Love, love, love this chapter!! The lab table--so hot! And she noticed he added something to the list--so funny! Can't wait to read more. :)

Loved it, loved it, loved it!  I really like that she is 1. taking the time to thank his family.  They really have been so accepting of her and all her failings 2. getting into the wedding - what girl doesn't dream about it a little bit? 3.  getting into the spirit of the list with Edward - hopefully his addition to the list will be a good starting point for Bella to include Edward.  It's a great first step into their lives together and sharing of their fantasies with each other!

Way HOT!!!

I liked it. I especially liked the part where Bella decided to get all 3 kinds of cake. I don't see SM's Bella doing that, and that part of her always annoyed me a little bit. I really like your Bella.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

This was the perfect mix of sweet and smut. :) Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while...but I've been reading!!

I actually cried when reading Bella's moments with the Cullens. 

The lab table was goooooood, and I now wish I had taken advantage of being a bio major for 2 years in college.  :)

~Jenn

Absolutely excellent. I really am impressed. I love how you mix the tender, loving moments we all fell in love with AND the awesome sexitime moments we were longing for in the book together... brilliant. HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER- I'm DYING ova heah!!!

You always leave me wordless. And wet. So thank you for that. Is it cliche to say that it was fucking beautiful? Mmm.

 

~Mia

Where to start? I absolutely love the conversations with each family member. That is quite possibly the sweetest thing in this entire story. I love the fact that everyone is so "in" to the wedding at this point. Great scene with the olive branch extension to Rose.

Now, what to say about the lab table. HOLY FUCKING SHIT BATMAN! I love the fact that Edward acted just like a 17 year old boy when he realized the position they would be in. His astonishment that he would actually have to fuck her mouth was sexy and hysterical at the same moment. But his internal dirty talk, ex. "Bite my cock", all but did me in. My husband has no idea why I attacked him but he is sincerely grateful. The role play--masterful. I promise, Edward can be my school master any day of the week.

I cannot wait to see what you do with the actual honeymoon. I would love to see more of Edward's fantasies. It seems our boy has a bit of a preoccupation with going at it from behind. By the way, his last fantasy with Jake watching--I snorted so loudly that I managed to shoot Mt. Dew out of my nose. Thanks for that by the way.

Any way, my dear, you have built quite the stage for your honeymoon performances. The non-fucking so far has been ridiculously hot and erotic. Have no fear, don't back down and don't stress. I know you'll do a fabulous job. Everything you have done for us (well, technically, for E & B) has been perfection. Your honeymoon will be nothing less, I'm sure.

PS-Is there any way we might get to see our "Dom" Edward. His fantasy about binding Bella----fuck me running. I am already a willing sub to him, but your visual nearly killed me.

Love the story, glad you're continuing throught the wedding!

Ahhh.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  Is it the honeymoon already?  Haha.

I got tears in my eye's when Bella had them when talking to jasper...wonderfully written. So emotional! And the lab table i never imagined like that just...WOW.

can't wait until they get to let everything go.

 

Hey Laura

You fucking rock!!  I have just read all 20 chapters in 24 hrs and apart from how incredibly HOT it is (and the subtle rpattz details eg.  moles on the side of his neck - EXCELLENT touch BTW), the writing is just fucking great!  You write so damn well - the characters all have their own voice and style and I have loved the couple of alternate POV's (eg Jasper and Emmett - more Jazz please - he's hot).

I am slightly pissed off of course that chapter 21 is not up yet, but hey, I'm sure good things come to those of us who will be waiting....breathlessy...for the next installment.

Keep up the amazing work - I will be following this story RELIGIOUSLY!  (BTW your sex scenes are INCREDIBLE!  Your boyfriend/husband/girlfriend/fuck buddies are VERY lucky people!!)

Many props and respect,

KiyaRaven xx

 

 

 

Everything about this story is epic win. mmm.  I'm so totally out of coherent thoughts.  #8 was everything a girl could hope for and then some.  Can't wait to see the wedding. ;)