house and work. you should be so proud of your work and the happiness it brings.
Thank you Next chapter quick quick
Reviewer: Quartz (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
it was some serious epicness! awesome with the upsidedown blow job! total win!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I LOVE YOUUUUUUU
A LOT
A LOT LOT LOT LOT
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
awesomeness....total awesomeness! I'm so glad that you are taking this beyond the honeymoon and through her change. I love this story!!
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
HELL YEAH
THE BIO CLASS ROOM!!!!!!!
so awesome in ever way possible!!!!!
UP DATE FAST!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: amlb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Definitely epic! can't wait for you. Beautiful job!
Reviewer: Libby Michaels (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
A new chapter of "The List"? Happy 30th birthday TO ME!!
Reviewer: Helens_Love (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker. "
The hottest thing I have ever read and I have to say one of my personal fantasy's that would be on my own list should I have ever been lucky enough to be Bella for a day!tehe
You're awesome cant wait to see how this pans out!
Reviewer: Rusulka (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Sweet, sexy and freaking hilarious!! Love it. Hope the next chapter is soon
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This was indeed epicness - loved how Bella chose to speak with the family and tell them how much she loved them, in her way - and how she decided to go with all the cake flavors (well, you only live once, right!!) and then her realization that Edward had found her notebook list!! Also interesting your interpretation of what Edward would have as fantasies - perhaps he needs to start a list for Bella to work from??
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ooo, can't wait. And at least this time if she bruises they may get turned on by it cause their all kinky and stuff (kidding kidding...kind of). Edward's last fantasy made me happy. It was funny. Most of his go with her's too which is kind of awesome. The first part was awesome too. Bella is really smart with this, I love that. I really can't wait to see the honeymoon where they're prepared and seem to know how to handle it better...and are just more fun. Keep Going!!
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
OH MY! Just love what they do to each other just by reading and thinking about each other - and also the way you have described these interludes - and I caln't even begin to tell you how incredibly sexy the tattoo idea is - and how many times in the last week and a half I have thought about that and discussed it outside of fanfic!
just love this - just in case you couldn't figure that out!! :-D
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG i have to say that Bella's reaction to Edwardmessing with her list was hilarious and perfectly in character... up til she told Alice to add the cowboy hat LOL. LOVED IT!
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
omg that was actually amazing!!!
i was wondering when Bella would finally realise the addition to the list!! :)
you are an amazing writer and seriously can't wait to read the next chapter!!
xox
Reviewer: Susie Q (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Luved the NIN - want to fuck you like an animal - so hot!
This was really the BEST SEX SCENE - Edward, Aston Martin, thong panties!!!
HOT HOT HOT!
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