Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: CorruptedbyCullens89 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG! That was so hot!!! You are soo awesome, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
An amazingly powerful chapter! I'mclad Edward fianlly realized more than anything else, Bella was his pertfet match!
Thanks!
Reviewer: the_mysterious_one (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
YOU! Totally freaking rock. Haven't read much fanfic, but from what I can tell...yours is the poo!!! Keep it up...rawr!!!
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Totally rocked, I love your work.
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
One word:
HOT
Oh.My.God. I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: tscot (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow.
Nice.
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wankward.
JEALOUS Wankward.
*SIGH*
~A~
Reviewer: koketika (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You fucking rock!!! That is such an awesome chapter!!! I'm absolutely loving the twist that the story has taken. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I LOVE that Edward not only found her list but added to it. That was great. And I didn't expect him to start thinking up his own list. I love the Jacob fantasy. Great chapter, I am looking forward to the next.
Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Okay, one of, if not the hottest Twilight fanfics out there. Now, if you're still up for suggestions, How 'bout Bella and Edward playing cops and robbers and in the backseat of Charlie's cruiser? *snicker*...
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh my...oh my oh my...that was...wow. Phone sex between these two was hotter than I could have imagined, oh my badness! This story is just...wow. Loss for words here. Laura I can tell that you are partial to this Twilighted site, but honestly there are a whole host of people that are missing out on this greatness...and that pains me. My friend and I run our own site. It's an adult fan fiction site, and it has over 1000 members now (we've only been up and running for a little over month). If you are interested, check us out and make an account (just say that I am the one that told you about it so that I know which Laura Cullen is trying to join). I will gladly add you to the member list! We're Freedom Fan Fiction Writers
Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
one of the best chapters so far.. thanks so much for the chapter. You know how much when you post means to all of us. Sorry the lovely rum just won't let me be., tonight, LOVE YA LOTS, obbesseddeb
Reviewer: Loves_Twilight (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Amazing as always! I've been checking back for 20 and now going to re read it again :D
Can't WAIT for the wedding and honeymoon (eeek!). Please please please keep it going! I really looking forward to the "gift" of blood once she's changed and it's safe.....
Love ya sweetie, keep up the good work!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Rosaolie asks her to call Rose - great scene.
The biology classroom - funny and sexy!
Bella discovering "cowgirl" on the list - excutiatingly funny 9especially Alice's reaction. Great chapter
Jeanna M.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Firstly, LOVED the conversations Bella had with the family, particularly Emmett...that is exactly the conversation I would have had with him. :-)
Secondly, HO-LEE FUCK that role-playing scene was hot. I do have to say, I'm looking forward to the "vampire" role-play, whenever that may come about.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: kmap111 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
WOW...ONCE AGAIN...IT BLEW ME AWAY
We need to see more...and soon
Reviewer: ciao_ama (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
So great!!!!!! I love it, i hope you continue FOREVER!!!!!
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
uhhh........not sure I've regained the ability to speak yet, but.....holy hot. I wasn't even particularly looking forward to the lab-table, but it's one of my favorites now. I love that Edward is into the vampire-related fantasies. ROLE PLAYING VAMPIRE!!! And also - may I say that Edward's "possessive" fantasy and Bella's voyeur would fit nicely (I hate Jacob - I can't help it). Jacob wouldn't actually have to SEE (in fact - he probably shouldn't), just as long as he somehow knew what was going on and suffered for it....bwahahaha. I'm done being evil. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Reviewer: Jillian Huddleston (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Awesome!! Awesome!! I am tickled that Edward has a list!! maybe one of the hottest things I have ever read! haha! Cant wait til the wedding and honeymoon!! Great writing! Keep it up!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
yea! little happy dance at the new chapters! so happy there will be more! especially liked the inclusion of edwards "list".
thank you! more please!
Reviewer: poodleann04 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Love that Bella found out about Edward's entry into the notebook! And I'm glad she didn't freak too terribly badly!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
yea! little happy dance at the new chapters! so happy there will be more! especially liked the inclusion of edwards "list".
thank you! more please!
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"It was your easy acceptance of me, of all of us, and your love for Edward, that was so miraculous. Edward has always held a special place in my heart, and you healed him, Bella. And I can't tell you what that means to me. To all of us."
Oh Alice. This is a big reason of why we love her. She loved Bella from the start, perhaps even before Edward did - or at least before he realized it. And yet, Alice was always integral in helping Bella to realize just why she is important to all of the Cullens. Beautifully written.
"You're the only one who never blamed me for that day. It's not that the others didn't understand, but they couldn't help but be upset at me at least sometimes. But, not you, I've never once felt it from you. Just, I wanted to say thank you. I find that astonishing. It's just so...you."
That entire conversation was so touching and well written. Jasper's gratitude for the pain Bella's presence in Edward's life had eased within him? It makes so much sense when it's written out that how was is blinded overlooked before. I loved all the conversations with the Cullen's as each and every one brought even more understanding of the true acceptance on both sides and how much love is really in this family. Even Rose. You made me actually like Rose. Amazing. *snicker*
As for Edward and Bella's lab adventure? I have to say, and I honestly can't believe I'm typing this out, my first time EVER was in a classroom. If it had been even a miniscule fraction of what I read in this chapter? Well, let's just say it wouldn't be an experience I have forever regretted. I loved Edward's restraint while still trying to fulfill Bella's fantasies, but even more than that - I adored the fact that he brought out the original lemonade top. His first little momento. Talk about a declaration. Awesome.
I was screaming so loud when she added more items to her list without realizing something was there that hadn't been before. Her shock and discovery was hysterical and I was amazed at the amount of relief I felt when it finally did dawn on her. I can't wait to read Edward's face when she struts out in a cowboy hat. ;)
~Lisa
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
All I can muster right now is this:
YOU ARE FUCKING AMAZING
I laughed. I cried. I jumped my boyfriend. Epic.
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh lala! two words for ya: SMOKING HOT! This story should come with a warning - Cold Shower Will Be Needed!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
