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Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Another awesome chapter! I'm guessing Carlisle knows that Emmett knows about the cards now?
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Little bit yucky, but you didn't go into detail so it was fine.
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Whoever created mobile phones is a genius. Em's never gonna let Bella forget this, is he?
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I'll never talk about Edward's piano playing skills in the same way ever again. Awespme chapter!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Genius chapter. The wax was an amazing idea! :)
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I loved those games. I think I should re evaluate how I play truth or dare. Another great chapter!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
The Aston martin? Geez, Edward really wasn't thinking. Well, not with his brain anyway. Great chapter!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Awesome chapter! Why do I get the feeling that Edward took the bikini panties?
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
An Edward in charge is a hot, sexy Edward! He so unwilling but willin at the same time...so in character.
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Loved the Jalice scene. Bella would be so embaressed if Alice actually thanked her. A wet Edward definitley deserves a review. The panties idea was awesome!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Verbal foreplay rocks. lol. I love how Bella gets nervous and excited at the same time while adding things to the list.
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Again, you had me laughing with the interaction between Alice and Bella, and Emmett and Bella. That girl really has ovaries of steel. How is it possible that you can have such a great mixture of genres in one chapter? You're an amazing writer. :)
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Oh my God, I laughed so hard at the last line. Bella seemed so awkward in this chapter. It was just right, especially when she realised he was being dense on propose. You write the characters really well, and the interaction between them all is awesome!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wow. This is such an original idea! I can't wait to read the rest. Bella seems so naive, but I don't know...informed? at the same time. Well done!
Reviewer: foxybaker (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Whew... I am going to take a break now after that exhausting chapter. So good!!!
Reviewer: foxybaker (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OMG!!! I really don't have any other words for you. I absolutely loved this and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
HA! freakin fantastic and if there WERE any typos - I didn't spot them!!! tooooooooooooo busy concentrating! ;D x x x
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I placed my pointer finger - sorry!!! stickler again - do you not say 'index' finger??? x x
otherwise fan-blooming-tastic ;D x x
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
EXCELLENT!!! x x
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
IM REALL SORRY!!! couple of typos :( I'm a real stickler
My siblings road in Rosalie’s M3 (RODE)
Then she drug her hand around the front of my hip (The past tense of drag is actually dragged)
still enjoyed it tho!!!
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
;D like it lots ;D x
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
My reading is getting faster and faster!!
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wet Edward DEFINATELY deserves a review - its what we've all been waiting for - and it was WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!! thankyou thankyou thankyou x
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
ok - lady - I take back what I said at the first chapter - I now see why you're recommended!!!! x x x well done - its brilliant!
Reviewer: mumofsix (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
errr - hang on - I'll just ummm........ *ahem* - very good ;D x x x x
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