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Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great chapter! Love that Edward has his own list!
Reviewer: sharonvaughn (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love this story! Definently my favorite!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
good golly, that was ummm......hottttt!!!
Reviewer: Ellwood1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
what can I say about your list? You are a saucy little minx and I love it! I can't wait for more. My BF and I are waiting with anticipation of where you are taking us ( Bella and Edward included)...Love the fact that you brought in Alice as a cohort. You have given Edward a voice to express himself through their physical relationship and given him a way to express his humanity....something that needed to be explored. Thanks for that. True Twilight fan but mostly love this site to see how other interpret the charaacters and you do it sooo well. Please keep it coming or should I say keep "us" coming ;)
Reviewer: bdblovesme (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i wish your story was the actual published version, this is awesome
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I've been reading this story for about the last 2 hours, and I'm only half-way through. I felt it was appropriate to stop and give you a little review.
Holy moley, this story is incredible. I'm so hooked (obviously since I've been reading it for the last 2 hours), I can't stop reading it. It was recomended on one of the threads I hang out on, and lord, I'm so glad it was! You are an incredible writer.
Weeelllll.. off to read more!
Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Oh wow, that was such a mixture of things...but wonderful is the first thing coming to mind because of the ending. I just love this story...and not because of the great fooling around!
I'll admit, when I was first reading the last chapter, I was worried about Bella's intentions with her cycle. The thought of him doing what she wanted grossed me out...then I start reading...and OMG! It was HOT...really REALLY HOT! :-O Then I get onto this chapter and Edwards ability to berrate himself to death is just too overpowering. I was getting sad, and wanted my feelings to change. Then I keep reading, and you obliged. I am so thankful for such a great chapter. I'm enjoying this too much!
Okay, on to the next chapter!
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Thank you, thank you for the satisfyingly long chapter! So hot, and so sweet.
Love Bella's loving moments with all of the Cullens. And the interlude in the lab!
And I have to apologize for doubting you: I was thinking you forgot that Edward had written in a list item. But I should've known better!
Still loving this story!
Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
loved it cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: harmonyrenesmee1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I wasn't to sure about this..
but......
THIS CHAPER WAS FUCKING PHENOMENAL
HOLY HELL.
I mean, the other chapters were amazing as well - but seriously.. THIS CHAPTER... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...... 15 is my new favorite number - unless the higher number are better - in which, I will literally melt into a puddle - I've seriously been trying to avoid that.
Believe me, it's harder then you think - lol.
Anyway - fantastic as usual.
Off to read the next one.
Reviewer: Mace (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ha ha ha ha ha! Yes!
Hi, I'm a late-to-the-"The List"-table reader from the Perv Pack's site... (love those ladies) and all I can say is my fiance (we're getting married in a month!) has had to work double-time to keep up with my appetite for list-making as a direct result of this story! Woo-freakin-HOO!
Things I love: You are not afraid of describing blood-play. They're vampires for God's sake! I've been waiting to read a good fic with this obvious issue. You did it very tastefully (no pun intended...). Your Emmett unanimously hilarious! Whenever he's written about I just start laughing! You're dirty talking isn't over the top and keeps in cannon where possbile. I love it... Edward saying "Fuck" gets me going every time! While this story is def. a teaser, it's done to a degree that allows your readers some *relief* while anticipating your next update. Speaking of...
Can't say enough good things about this fic one! I have my own little group of recently initiated to the fanfic world and I'm def. rec'ing this to them!
Thanks!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
First, my hubby says Thank you! Second I love it! The Biology Lab love scene was incredible and it was hard to look at the labs at school and not smile. I'll be honest I read up to the end of Edward's POV after they left the school and then went to bed last night :0) I love the fact that Bella knows that Edward knows about the list and he has his own. What about Cullen's dining room table - nobody really eats on it :) I've always thought about it, but I worry that the table could break.
Reviewer: alice022 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ths was so good hence y i only eaving a review now but wow it was just amazing :) hurry up and write more xx
is there any way i can set something which tells me when u add to the story
Reviewer: alice022 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ths was so good hence y i only eaving a review now but wow it was just amazing :) hurry up and write more xx
is there any way i can set something which tells me when u add to the story
Reviewer: Anitamichichi21 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hahahahaa!! I loved the whole Jacob watching and Edward mouthing 'mine' fucker. Hahahaha! I loved it!!! I really can't wait for the next one. Just an FYI, I can't read your chapters until I am home...and locked away in my room because it's just too much to bare while at work.
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
okay so the blood was an evil devious touch.. but totally worth it...
Reviewer: Sk3tch (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I couldn't stop reading it. And that's good because I*'m @ work. lol
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
okay, so now all I want for christmas is Robert Pattinson & a piano in my living room.. and some hot steamy... Oh right.. sorry.. lol forgot where I was for a second.. you know he's kinky crazy like that.. oh... right stop.. lol =)
You are THE master... lol That was just HOT. I can only imagine the look on my face as I was reading because my guy blantantly asked me "What the hell are you reading?" LOL
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I can't stop laughing about Edward's little fantasy of Jacob seeing them together. Brilliant!
Reviewer: Traxcee (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
MORE PLEASE...I CAN'T WAIT.....MMMMMMMmmmmmmmm.....UUUUUuuuunnnnnnhhhhhh!!!
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I litteraly can't wait to read your next chapter!! Great work! Continue!!
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wow, almost makes me wish Bella would of thought to install a mini-cam in the shower.. ;) Oh bad thoughts.. wait.. I can't help it.. he just does that to me..
Reviewer: Traxcee (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Fucking Brilliant!!!
Reviewer: bms9248 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love Alice & Bella giggling like schoolgirls. The lab table scene was hot! I thnk you could even add one or two of them into the wedding travel too.....Mile high club anyone :-)
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow.. i'm going to leave it at that..
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