Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction

Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!

Reviews For The List

Reviewer: tiger1406 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Awesome story! I had to read this in one sitting and could not tear myself away. I have officially been sucked into the fanfic vortex. When do you think you will update? Please let it be soon. Can't wait and thanks so much! :-)

Reviewer: sc4536 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Oh My God!

I love this! I've been sat reading this for hours and I can't seem to tear myself away (unlike Edward with Bella's panties! So hot!

I can't wait for the wedding though! eeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm so excited to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: Bouqui (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This chapter was GREAT ! I just love this story, I'll say it again and again.

Thanks. Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

once again purely amazing

Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

lol, you can count on Alice to ruin in the moment or save the day. Looks like she save Bella from farther embarassment on this occasion. :0

Reviewer: ElectricEvie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Noooooooo! How dare you get all saucy and then cut it off! Not fair!

But again, an amazing chapter. So many raw emotions, I actually nearly cried at the beginning, the talk with Alice when Bella thanked her. How I long for a sister like Alice.

Update soon, please :D

Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control

OH MY WORD!!!! I need a cold shower or I need to call my husband home from work!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

ROTFL O.O omg... i didn't think Bella could do such a thing... never thought that could be a possibility lol halarious tho... well at least to me... never thought of her that desprate it makes her more human... it's awesome! love it!

Reviewer: tahliaa hale (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

omg!!!

you need to update soon plz plz plz plz

i cant handle it !!!

Reviewer: Amanda_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This is absolutely amazing!!! More...Please?!

Reviewer: eitak671 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I just about peed my pants in excitement over the lab table scene. SO GOOD. And I won't lie.... Bella's talks with each of the Cullens made me a little misty-eyed.

This story just makes me so happy. I really wouldn't have any problem with it going on forever. ;)

PS.. "Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker." This part made me laugh ridiculously hard and loud for 3:45 in the morning.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

It was just that -epic! I am so excited for what this story has like turned out to be! Wow, you rock. Update soon! I can't wait to see their wedding and honeymoon.

Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Okay Edward's fantasy of being caught in the act by Jacob is getting a lot of play on the reviews but, really, the one I want SO BAD is against his bedroom door. That would be HOT. And way more plausible...

Reviewer: kiwicullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Bring on #40!!! :)

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

*shakes head* Hmmmmmm methinks you may have to write up Edward's List. for a compare and contrast. Loved how their "practice" has loosened Edward up a bit. I adored how you were able to get number 8 fulfilled. It was perfect. I can't wait for the wedding and honeymoon.

Truthfully, in the books, I think they really should've "practiced" a little, cause I think by knowing what to expect, Edward would have an idea on what to expect and how to channel his excesss energy. The whole thing about hia self loathing regarding her bruises the following morning was completely avoidable.

Reviewer: bioqueen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

ok so just started reading this last night and just got to the end. Let me tell you WOW!!! I think I enjoyed this a little too much..ok not really! So many things about it that I loved I will only comment on the last chapter. That bit about Jacon seeing them against the tree. GENIUS!!! Can you make that happen? LOL!!! Love it. Can't wait for after the wedding. Keep up the awesomeness coming! (oops, pun intended ;-D )

Reviewer: starfish_fairy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

OH MY GOD!!! I LOVED that! I kinda like possessive Edward, it's HOT. Keep it up , girl. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

crap! I forgot to mention the whole "mole licking" scenario had me laughing my ass off and I literally choked on a Twizzler stick.. My guy had to slap my back to get me to cough it out..
When he asked what was so damn funny to make me nearly choke myself to death from laughter I simply replied "Oh just some good ole hilarious erotic reading!", he nearly lost it.. (he knew then what I was reading earlier in the evening when I apparently had this "look" on my face that peaked his curiousity as to why I was so engrossed.. lol)
You are truly amazing! =)
Had to share the info.. ha!

Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

It was truly EPIC!!!!! and in the words of Bella.. "Holy Crow"!
I sat here and read this GLORIOUS creation of your's all day..
now that I have gone through a bag of Twizzlers, half a pack of cigarettes, and did the oh so shameful changing of the panties..(OVER SHARE! SORRY!)
I'm done for the day.. I'm so sad.. I can't wait to read more!!!
Or should I say.. Fuck Yes, moremoremoremoremore! =)
You are a genious!

Reviewer: Twiggy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Arggggghhhhh....I love this story! I swear to God my husband will not know what hit him in a about 2 minutes....night!

p.s. - Please post soon...

Reviewer: tamalady (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Anxiously awaiting the next one!

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans

I had to review again. I can’t stop reading it.

The way you portray Edwards inner turmoil of wanting to release his inner animal, but yet remain a gentleman, is exceptional. I think it portrays something a lot of people go through when they are first exploring the limits with someone. You think you’re supposed to be a certain way but you want to be another way. All the while, worried about how the other person will receive the taboo ways that you are acting.

I’m in love with this story. It’s incredible.

Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Great chapter! Love that Edward has his own list!

Reviewer: sharonvaughn (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I love this story! Definently my favorite!

Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

good golly, that was ummm......hottttt!!!

[Previous] 379 380 381 382 383 384 385 386 387 388 389 390 391 392 393 394 395 396 397 398 399 400 401 402 403 404 405 406 407 408 409 410 411 412 413 414 415 416 417 418 419 420 421 422 423 424 425 426 427 428 429 430 431 432 433 434 435 436 437 438 439 440 441 442 443 444 445 446 447 448 449 450 451 452 453 454 455 456 457 458 459 460 461 462 463 464 465 466 467 468 469 470 471 472 473 474 475 476 477 478 [Next]

Submit a Review

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.